~Because I loved you~ ArHi Drabble/OS

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

This is so true and exactly this is how Khushi should feel right now if CV'S allow her to feel.

Sad but true.

You have expressed all the emotions in one right place.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

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What can I say except that you said it, Rae!

This episode got me because what should have been a journey of re-discovery and learning, has become a joke and humiliation

Of course I would love to read Part 2. Do write.

I am glad you write so well that what is being ignored so royally in the show, is being set right here.

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Looser :P

-edut:

my insults to Jastard are getting more and more childish. Stupid buck. Now to this OS fantastique! I mist say, Khushis pain her feelings the emoions all described so poetically it touched my hurt! I truly did tear up a wee bit at the shaitaan and rajkumar reference because she is helpless to hate him but helpless when loving him.

well done rae.

-Aashifa

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

wow it was fabulous but sad

right emotions displayed 👏

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Devilways

@Devilways

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Great one. Want another part. Agree with you, its wierd one point he says he did was wrong but he is commiting the same error again.

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

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Beautiful Rae!

You said it all. Each & every word is true & khushi needs to say all this.

I would love to read part 2!

Enough of this stupidity. Today's epi was enjoyable but Arnav disappointed me. I don't know what's happening. They fight, they romance, they act funny & they blame each other but when will they TALK? A serious talk. I have lost all hopes. I'm just watching it coz I enjoy watching it.

Keep writing!

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

You got it. Such LOVE as shown by ASR is too rich for my diet.

Pls post part 2 at the earliest. I would love to read it.

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dorindakate

@dorindakate

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

Your words:

Sooo powerful...

Alas, sooo true...

So much heartache...heartbreak...

Would love to see more...

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

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Res

That was a hell lot intense, the kind of intensity we all expected in the show. I am truly glad you decided you pen down something so beautiful, yet so sad.

What Khushi realizes and the way you've written it is heartbreaking, yet so true. Glad you wrote it and so perfectly.

A Part 2 would be lovely!:)

Thanks Rae!:D

Edited by mistyrains - 13 years ago