Vignettes - 6. Understanding Payal - Transln pg 3

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kirti98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

it is so different. arnava and payal point of view - similar view about their spouses. well written. as always looking forward for more😉

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sankadevi30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

so happy to see payal .cool character. I read all ur Os in one shot after reading frequent flyer. I am feeling so happy from inside after long time. thank u
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AparnaRenu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: abavi
I absolutely loved this one... simply put- I couldnt stop reading it again and again... coming to think of it... Payal could have been a very strong character... if they had used her appropriately- there was so much to explore in Akaash and Payal story and sadly the CVs left it untouched expect for the initial days...

😊 thank you!

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ashwathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awesome part..Loved it..very well written..Payal and Arnav characters r smewhat same...very supportive for their siblings

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Hey ...

That was so good :)

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Aruni.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

So cute... Your OS are so wonderful... some of them were exactly how i have imagined them to be, specially about Arnav and Khushi's relationship, details on Payal and Akash etc. So happy to find someone who could word it so well!

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

It's really nice to understand Payal..Now I am liking her even more..

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golpokobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I know it's too late to comment on this os. But as I read it just now I can't resist.
I don't know how the show survived so long. Characters like payel being so underutilized. They never thought coherently.
thanks for bringing arnav and her in such a thoughtful scene. It was beautifully written.
Beautiful

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ForLoveofBarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

What a lovely piece of writing. I always felt the connection between Arnav and Payal. Arnav's subtle respect even sdmiration for Payal, especially when she turned down Akash in a coffee shop.

Another relationship which did not get much justice I felt was the silent approval that Shashi ji had for Arnav, even a certain fondness and love.

Well written. Thank you!👏