OS: Iss Pal (Part 2 on Page 3)

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Divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

its just awesome di!!! loved it!!! 👏 n my halat while reading was only this!!☺️ ☺️

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Filmyshilmy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

read both parts at one go...

omg Archu its sooo romantic...

i wish it happens tonite...may not be among those 4 but love you lots...

muahhh

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beena nadkarni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Archu dear superb job writing loved it 👏 . The Cv's should hire you . The queen of Romance .

Edited by beena14 - 13 years ago

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Beautiful :D loved it <3

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-Gan-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

oooh Archu Lady Romantic indeed!

I hope it happens like this today or monday...absolutely fantastic! 👏

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HIRA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

awww so nice hope it happens

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shwetachauhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I cant believe I am so late!! Be back in a bit!! 😊

Edited to add:

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 😍 😍 😍

Sigh!!!!

Ah Archu..!! I so wish it happens this way!! What a beautiful shot! And I am glad its a two shot! 😊 You do justice to your title you know.. Lady romantic!!! ❤️ I love the scene as well as the details there..!! You have put Khushi's mind, her perspective, her confusion, her turmoil and finally her surrender so beautifully..!

The first part.. the mention to the fireflies on that ill fated night.. how can she forget them, the other night when she was so scared of the dark and the looming danger! And then again, when she thinks of the lights on the poolside on her birthday.. both dark days, and the man to light up her world, the same, her husband! But one she is so confused about! The one she is so angry with yet cant stop worrying about!! Archu.. this was beautiful!

Second part.. Khushi's embarrassment at HP's interference earlier, thinking of the fall from the cliff in this moment of danger, the moments of dhak-dhak, her refusal to believe that she fell for the trap and lost the bet, Arnav's smirks, his smile, his concern, his teasing, his declarations and the passionate kiss.. wow!! 😍 Each detail just perfect!

Loved loved loved it!!! I hope you keep coming up with these treats for us!! As often as possible!!

PS: I know who the four people are! 😳 Thank you for the mention! 🤗

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Archana Natarajan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Thank you to everyone here for your comments - this was my first time writing an OS and I had absolutely no idea how it would turn out! Very sweet of everyone, and hope you enjoyed it! 🤗

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beena nadkarni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Archu kitna pyara lekhti hai , girl you sure are a romance Queen. Beautiful scenes wish GH could use this piece. Loved it. 👏

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smashitup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

🤗 forgive my super late appearance Archu !

Creating scenes like this with words is very hard and I'm transfixed with what I've just seen here.

Amazing emotional descriptions aside ... it's the way your words made me feel inside that count.

I was affected by every word ... I didn't need to see that tree to see how much it scared Khushi or the way her heart is in conflict and as she squirmed, my ☺️ rose without any help from my imagination ... yours did the trick !!!

Loved it ... please keep writing and inspiring hearts who encourage us and suppport us ... that's what it's all about ! ... sharing the joy of love in all it's forms ... oooh me got all mushy, will stop now 😳 x

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