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Posted: 13 years ago
In case you need a good laugh .. That girl's got humour! 🤣

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3208666/did-we-do-it-arnavji-updated
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Nishi!

That was a brilliant take girl .. Loved what you wrote about the epi .. And the other thoughts reflected mine!

But what I loved most was how you brought in Khushi's description of her perfect husband into the picture .. He heard it, started working on the very same moment, stumbled a lot, had a rough journey .. But he has made it finally. He has even brought her their stars & moons .. And he has made himself the husband she dreamt of. Wondeful!


Thank you Farha😊

Khushi's description of her prefect husband was the first thing that struck me. She had put Arnav up on a pedestal in front of her mother. This girl has always lived for others and given happiness to others and today Arnav has given her everything back...he is probably the only one who will do things for her. She finally has somebody whom she can call as her own😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Arnav completes his anger on Khushi🤣🤣 This spoiler reminded me of some 1960 movie😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bs_deeps


u did think ASR as Achilles?A big 🤗for that...


btw..loved what you wrote in your post..that was awesome..you kept on saying you cant do justice

to the episode, but what you wrotewas so beautiful...



Thanks dear! But I really want to read your thoughts... Write a few words, naa!!

Achilles & Karna - I love both. I have to agree with your dad .. Two great warriors fighting for the wrong sides. Two apparently heartless warriors with a pure heart hidden beyond their valiance .. And both made their own sacrifices. Reminds me of our man again .. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


I guess for the first time i used the word "crap" in this forum .. Had to comment on that classic piece! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nishita--



Thank you Farha😊

Khushi's description of her prefect husband was the first thing that struck me. She had put Arnav up on a pedestal in front of her mother. This girl has always lived for others and given happiness to others and today Arnav has given her everything back...he is probably the only one who will do things for her. She finally has somebody whom she can call as her own😳



.. And I sighed reading your comment .. Really beautifully put, dear.

Both has finally found someone to call their own .. On this very thought my eyes moist up .. How much i love them .. *sigh*
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Posted: 13 years ago
😡🤬 I dont have anything else to say..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya1503

@bold: 👍🏼 👍🏼 😆 my all time fav story during the school was the Trojan War!! love Achilles! whenever any question abt Achilles used to come in the exams,my teachers used to give me full marks😆 😆 😆

was not happy with the batting of the team but the bowling n fielding depts rock!!😎

such a comfortable victory..I didnt expect that after watching the batting performance..though 170 is not a bad score I was waiting for more dhamaka as England fielding was below par...Single six was such a disappointment..but it will b a booster now..after such a narrow victory over Afghans, this was definetely needed...
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Posted: 13 years ago

shivi ne jo keh diya bas keh diya...😆😆

meet me in SKD🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for another oustanding update to match the absolutely memorable episode!

Happy to see you touched on the first five minutes of the epi which on any other day would have made a mark but as it turns out were almost forgotten. Loved the picture of Khushi picking up her "ghoonghat" - perfect capture of her as the stunning enchantress! And absolutely connected with the haunting words from Jab tak hai jaan. Hats off to those words you have every Crooner!
Also loved all the other takes and write ups. Soo enjoy this hangout even though I am more of a reader than a writer.

Each moment of friday is still floating in my head even when I am not watching a rerun. I can't really write much but a couple of things stood out in my mind. One was the fact that this was such a vocal/verbal moment of love for them unlike most of the other times where their silence did the talking and brought out their feelings for each other. I loved the fact that this moment did not have a song from the movies to fit it in the background. Though it was not so clear if Kyun dard hai itna fit the scene - I am quite happy that when a song came, it was that and that too much towards the end. The other micro moment that really sort of hit me in the pit of my stomach is just after Khushi tries to kiss him on the lips and he turns her over sort of to take the lead. Their expressions were soo perfect and vulnerable in those couple of seconds and I could really "see" their love, yearning and passion come together. I thought Sanaya surely went all out on this one - she was the caregiver, the reassurer, the lover in a drop dead gorgeous bundle. Their kisses throughout their time on the rug were all so naturally there - almost un- noticeable yet enhancing their surrender to each other. Don't know how they do it but I'm totally jelly for a while😳

On a side note - my husband has given up on me this weekend 😆. He thinks there needs to be an IPKKND Anonymous just like the AA to help addicts recover. I told him yeah - its called IF 😆

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