~Because I loved you~ ArHi Drabble/OS - Page 3

That was lovely.

Nice OS.. Portrayal of Khushi's emotions was fab..

finally some of the emotions which i thought wasnt shown in the show

That was really beautifully written... I too had the same feelings when that part of the show was being aired... like what in the name of heaven is Arnav doing... instead of winning her love and trust, he's breaking it further...

Even with drabble you can make me cry. I think its been some time since you wrote this and though arnav has redeemed himself immensely since then, i cant forget how gutted i felt when he brought up the contract again. The pain i felt for khushi is the same pain i felt reading this...everything she believed in caught in the gamble because of who she fell in love with...that helplessness was beautifully brought out and the comparison between the rajkumar and shaitain- totally apt. I also wondered when they were airing that particular phase in the show where the arnav that was the epitome of tenderness when it came to khushi went. I guess my favourite line would be where you said that he was always beside her, not by her...that was seriously touche and so true in the situation back then.

Sorry, restricted rambling today- using my phone so its a bit tough to type :s
But again, amazing piece...there's a magic in the simplicity that actually makes me feel like im inside khushi's head and heart:-) kaash cvs could have taken a look inside your head and actually shown this conflict on screen...because this is exactly how i would have expected khushi to feeld

31st July disappointed everyone of us!

You protrayed khushi's feelings soo well! You've written the sadness beautifully, Rae!!

Bring on the part two.. I would love to read it. :)

That felt so incomplete we need a part 2 !!!

Loved it..