Crooner 1.42 : Jab tak hai Jaan - Note pg 57 - Page 14

updated mine on Pg 17😊

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

Finally updated on page 2 after several tries since friday...

Gandhari!

That was a beautifully written take.

A Landmark episode indeed .. Waiting for SR after the wedding would have been an injustice to this incredible love story .. I am so thankful. 😊

"Their love has only one predicted path, a path of human unpredictability." Brilliantly put ..

"plethora of raw emotions, uninhibited attraction, a touch of shyness and overflowing love. " I doubt if their union could have been described with any better words.

A drop of love .. A drop of tears .. Boondey! Har bar .. Hamesha .. What else do we need to define their true love?

You have described their journey to their first kiss beautifully .. I relived the moment once again. "Poetry in motion" - you have quite worded what I failed to give any word at all. That kiss was so wonderfully done .. a perfect balance of love & desire .. It was worth the wait, wasn't it? 😊

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Gandhari!

That was a beautifully written take.

A Landmark episode indeed .. Waiting for SR after the wedding would have been an injustice to this incredible love story .. I am so thankful. 😊

"Their love has only one predicted path, a path of human unpredictability." Brilliantly put ..

"plethora of raw emotions, uninhibited attraction, a touch of shyness and overflowing love. " I doubt if their union could have been described with any better words.

A drop of love .. A drop of tears .. Boondey! Har bar .. Hamesha .. What else do we need to define their true love?

You have described their journey to their first kiss beautifully .. I relived the moment once again. "Poetry in motion" - you have quite worded what I failed to give any word at all. That kiss was so wonderfully done .. a perfect balance of love & desire .. It was worth the wait, wasn't it? 😊

Thank you Farah! I needed to hear from someone that I made sense...and to get it from someone like you my dear , someone who writes so brilliantly everytime...just made my day!
Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: riti4u

updated mine on Pg 17😊

" All I want is - Love to win in the end..."

That is all we want .. I am sure you spoke on our behalf. Loved your post .. I have not replied to Priya yet for the same reason .. I want to read her take at least one more time .. She did a fabolous job. 😊

Originally posted by: soni.b

updated my comment on pg1!!!<div></div>not much of a read though!!!

Soni!!

".what matters was the complete submission, body, soul and mind of two people absolutely in love with each other...the expression of their fears, longings and desires"-could not agree more! Beautifully put. 😊

Overdressed Barun .. 😆 .. They must be scared if we faint seeing his biceps & miss what follows! Or may be it is because of the kidnapping time vest overdose! 😆

Priya Di...Beautifuuul Crooner...Jus lik the epi which we gt to c...🤗🤗

Thanks farah🤗..will look fwd to your take soon...

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

It was Beautiful .. whatever it was. An picturesque episode that kept my brains shut for hours .. I have not experienced that in a long, long time.

I have thought for a long time on how to write on this episode. And I have finally given in. I do not think I can do enough justice to whatever I saw & felt .. so I am just going to do a simple take - just some random words.

At some other point of time ..

"Aaap bahut ajeeb ho," she said.

"Ajeeb hain ye," he said.

On Friday night ..

"Hum dono..," she initiates.

"..Kitne ajeeb Hain," he completes.

And there completes my perfect story of the two imperfect lovers ' flawed & weird in their own ways but perfect & complete in love. I saw them coming full circle in so many ways on the night before their wedding, their supposed "last" day of freedom that they spent together.

"Aap per sirf humara haq hai" ' how I loved Khushi for finally claiming her right over him. How many times has he told her she has her "huq" over him? How many times has she not responded? And finally she does. He is only hers .. just as he wants to be hers too.

"Love can reduce anyone to anything" - Arnav set the tone the previous night, Khushi reciprocated on the night following. He set aside everything else and became her Salman Khan for a minute. She set aside everything else & became his Ladylove in all means. Another day, in Purple Orchid, dressed in black, she tried to do something for him ' to reciprocate everything he was doing for her. Finally, again dressed in black, she finally did something for him ' a promise never to be apart, a promise sealed with a kiss.

"Main tumhare bina nehi ji paoonga" ' finally he completed what he told her during their "ajeeb" connection. "I don't need anything else, Khushi" ' he said he only needed her & he expressed the depth of that need today ' he simply cannot live without her.

I loved how Khushi stared at her own hands in utter disbelief ' she was about to grab NK by his neck! Love reduces .. it does. 😊

It was interesting to see how nervous Khushi was as Arnav led her to show something. She was so aware of the surroundings as he closed the door; she was so aware of herself as he made her lie down ' her head over his arms. She tried to settle down ' her shakiness evident in her body language. And the moment the stars start shining, everything vanishes. How could he think of something so dreamy? The answer made her let her guards down, not his words but the reason behind those words ' he did not think of it, he felt .. a man in love.

I loved how the stars allowed them their little privacy .. They blessed them, they let them talk about their "true love" and they left them in their privacy to find each other .. Loved those little touches .. her mark on his cheek, his no effort to conceal his desire but to restrain only because of her, her spontaneous hug, his emotions at her loving caresses ..

They may have made out or made love or indulge in something in between ' whatever it was, for me, their union is complete. They have said the unsaid, they have claimed their rights, they have promised, they have sealed their promise .. they have become one.

"Nafraat pas aane naa de, mohabbat door jaane naa de" ' all along I thought these would run parallelly for the star-crossed lovers. But I have suddenly started feeling differently. Why do I feel the "nafraat" phase is all over? Why do I feel this tagline is about the two parts of their turbulent love story? Right now, I feel that the first part of their story is completed ' it was about overcoming their hatred ' the hatred that did not let them unite. And now starts the second part of their story ' their love will keep them united despite everything else going wrong. Their love bloomed in the shadow of their hatred ' and now their love will never let them apart. It is time for love only .. love will keep them alive.

Farah:
I'm running as it's Sunday morning here...and hubby is traveling tonight...but wanted to let you know that loved your words today...especially the last paragraph is so poignant to the tagline of the story as of now...yes after this kind of feelings cannot be overpowered by hatred anyway..."And now starts the second part of their story ' their love will keep them united despite everything else going wrong. Their love bloomed in the shadow of their hatred ' and now their love will never let them apart. It is time for love only .. love will keep them alive." absolutely brilliant thought..

Wonderful take as usual, sweetz!