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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

This poem is a follow-up to the poem 'Akash's proposal'. I had planned on writing this, that's why I did not cover Payal's reply in that poem.
Episode 132
Payal's Rejection
Phoolon mein sajaakar, dil apna kiya haazir
Par sweekar nahin kiya, samaaj ki khatir
Phir bhi sabke saamne aapka haath maanga
Phir se inkaar kiya, mere pyaar mein rangna
Kyun beech mein aagayi samaaj ki ye deewar?
Kyun isey itna chubhta hai mera pyaar?
Ek baar samaaj ki iss deewar ko hatakar dekhti
Kya kehti tab bhi, aap mujhe pasand nahin karti?
Kaash main ameer nahin, gareeb hota
To aaj main aapke kareeb hota
Mere ohdey ki sazaa mujhko hai mili
Sab kuch hai magar, mere haath hain khaali
Translation:
I presented my heart decorating it in flowers
But didn't accept because of the society
Even then, in front of everybody, asked for your hand
Again refused to get coloured by my love
Why did this wall of society come in between?
Why does it feel pricked by my love?
Once if you removed this wall of society and saw
Would you say even then, that you didn't like me?
Wish I wasn't rich, but was poor
Then I would have been close to you
I have been sentenced for my status
Everything is there, but my hands are empty


another awesome one dear, these line below are too good. Really felt bad for him here and love how he opens up to Arnav. ❤️ this
Kaash main ameer nahin, gareeb hota
To aaj main aapke kareeb hota
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi



the guy is better...ppl lik him...nd i to had liked from before...had seen him in add...for me he is Neal Caffery's Doppleganger (lookwise)

nd the guy i m crazy abt is Damon Salvatore (Ian Somerhalder) he was bad lik evil...but i loved him since season 1...wat ASR/Barun is to you...he is to me 😳


- isn he adorable i love his eyes ❤️

2 yrs ago i had tried to sketch him...but din come out well



sorry to all the blasters...i knw this is exclusively Arshi/IPK space...i just wanted to share my obsession/love abt him with you guys 😃



ohh so this is him?? and ASR hasn't swayed you his way yet??? this guy must be good :). never watched the show but seen teasers and he seems wicked. the sketch is not bad at all, may nees slight improvement, you should give it another try! thanks for sharing!!

saw the new chhan chhan guy, he's pretty cute!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
came across this great discussion on thread 11, thought i'd post it here.

Originally posted by: aamir18

What really bothered me about this though, is that they satirized it. They made the entire situation funny, and suicide is NOT a funny subject. Someone from my high school killed himself, and seeing an empty desk where a kid had sat just a day ago is mortifying. You simply cannot make a joke out of people dying. If they were going to have Khushi commit suicide to get TRPs, they should have had the basic decency to make it a serious and even informative topic.


Sorry for barging in! I've been a silent stalker for a while and I looove these threads, and I thought to get some guts and make a comment at last. 😆


Hi Zitni, great to see you here,

I think we discussed this on another thread before too and agreed on the same.. the Khushi suicide track is to date one of my most unforgivable tracks, and i think it is b/c it was not needed first of all and b/c how carelessly the handled it with comedy irked me even more.

Indi, I"m sorry to hear about your friends daughter, I too lost a wonderful family friend years ago to suicide and seen first hand how his family has suffered. His wife remarried, gave the kids away to his side of the family so they grew up with out a dad and a mom. so the seriousness of it just can't be messed with. and yes, so happy Arnav didn't become a puddle of emotions after khushi attempt t...he lost his mother to suicide, of course Khushi didn't know that at the time but imagine him almost losing his love the same way? or worse what would've happened to him if he didn't get there in time?

Sohara, loved all you had to say and agree with all of it!! thanks for it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: viv04


Thanks for the comments. It's hard for me, but they make me pen a few.

The deprived man has found love. He wants to be the focus of attention and in the process takes her too much for granted. The ever consuming emotional investment he has made in her, he assumes she can read her heart and mind. It's clear to him how they affect each other and he expects her to reciprocate. When she doesn't he hurts and wants her to regret.

On Diwali night when she questioned her boldly she was demanding commitment and desired to do the same. The man is not comfortable in his own skin. Every time she digs into his fears and insecurities, he wants to run away from it and hurts her in defense. He ends up pushing her to the breaking point, she ends up linking with the wrong man. Yes she is right in demanding her rights. She wants to create her space and define her boundaries. She does not want to be lost in an undefined relationship, La's situation also being a burning example for her. I am reminded of the unseen promo where he says, "Khushi shut up. Hum shadi ke bina bhi rah sakte hai".

The series of confrontations where she exposes him, he hurts her and she forgives, he ends up hurting himself. In this process a layer from his facade is shed everytime. He is on a journey of self realization, acceptance and finally liberation. She finally gives in when he openly expresses himself at farmhouse. He sets himself free when he resolves his past trauma by forgiving Garima.

Unfortunately K had to bear the brunt of being the healer as there was no prior intervention. She wanted to move on, but failed to ignore the gentle wishpers of love undulating underneath the complex pain.



This was absolutely brilliant! Loved every word that you said! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani



yeah he is pretty awesome for me 😳...my IPk craziness is only a yr nd a half old...wher as for damon/vampire diaries its been since 4 yrs...

ASR - Khushi / Damon-Elena...r my topmost fav love story couple tht i'll forever cherish...they r very special to me...especially Damon's love ❤️

i knw...i shld try it once more...i want to get it right 😊

nd thanks for likin my collages 😃


take care of your health...the thread will still be here for u to come bck 🤗

Edited by supriya.arshi - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

I've been thinking so myself, Indi. What if we extend the breather for another week? Most are still quite behind. And there is so much to read, discuss, analyse, comment about. I am not saying all should reach 139 and then proceed, but atleast can try to come closer.



pink underlined... then apart from giving you many adjectives and calling you madam ji, i'd give you a this huge big hug. but, i would not like to hold up others, if consensus is we take a week off, fine... if not, happy to resume monday.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ina211



This was absolutely brilliant! Loved every word that you said! :)



Wow! This is EXCELLENT stuff...Respect, ladies!
And so much food for thought here... I see myself in these two, especially the way you guys have analyzed their ongoing battles with themselves...
Amazing writing, really.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani


Woke up to such support for my wining last night, thanks all of you🤗!!! It means alot!!! am trying to keep my priorities in order when life gets so busy😆 but i hate putting IPK off...since i know things will only get busier, i want to indulge all i can for the time being...if only life lets me.

Indi, that part in purple, you make falling behind sound so sexy! half the time its him who makes me fall behind. there always so much there, even if i want to skip writing about certain scenes, he make it to damn hard!! and not to mention the repeat watching of certain scenes thanks to his devestatingly yummy thobda... You really should write a novel about this man, can i do the edits? 😉


I vote with Durga on having another week of breather, but i also understand your point about other missing the sexy boy and jhalli girl . so it's your call. I just know i have this weekend free the rest of this month so for me it would be a BIG help...so i'm being shamelessly selfish, but its possible others feel the same as Durga and I :) lastly its your decision and we'll respect it captain

Also i'm with Indi on writing our own interpretations on the epis, for me alot of things don't hit me till i actually start to write and really get in. I feel i need to do it for myself too, to really understand what i can. so also from me, please don't feel obligated to read all of them. I'm certainly not able to read all the others too, and all of us just have to just do our best with our busy lives.



devastatingly yummy thobda... i am falling of the chair laughing... while my astral self is sighing giddily because with this boy even that sounds sexy.

he makes the word thobda groovy. gah.

ami, 😆 😆 😆 love you for that thobda.

now please explain to katelyn the nuance of that extreme word.

see i am trying to be fair to all and saying i'm ok if we start this monday, but honestly, i am in a flap. i can't skim, fly, lightly touch upon these episodes. and yes, the more i see the more i get.

confession. today while seeing 129 and 130 i actually found myself feeling a dense sadness then weeping. hardened criminal me. this was all thanks to your thobda boy... why must he act so well, why must his face say five hundred things, many contradictory all at once. schizo i tell you. and he gets me... i actually cried...for a character that does not exist. but when i am in delhi in july, am going to shantivan to make sure all is well.

uff for a week more.


ami, you edit crazily and write some deadly stuff this weekend okay okay okay?

Edited by indi52 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi

Episode 132



Arshi's First Date 😳



Episode 133

I just couldn keep my eyes off Arnav nd Khushi...Arnav was carefree...just doin watever Khushi told him to😉...nd the she kept on teasin him...❤️ was soo cute!!!


Supriya, these are gorgeous! Thanks for sharing!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: viv04


Thanks for the comments. It's hard for me, but they make me pen a few.

The deprived man has found love. He wants to be the focus of attention and in the process takes her too much for granted. The ever consuming emotional investment he has made in her, he assumes she can read her heart and mind. It's clear to him how they affect each other and he expects her to reciprocate. When she doesn't he hurts and wants her to regret.

On Diwali night when she questioned her boldly she was demanding commitment and desired to do the same. The man is not comfortable in his own skin. Every time she digs into his fears and insecurities, he wants to run away from it and hurts her in defense. He ends up pushing her to the breaking point, she ends up linking with the wrong man. Yes she is right in demanding her rights. She wants to create her space and define her boundaries. She does not want to be lost in an undefined relationship, La's situation also being a burning example for her. I am reminded of the unseen promo where he says, "Khushi shut up. Hum shadi ke bina bhi rah sakte hai".

The series of confrontations where she exposes him, he hurts her and she forgives, he ends up hurting himself. In this process a layer from his facade is shed everytime. He is on a journey of self realization, acceptance and finally liberation. She finally gives in when he openly expresses himself at farmhouse. He sets himself free when he resolves his past trauma by forgiving Garima.

Unfortunately K had to bear the brunt of being the healer as there was no prior intervention. She wanted to move on, but failed to ignore the gentle wishpers of love undulating underneath the complex pain.




hi viv, thanks to ina and isspkaur i read this again and thought i must tell you, this is abs beautifully thought through and written.

those whispers of love, ever present and beckoning below the din, that was what we all heard, and it wouldn't allow us to judge a man who was patently unfair, brutal even; yet that sweetness beneath, the endless sweetness. yes, khushi bore the brunt, but she knew what lay there and that gave her a thrill which perhaps a sane, gentle soul would never have offered. plus, my belief, khushi also needed to be touched, even hurt, like that to feel the full and utter woman in her. she helped him release and feel his feelings again... he by becoming all and only hers, somewhere gave her a sense of security... so she could reach in and feel the woman she was. no need to pretend, be good, not demand, nothing... don't change, be yourself, exercise your haq, you have that over me, he said. at last khushi found someone who was her own, a certain fufillment in that.

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