Vignettes - 6. Understanding Payal - Transln pg 3

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adithyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

wow...nobody explored payal's charecter ,usually...loved it...

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AparnaRenu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Thank you all for your comments...it made my day! 😊

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mdeshpande

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...loved today's OS. u rock lady..keep them coming...who's next...anjali/nk???

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samba12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Lovely OS.

Enjoyed your depiction of Payal and the surprising bond between her and Arnav.

Both are perceptive of their own and their spouses' needs. Both are strong and supportive.

Delightful.

Looking forward to more vignettes in this series.

Support your notion of keeping the vignettes separate - OSs - rather than part of pne long SS. Allows you the freedom to experiment and write without being constrained by a timeline or other kind of structure.

Thanks,

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anannya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

loved their conversation and looking forward to next updates. plz pm me dear

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abby2181

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I like your take on the Arnav-Payal relationship. I too thought that there was tremendous unexplored potential there. You created a good scenario.

Waiting to read more of your work.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

that is true the two of them are pretty alike right
akash and khushi they keep their sorrows to themselves but are always ready to distribute their happiness with others
aww now this is what we needed to see arnav and payal bonding
after all they are the siblings of two lovely ppl and they too should interact more
and am glad you made that happen
hmmm even payal and arnav are like a brother and sister duo right
am glad we will see more os from you

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Anita Malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

You know I had always wished we had seen more of Payal and Arnav's interaction during the show, but hey, at least we got to live it through your SS. I loved it.

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lala rukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

loved all the six parts...very nice❤️👏

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abavi

@abavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

I absolutely loved this one... simply put- I couldnt stop reading it again and again... coming to think of it... Payal could have been a very strong character... if they had used her appropriately- there was so much to explore in Akaash and Payal story and sadly the CVs left it untouched expect for the initial days...

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