OS: Iss Pal (Part 2 on Page 3) - Page 7

Originally posted by: srilu_123

good👏

Thank you!

Originally posted by: jakhushi

Archu...

Finally got to read it today (both the parts) and absolutely adored it!

Very well written and I can see the romantic soul getting her heart's fulfillment atleast in this OS.

The title was perfect...

Thank you!! Ha ha, yes - the romantic in me took over BIG time! 😃

Originally posted by: highonshows

I'm going to stop here, R u kidding me???? 😕because I don't think I should continue beyond this! Says who???? That for the readers to decide...okie dokie???? 😉And this is a definitely full stop! 🤣Dream on...cuz i certainly m asking every reader of this OS to sign a petition to help me change ur mind...😆😆😆

ESP the 4 dear friends u mentioned, as i certainly know who they are too...😉

Hope you liked it - do leave your comments, would love to hear! Now that ur very much entiled to ask from the readers...first ever sensible lines i truly liked 👏👏Hmmm, First and foremost,...U CANT STOP HERE PLEEEJ one more chapter would be a complete package to this wonderful picturisque OS. U have a way with words and like i previously said u create magic on the screen with such vivid images.

Its is so well written that nothing is left to the imagination. Reading the OS, weaves a master piece unlike any other.

A small request from a fan of this OS: if u choose not to continue this OS, i still request u to start a short story or a Fan Fiction. U truly have a gift of story telling.

Looking fwd to many more stories from u ... pls do not forget to PM me...😳

Hey Avni... Thank you so much for your comment! Ha ha, any chapter that goes ahead will be +16 territory, which I don't want to go to - I don't like interruping them! 😉😆

Thanks so much for the compliments - it really means a lot to me! 🤗 I don't know about writing more - honestly this was more of a first time attempt because I was moved by Thursday's episode - so let's see! But thanks a ton! 😳

Girl!!!!👏 👏👏 I was riveted...simply riveted as I was reading both parts! LOVED the title...how apt!! The dialogues you gave Khushi and Arnav were simply spot-on...I could read that last paragraph in Part 2, over and over again!!!😍 Thats how much I LOVED your OS!!! You have to write more, re! 16+ hoga toh chalega...I don't mind!😆 Awesome, sweetie! So proud of you!!!⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: Nandalala

"Iss baar bhi main hi jeeta hoon. Tumhe." ☺️☺️☺️

Girl!!!!👏 👏👏 I was riveted...simply riveted as I was reading both parts! LOVED the title...how apt!! The dialogues you gave Khushi and Arnav were simply spot-on...I could read that last paragraph in Part 2, over and over again!!!😍 Thats how much I LOVED your OS!!! You have to write more, re! 16+ hoga toh chalega...I don't mind!😆 Awesome, sweetie! So proud of you!!!⭐️⭐️

So sorry about the late response, sweets...This weekend is the first real chance I've had to look at PMs.😊

Awww thanks a ton Anjali! 🤗 Means a lot to me especially coming from someone who knows the characters as well as you do! 😊