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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Durga both the os were just amazing
beautiful piece of writing by you
keep writing more os
inform me whenever u write more os

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: DurgaS

My second OS entry

Entry #10

Once More

As NK was nearing Arnav's room, he heard typing sounds from the laptop and thought that it must be Arnav.But, he was surprised. In front of him was Khushi, with a Bluetooth in her ear and busy typing. 'Khushi jeee?!!' exclaimed NK. Khushi looked up to see a surprised NK with his mouth half open.

'Nanheji, when did you come? I thought you were coming next month?'

'Yes, I was. But, I thought of giving you all a surprise and here I am. But, instead you've given me a surprise! What is with you, the laptop and Bluetooth? And where are Nannav and Aarav?'

Hearing that Khushi laughed and said,'Aarav has gone on a school trip. You know that Arnavji has made me incharge of the Indian wear section. Well, all this is related to that. Arnavji left very early today morning. I've been trying to call him, but his phone is switched off. Anyway, I am leaving for office in some time. I will meet him and tell him that you've come. By the way, how was your journey?And did you meet the others?'

'Yes Khushiji, I came up after meeting everyone. The journey was fine. But, at the airport I had a tiff with this girl. She thought I purposely bumped into her and started accusing me for no fault of mine. I had a hard time coming out of that situation.'

'Really Nanheji, you are sure you weren't flirting with her?' winked Khushi

'No Khushiji', pleaded NK.

Meanwhile, they heard some sounds from the hall. Khushi immediately concluded, 'Oh, she must be here.'

'Who?' asked NK and followed Khushi to the living room. They saw Nani, Mami and Anjali welcoming a young girl who had arrived with her bags to spend some days at RM. As her back was towards them, NK couldn't see her face. But when Khushi called her out 'Ananya'' she turned around and NK immediately recognised her.

Ananya knew the voice and turning around said, 'Khushiji'.' and when she saw NK, she shouted, 'You!? How dare you follow me up to here. Do you know, Khushiji, this guy has been chasing me from the airport' she complained.

Hearing this, everybody except NK, broke into a laughter. Mami explained, 'Ananya, this is my nephew, NK.

'Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't know' said Ananya, but a look towards NK implied that she was far from sorry and still believed that he was a flirt.

NK came near Anjali and whispered, 'Di, who is she? Is she also one of Nannav's ex-girlfriends?' NK had to get his doubt cleared as he realised that he seemed to be having a special liking for all of Arnav's girlfriends.

Anjali laughed at his doubts and explained, 'No, but she is his ex-girlfriend, Lavanya's cousin, Ananya. You know about Lavanya , right? We met Ananya at Lavanya's marriage in London and invited her to spend some time here.

Later Khushi bid goodbye to all and left for office. At the office, she asked for Arnav but was told that he had left for a meeting outside. Khushi wondered why Arnav was behaving so from morning. She hadn't talked to him all day and he was clearly avoiding her. She went into his cabin and was fiddling with his things, lost in his thoughts, when a hand suddenly covered her beautiful eyes. Khushi immediately knew whose it was. 'Arnavji, stop it. I'm angry with you. You haven't talked to me since morning and now you are doing this?'

'Why not? I love it when your nose becomes red in anger.' laughed Arnav.

'Arnavji, I am not in a mood for jokes now. Please tell me what is going on?'

'No Khushi. I won't tell you. But, I'll show you. Come.'

Arnav took Khushi to a posh restaurant. Arnav had booked a table at an exclusive corner from where they could not be visible to the rest. Khushi kept asking him the reason for this special date. Arnav asked her to be patient and gave the order for food.

'Arnavji, now I can't wait anymore. Please tell me the reason' requested Khushi.

Arnav smiled at his innocent wife, took out a gift parcel hidden under the table and gave it to her. 'Here, this is for you.' he said. Khushi looked at it wide eyed with her 'O' mouth. 'Where did this come from? That's why you left early today, to plan for all this?' asked Khushi. Arnav nodded and asked her to open it. Khushi gleamed with excitement and opened the packet. Inside was a beautiful red colour saree decorated with pearls of various sizes. -awww

'Khushi, remember the first time we met? I was very rude to you that day. I still feel very bad about it.'

'Arnavji, I know. But, why are you saying all this today?'

'Because it has been exactly two years since I met you. Happy 2nd Anniversary Khushi' smiled Arnav.

Khushi was in tears now. She couldn't believe that Arnav had remembered the date of their first meeting too.

'Of course, Khushi. Didn't I tell you? I remember each and everything about the moments I spent with you.'

Khushi smiled and hugged Arnav. After some time, they returned home from their date. When they went inside they saw Ananya and NK quarrelling again and Anjali trying to calm them down. When Anjali saw Arnav and Khushi, she asked them to talk to these two and went inside. Arnav was about to say something, when Ananya tripped over Aarav's tennis ball and was about to fall. But, NK was right there to catch her. Ananya was saved but both their eyes met and they fell for each other.

One look at them and Arnav smiled and whispered to Khushi, 'Looks like next year one more couple is going to celebrate their anniversary.' Needless to say, Arnav's prediction came true. After many fights, quarrels and patch-ups NK and Ananya celebrated their first meet anniversary next year.

-Medha-, 8Lucky88 - Thank you very much for voting for this entry. 😃
jakhushi - Thank you for the special mention for this entry. 😊


Very cute one Durgey!! I LOVE how both of your OS you have Arnav celebrating this 2nd anniversary with Khushi, and making it special for her. he really is mush inside. Also love yourr concept about NK and Ananya falling for each other the same date :) also nice that you've decided to pretty much continue where the show left off, it just flows. thanks for both of you OSs!! ur a woman of many talents!👏👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
first os

durga,
you have created just the life we all want for them... thanks so much. beautiful story. i really liked that second anniversary twist at the end. and him sitting on her scooter taking her for that ride. her arms must have gone toght around him, and just to keep her hot and close to him he must have taken the longest route to sheeshmahal.

the "shhh" had my heart racing. he has not changed, not really, not essentially ufff. 😆 congratulations on winning. and please do keep writing from time to time.

Edited by indi52 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
os 2.

too cute. nk and ananya? fall and catch? cousin of lavanya? awww. but i hope nk is paying asr khushi royalty for lifting their style of romance. copyright infringement other wise.

hey durga, love you short pieces, try a longer one soon?

i noticed a special thanks to jakhushi, one of my crooner friends, she si a real doll and writes really fun stuff, adroit and intelligent. was good to know she read and liked you, my new pal/partner in crime's work.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
And then, when I came here, I remembered our first meeting. That was the day you had entered my life and my thoughts. That moment became the biggest memory of my life. And I will never ever forget that. Happy Anniversary Khushi, exactly two years back on this day I found my life, you.'
Lovely closure and happy anniversary story Durga beauuutiful amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: arshi-sugi-ipk

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very nice 😊 loved them 😊

Thank you so much. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: RebeccaDaphne

Beautiful story Durga! You are really talented, loved reading it and I wish you write more stories! 👏

Aww, thank you Rebecca. I think I should start thinking about my next story. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Aww, thank you Rebecca. I think I should start thinking about my next story. 😳



you surely shld 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani

Durgey, this is just wonderful feel good feel happy OS. insightful as well, love how you've tied some lose ends about babu ji and Anjali...best of all love how you took them back to Sheesh Mahel. I was actually thinking when watching the first epi to write "mehsoos piece, it would've been nice if the pointed out that perhaps the biggest moment of his life happened at Sheesh Mahel...so fitting isn't it? the place that haunted him day and night give him Khushi. So seeing it here i'm jumping for joy. needed this esp after Indi's story 😆 colored my fav parts :) off to your next!

Ami, thank you for those purples and emoticons. I am glad you thoroughly enjoyed it. 😃 Ya, their story had to come back to Sheesh Mahal, isn't it? Really, so much was left in the story, enough to last atleast 2 more years. They should have gone with the seasons idea. It's our loss. 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi

Durga both the os were just amazing
beautiful piece of writing by you
keep writing more os
inform me whenever u write more os

Thank you. I surely will. Nothing in the pipeline right now. So, you will have to be patient. 😊

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