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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow,loved it.
It was so good.
Thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
i loved it al lot...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
awesome their communication through their eyes was awesome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ouchhh! at first i thought it was like one of those earlier times when they hadnt fallen in love but as i read i was like woww...
imagine if it actually happens in the show...omg..

This was an amazing read as usual :)

Thanks for the PM <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
If during blankness you could write such a simple and awesome stuff, I am pretty sure you would rock when you get back with a bang. I just love and enjoy everything that comes from you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Well, it was interesting to say the least.

I can see this as a prologue to a story but as an OS all by itself, its done nothing but leave me with many many questions.

I think you should consider continuing this
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Loved reading the os. I am a fan of your writing. Loved how arnav gave the typist a second chance. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Life has never given me second chances has it?''he sarcastically worded and her expression went through a change- a change tinged with melancholy and pain

I loved the line so much... held so much emotion...loved it dear...amazingly written
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh wow
it's awesome
khushi's insanity personified,she is one in million

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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
One of the best that u have written till date. I knew as their eyes met in the lift tat she was there as his employee after their divorce or something but the easy way with which u have written this piece needs appreciation. Simply loved it! more so because it is so easily imaginable.

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