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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Simply superb. So simple, In the end it was just easy, letting their heart speak.😊😊😊😊😊.
REALLY ONE SHOT?😊

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Chicane

@Chicane

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Someone's on a roll today!!! 😉
Such a beautiful OS!! So romantic n sweet...

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Awww! Very well written and beautifully put. :)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

beautiful loved it that was so perfect and well written loved how you describe their emotions loved it that was so perfectly done thanks for the pm

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Samana Dahar

@samana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Nice OS. Thanks for the PM.

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mirnalini

@mirnalini

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

For me, that was your best work till date!

I've read almost all of your work, and I think this was undoubtedly the best...

Excellent job!👏

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alalal

@sheun

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

MESMERISING !

I HAVE TO SAY...ITS ONE OF YOUR BEST WRITING...AND I HAVE READ MOST OF THEM...

AMAZING !

BUILD UP..WORDS...EXPRESSION...FEELING.JUST SPOT ON..

( one tiny suggestion or thought from my side, if you do not mind...

a lil bit of back ground will help. cause as i am reading this. its a bit diff to know where its starting from, or which state they r in...)

BUT U WRITE UR WAY...AND ITS PLAIN AND SIMPLY: BEAUTIFUL

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

The os was very well written and absolutely beautiful!! I loved it!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

i was a bit depressed after going through your last OS, but this one cheered me up...guess u have already figured out by now that i am a sucker for romance with happy endings!!...i know it sounds extremely childish of me, but with arnav misunderstanding khushi & snake's antics off late has really left me vying for such happy stories!!!...again, extremely well penned...& thanks a ton for the PMs for both the OSs...love ya sweetheart...🤗

Edited by shagun-rocks - 13 years ago

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

ohhh...this was just lovely and wonderful! Such raw emotions! I so wish they show a nice decent kiss! They just have to seal this hell of a series with a kiss. It'd complete it all!

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