Originally posted by: indi52
first os
durga,
you have created just the life we all want for them... thanks so much. beautiful story. i really liked that second anniversary twist at the end. and him sitting on her scooter taking her for that ride. her arms must have gone toght around him, and just to keep her hot and close to him he must have taken the longest route to sheeshmahal.
the "shhh" had my heart racing. he has not changed, not really, not essentially ufff. 😆 congratulations on winning. and please do keep writing from time to time.
Indi, there you are finally. 😃 You were the first person to whom I hinted about an OS and you finally managed to read them. I am happy. Thank you. 😳
Oh, yes that scooter ride. Wanted to write some more lines on 'why on a scooter'. Something which he couldn't do in Delhi because he was ASR and everyone knew him. Here, he could explore that feeling. But, the OS was supposed to be within 1000 words, so I didn't do any explaining.
I see you are flying away with them on the scooter. 😉 😆. You can use this idea in your story, you surely can make it a most amazing ride. 😳 I've always loved that 'Shhh...' Had to use it. 😳 I am glad you liked the story. Thank you. 😃
Indi, I repeat. I did not win. I only came fourth. 😊
Edited by DurgaS - 12 years ago
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