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@debby_11

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

its so touching...beautiful piece of work...loved it...

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

His smile when he thought of that special employee

Her plea to devi mayyia

Her insanity in "borrowing" a scooter from the road.

Their conversation about second chances

AND the silent apology

Loved all of it.

👏👏👏

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aishwarya_rox

@aishwarya_rox

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

yes !!! yesss !!! i was so happy to see ur update !!! so now abt this os ...it was extremely good...the introductions of both the characters...was very well explain ...and also the feeling of embarassment ...

the last last sorry conveyed by eyes...was heart touching...i really love ur writing style...and look forward to ur work 😃

thank u sooo much for the PM 😊

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

It was really emotional...:)

Liked it..!!!

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Aisha

@.Aisha.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

I loved it!👍🏼 It was really beautifully written!👏 I was not at all expecting them to be Ex husband-wife!😛

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mandeep

@mandy15

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

it was fantastic dear:)

loved it:)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

That was beautiful , your writing is so powerful. Sigh. I mean the subtly described pain, the sadness, felt like poetry. Loved it!:)

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Sigh. Another OS with sad ending. Seems 2 reflect the mood in this forum 😕

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

won't you be an angel and write a second part to this OS, something in sort of getting them back together?? :) pretty please with cherries on top??!

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

While reading I had a feeling something unexpected was going to happen and then I read this...

Loved it like everything else you write! Thank you for the PM!!

His employee.His ex-wife.His first love.

Her boss.Her ex-husband.Her first love.

Loved it like everything else you write! Thank you for the PM!!

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