OS: Yeh Sukoon...Yeh Bekaraari...Part2 pg4 06/04

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Hello!!!
This idea came to my mind two weeks ago, but couldn't update it due to the exams and once I finished writing it I updated it, and OMG when I watched the episode when she kept quiet and he remembered her previous actions, I found that it's the same idea I got , but the situation is different.
Enjoy this!!
"I will stay here until the contract ends as I can't go now. What will people think if I left just two months after the marriage. They will get doubts." he remembered her words, which causes pain to him, "I just don't deserve you. I hurt you a lot...damn it" he thought while he was tybing something on his lap top, but he couldn't do anything properly as that scene refused to leave his thoughts. That moment just captured him and stole the peace.
He was sitting on the recliner; he glanced at her from the top of his lap topas she was knitting something. She hadn't say anything since he came. He missed her voice. The silence between them was killing him. It covered the whole place; everything was constant and decided to keep quiet as if nothing has soul as if everything shriveled with her smile and giggle. He looked at her, wanted her to say something, anything, to scold him, shout at him, but no she didn't even whisper anything.

Arnav managed hardly to ask her, trying to break the silence. He gathered his strength and asked even he was hundred percent sure what will be the answer, but he wanted to hear her voice.

"Are you knitting for Di's baby?" he finally asked gently.

In another case, Khushi would jump happily hearing the question, she would go near him and show him and say 'yes, how do you find this? Is it good? Will Di like it?' She would say I have made a pink one and now I'm working on the blue one as I don't know whether it's a girl or a boy. She would ask him 'Do you prefer ladka ya ladke? A handsome rajkumaar or a cute rajkumaari?' she would giggle, laugh, and smile, but not this time. She just nodded her head in 'yes' and he felt disappointed.

Even the air missed her giggling. She never stopped talking before; she used to talk to herself, to Lakshmi, but never kept quiet like this.

He felt guilt 'I just deserve this, but she is punishing herself too.' he thought wishing her to see her smile pervading in the place; the smile which will turn his world to delight.

After what looked like eternity, her phone rang. She looked at the caller id and tried to smile as if the person who called her was looking at her. It was 'Amma'.

He sighed of relief as she picked the call and said 'hello' atleast she changed that killing mode.

She went to the poolside in order not to disturb him.

"Hello, Amma." she said hardly with not clear voice.

"I'm fine. What about you, buaji, and bauji? All fine?" she tried to get back her usual tone.

'Why didn't you call me the last two days, Khushi?' Garima asked through the phone.

"Woh Amma I was busy with something and Payal assured me that you all are fine, so I didn't." Arnav felt pain when he heard this. He was listening carefully to the call trying to catch her quiet voice.

'Give the phone to my son-in-law' Garima asked.

He pretended to be busy with something on his lap top when she came and pointed at the phone.

"What?"

"Amma."

"I'm fine, and you aunty?"

"Is there anything wrong with Khushi, son? I don't know why I feel she isn't fine."

"Don't worry, aunty. She is just tired. She is fine"

"Take care of her, son"

"Ok, aunty. Bye" He diconnected the call and gave the phone to Khushi.

Khushi lied on the bed while Arnav lied on the couch. Both of them couldn't sleep that endless night thinking of the romantic and happy moments contrasting with the painful ones.
It's sad I know. Hope you liked it. Let me know your reaction.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice one yaar...
I loved it...
Plz continue na
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Plans To Continue Pleashhh ?! 😳
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very nice and touchy plz continue😊
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wow such quite khushi how did this happen man
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Originally posted by: N.Mussarrat

You should continue this!

Thanks. Should I really do?
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It was sad but nice...
Well written..
Continue it..
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Originally posted by: Princeess07

It was sad but nice...
Well written..
Continue it..

Thank you. I've noticed that in many comments people asked me to continue, but I don't know if I can nowadays, once I find a chance I'll make it TS maybe!
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Superb 👍🏼 plz continue
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Its a good start but u have to continue!

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