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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Beautifully said Rae...for there is so much lost in the comic representation that shown in the episode.

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

This is exactly what Khushi should be feeling and wondering right now Rae!Amazing job specially at the particular paragraph where she remembers all that he has done for her...

Would love another part :D sorry for short comment,have to rush now but Brlliant job!

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AngelTeen

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Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: meera30
Res

What can I say except that you said it, Rae!

This episode got me because what should have been a journey of re-discovery and learning, has become a joke and humiliation

Of course I would love to read Part 2. Do write.

I am glad you write so well that what is being ignored so royally in the show, is being set right here.

I was so mesmerized when they had all those scenes of them being each other's silent strength the night he came back and then the comedy track starts and I am clueless. I get it that hes ASR and ASR does as ASR pleases but somewhere ASR needs to realize that its not KKG in front of him any more. I still have some hopes left where Khushi finally STANDS up to him and tells him the degree to which he has hurt her or what it is which is exactly made her leave...and we finally get some sense back.

Thank You so much, Meera. The last part means a lot.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: curledup
Looser :P

-edut:

my insults to Jastard are getting more and more childish. Stupid buck. Now to this OS fantastique! I mist say, Khushis pain her feelings the emoions all described so poetically it touched my hurt! I truly did tear up a wee bit at the shaitaan and rajkumar reference because she is helpless to hate him but helpless when loving him.

well done rae.

-Aashifa

Exactly and somewhere that helplessness is getting lost...

But Thank You so much.

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@-happilyunknown

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Awesome work rae! :)

Yes khushi is naive..:/

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sargamfriends

@sargamfriends

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

this is exactly hw it should be shown in the show...seriously very well written

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Seriously Rae!

This is one amazing piece. Are u becoming my mouth piece here? Except that I cant say this, this beautifully like u but eventually this was my feelings.

Above all that I like the part how u chose to give one emotion from all the incidents of past to mention on his love. And how u balnaced everything against the contract.

Seriously, they are not kids who could act like this when their relationship is on a thin wire. When I was expecting a go and Woo Kushi mode Arnav all I get was some comedy piece?

And Thank God! At least u gave me nice drabble!

And I honestly prefer second part for this. And I want that to be as intense as this one!!

Go on Lady! Write it soon and post it! Please! :)