OS : To Hold The Unreachable Star

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

First tym i found a kiss so more than enuf..no need of mkng love..only a kiss like this n one's bowled ovr 4 eternity..

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Risha J

@-Risha-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

This was so heartfelt and sensual at he same time! You should do a second part where Khushi confesses her feelings!

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

You have a PhD in writing a kissing scene... 😆
You make the kiss so hot .. awww... love reading your description of it always 😃

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arhi10

@arhi10

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

beautiful update...

thnx for de pm!!!

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RazRazee

@RazRazee

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Awesome writing style keep writing its great piece of work. Enjoyed reading it!

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

oh wow dear...its awsuuum..loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

that was so amazing... loved it👍🏼

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

That was AWESOME. :)

Finally, he was able to hold, His unreachable Star...

Aww that is sooo cute!

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Gsoh that was amazinggg so beautiful n full of motions

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

this os is simply fantastic... in very few words you manage to put your thoughts across so aptly

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