My first OSs - Memories & Once More - from OS contest - Note Pg4 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani


Very cute one Durgey!! I LOVE how both of your OS you have Arnav celebrating this 2nd anniversary with Khushi, and making it special for her. he really is mush inside. Also love yourr concept about NK and Ananya falling for each other the same date :) also nice that you've decided to pretty much continue where the show left off, it just flows. thanks for both of you OSs!! ur a woman of many talents!👏👏

Thanks again, Ami. Since it was an anniversary special contest, I had the celebrations in both the stories. Of course, it was not compulsory, just my choice. 😳 NK is such an intelligent, helpful and good natured guy. He deserved his own love story. Also, I didn't like him sitting idle in the show. So, I sent him back to help his Dad in the 1st story. Really, the character had so much potential, so were the other characters too. It is easier continuing from the set up that was already shown. Less explaining to do. 😉 Ya, one of my talents is to be extremely lazy sometimes. 😆
Edited by DurgaS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: indi52

first os

durga,
you have created just the life we all want for them... thanks so much. beautiful story. i really liked that second anniversary twist at the end. and him sitting on her scooter taking her for that ride. her arms must have gone toght around him, and just to keep her hot and close to him he must have taken the longest route to sheeshmahal.

the "shhh" had my heart racing. he has not changed, not really, not essentially ufff. 😆 congratulations on winning. and please do keep writing from time to time.

Indi, there you are finally. 😃 You were the first person to whom I hinted about an OS and you finally managed to read them. I am happy. Thank you. 😳
Oh, yes that scooter ride. Wanted to write some more lines on 'why on a scooter'. Something which he couldn't do in Delhi because he was ASR and everyone knew him. Here, he could explore that feeling. But, the OS was supposed to be within 1000 words, so I didn't do any explaining.
I see you are flying away with them on the scooter. 😉 😆. You can use this idea in your story, you surely can make it a most amazing ride. 😳 I've always loved that 'Shhh...' Had to use it. 😳 I am glad you liked the story. Thank you. 😃
Indi, I repeat. I did not win. I only came fourth. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: indi52

os 2.

too cute. nk and ananya? fall and catch? cousin of lavanya? awww. but i hope nk is paying asr khushi royalty for lifting their style of romance. copyright infringement other wise.

hey durga, love you short pieces, try a longer one soon?

i noticed a special thanks to jakhushi, one of my crooner friends, she si a real doll and writes really fun stuff, adroit and intelligent. was good to know she read and liked you, my new pal/partner in crime's work.

Ha, ha. Royalty? Not a bad idea. And he is copying their anniversary too. 😆 Long ones Indi? Don't know. But, will surely give it a thought. Thanks for the support and encouragement always. 🤗
Oh, jakhushi is your crooner friend? She made me really happy. Because, along with Kate she voted for me on 29th. Actually, she gave a vote for 'Memories' and added that she found 'Once More' adorable. Her post was the first thing I saw that morning. I was really elated. 😃
Partner in crime? 😆 Ya, I am. Not letting anyone off the hook so easily. Working some way or the other to keep everyone from escaping. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chalhov

And then, when I came here, I remembered our first meeting. That was the day you had entered my life and my thoughts. That moment became the biggest memory of my life. And I will never ever forget that. Happy Anniversary Khushi, exactly two years back on this day I found my life, you.'

Lovely closure and happy anniversary story Durga beauuutiful amazing

Thank you Chalhov. I am happy you liked it. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Thanks. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

What the!😡 Ofcourse you ARE writing your next story Durgey🤗! I thought it was taken for granted! 😕
So, post it asap! What are you waiting for! Unbelievable!😡


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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: wiwy


What the!😡 Ofcourse you ARE writing your next story Durgey🤗! I thought it was taken for granted! 😕
So, post it asap! What are you waiting for! Unbelievable!😡


Waiting to crack a riddle (gave my first answer, just check), complete few incomplete poems, go thru some pending reviews, etc, etc, etc. 😃 Will surely write one, Wiwy. Gimme some time. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dearest Durga,

Just beautiful. I am so proud of you dear! Keep on writing and I will keep on reading!
👏

Love, Cyn
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

Dearest Durga,


Just beautiful. I am so proud of you dear! Keep on writing and I will keep on reading!
👏

Love, Cyn

Cynthia, 🤗 missed you so so much. So glad to see you here. 😃 Thank you for loving my writings. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you. 😊

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