OS Series - Vignettes - Part 5. Ahem!

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I loved all the OSs of this series- all the 5, I like you style, lot of banter between the couple, subtle romance, dialogues which lets the reader imagine rather than describing it deeply- Totally loved it!

looking forward to read more from you...

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Poor Akash!

He must be constipated trying to keep his frustration in check!

Loved the satire :)

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

at least our akash bhai got some importance in your OS, it was really good. Really revisiting all those beautiful moments with IPK.

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

LOL!!! This was awesome!!! Made me crack up!!!

Nicely done!!

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

very nicely written! yes off the beat but loved reading it👍🏼!

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awww
poor AKASH
he needs to take lessons from brother for lot of things!!
i have sent you a buddy request
please accept it and PM the future updates

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

👍🏼 Quite something...REFRESHING really!! never read anything frm Akash'a POV...very good...and the SPIRT made u write it..AHEM!! 😉

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

aww poor akash
dude you need some of that arrogance that your brother has
you make it too easy for them to tease you
arrey kuch kariye bhai warna rm waasi aapko apni patni ke saath romance karne ka mauka bhi naa de