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A well paced episode ..which begun shakily and ended intriguingly.. ofc had its own share of bloopers but we have been inoculated against it and dont even bother about it now, Do we !!šŸ˜†

The episode opened with Khushi having it out with Shyam , accusing him of stealing the papers , Shyam urbanely countering her charges ..He leaves a stymied Khushi whose internal alarm is clanging , bellowing that Shyam is the culprit...That notion has not been shaken and still has firm hold..


A scene where we saw the naivety decreasing in Khushi, she will no more be fooled by sweet words, will not take things at face value and will reserve her opinion , her judgement [ Hope the CV's continue this growth ]...we also saw the decisive "Humne Churaya"..An acknowledgement that Shyam did indeed steal but what ...Will or Arnav or both ??...


Night approaches and we see a a rotund person casually entering the house and Maami reading a mystery novel, she is startled by a phone call and discovers that it is her absent minded brother on the other end who has come into her house not knowing the address, the eccentric Bro - Sis meet, hug and weep for joy, summon the family and there is a mutual Hi, Hello's interspersed with eye stealing between Khushi and Shyam one suspicious of him, his words, his motives the other enjoying the power he wields over her, glorying in it ...


So the Brother enters when Maami is talking about Subah[s] and saying least expected things will happen ... The PH always have used nee entry's for furthering the track, if the Dhabba owner came to stoke the awareness in Arnav, Nk came to induce Jealousy ..so why has this guy come ... Arnav is not here and the track is more about Khushi ... Has he come to usher in the subah[s] dawn in Khushi's life , His idle words..No Profit ..does it imply that what ever Shyam has planned will not yield any profit ..Couple this with his Ghajini effect ..are we to take that we will soon be seeing the 'The Lonely Sojourn of the Will " Thereby providing the reason for Keeping Arnav alive instead of killing him instantly or is he a time pass Guy ...Lets W& W ..


Khushi clad in white , comes out from washroom babbling about Shyam, missing Arnav and longing for him , yearning to see his face ...The clock is struck on 11 and she goes to sleep...Her mind completely possessed by the thoughts of Arnav ..She remembers the fight for the recliner, the hand holding and the sleeping together with hands held together...


Sanaya Looked absolutely lovely in white ...So we got a message .. " Do not lose Hope " ..Okie, we shan't !! 😊...Khushi in white suggesting purity and a new beginning and again reinforced by the clock which showed 11 ...If white clears the clutter n obstacles away, 11 being the master number is high on intuitive thoughts and also indicates new beginning BUT it also indicates Treachery and Peril !! danger is around the corner , waiting to pounce if caught unawares , she is going to be in great peril... or will it be Arnav since she speaks about Arnav before looking up at the clock...


I also loved how Khushi's hand automatically curls itself into a grip lock as she remembers the way She held on to his tees ...The instinctive need for her to hold him shown beautifully..


Hmmm...Looks like things are settling down in PAYASH world too ..with Bubbli unable to secure her goal, Payal getting wise to Bubbli's tactics, maami becoming aware of Bubbli's dislike... her schemes will not work for long and Payal will remain Akash's Payalji ..The supposed storm became a light breeze which ruffled the even keel of their relationship...



Akash begins to tell the story of Princess and silver coins ...A story that speaks about how a soldier married a princess , how he used to connect with her at nights with the aid of his hounds , how eventually he is found and is sent to be hanged when he is saved by the hounds and the execution ends in marriage ...and here we see Khushi suddenly awakening , She listens, her heart thudding audibly, her ears pricked to listen, waiting to hear THE VOICE and to her amazement she hears him , She hears her soldier calling out to her , his tone urgent and peremptory ...Khushi wakes up and walks, her foot presses down on the Pearls ...She si taken immediately to the times when she met her dashing Soldier...She picks it up and sees herself in a deserted, decrepit mansion , Khushi begins to panic and cast her eyes about when her eyes fall on the Key and she hearkens the softened Khushi again ..rushes forth and stumbles against the anklet...she begins to yell out his name , seeks him everywhere but time is not ripe for the truth to come, Khushi must wait..

I literally loved the camera ...Kudos for showing two things simultaneously ...One was the Growing realization of Khushi and her feelings ...A young untouched girl as suggested by the white is suddenly smote with feelings that is quite alien to her, she has heard of it , read about it but has never felt it ...When the strong , powerful emotions surge through her, she is scared, discombobulated ..her steps are unsure and she does not know the path when her eyes light up on the dew drop of Gods, The pearls.. The pearls which activated her destiny, The pearls which are said to the tears of Gods, come to guide her..She picks them and walks along when she is given the key , the key that will open the door, The key offered by the God to help her on the way to her realization ..she takes a step further when she gets the greatest gift, the gift of being blessed by her Mother ...Yes, Khushi is being guided, helped and has the blessing of Destiny, Devi mayya and her Mother ...but her fear keeps her from focusing fully on her inner self . She has not succumbed to the fear, Arnav's voice is countering her fear and she is gaining strength from it and has begun to search for the source ...She is searching for him in a desolated place, she will be the mistress who will bring in the spring and rejuvenate the Beasts Garden, his mansion ..Khushi by picking up all the objects has shown that she has accepted her fate...

The second was the culmination of all the telepathy we had seen previously,be it Khushi hearing Arnav calling her in his mind or Arnav hearing Khushi's whisper amongst that noise,,, it finally bore fruit today when Khushi heard Arnav calling out to her in distress ...Khushi now knows that something is not right and will begin snooping around ...her agitated mind will not rest until she gets to the bottom of it...



Overall There has been a plethora of hints thrown that this will be a new beginning , A track which will bring about transformation ...usher in the dawn, light since even Maami has begun to thaw ..It means Spring is near !!


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Beautiful beautiful beautiful episode. Now this is called "Scriptwriting". Today's episode gave me the confidence that 4 Lions knows how to design an episode. The tracks I have already laid yesterday right??? So, now they have done their brainstorming and are focused on the micro tracks. Oh well, here I need to say something to all of you.


My analysis generally consists of various processes. Sometimes I talk about the message, sometimes it's about the loops, sometimes it's about metaphors and analogies and innuendos, sometimes it's about the track layout etc. When I watch an episode, then I realize what the story teller had conveyed to the audience. I DO NOT predict or say anything. Whatever they show I try to pick the puzzle pieces and put it together; this is how the tracks are understood or deciphered. Anyone can do that and if anyone of you has a problem with that then let me know. The Creative team changes the track due to circumstances; obviously it's not in my hands as I am not involved in story making but I can figure out that the changes happened. Like I said on last Thursday Maami will be the one to find out about Bubbli and clear the issue and also Saturday ME helped me to understand that Payal is not leaving; then Shyam - Khushi with Fables and Hide and Seek . I have described to you all how did I arrive on that, isn't it??? I try to keep it crystal clear regarding my solution to a problem so that you can be clear too. Isn't it???Having said that I also made it pretty clear that don't take me on my face value rather judge me and then believe me or disapprove me like the way I never take the CVs on their face value. I hope I am making sense here. If I have said, there is no "Wooing track" that means the CVs have not decided on it yet and the moment they'll decide on that I will be the first person to decipher and declare that, right??? So, don't take me as this is my story telling; I have no say in it as this is what is going on the author's mind. I am just here to help you understand the episode. If you don't like it then I will be more than happy to QUIT analysis as I never wanted to analyze in the first place; Tant forced me to step into analyzing. Since then many have asked me to write, so, I am here. If I did offend anyone with my analysis then I am sorry and let me know so I can quit.


Now to the second issue. I have been getting many PMs where I am told not to link the scriptures with a daily soap; as this is not how it works on SP Hindi channel. I have replied couple of the PMs that it is not me who is purposefully linking them to the story line. I see a pattern and if there is a pattern involved then I use it. This is called solving a puzzle. Also at the same time I requested to all of you to take the theme of the story or the idea of the story; this is not the actual Holy story that the creative team is projecting here; they are just using it as an idea. Like the "Tilak" scene between Arnav and Khushi. They took the scene from Judaai but used it in their own way, isn't it??? Same way, ideas can be taken but the difference is how they are designed. We should appreciate that they are following a nice pattern here and not judge them by being unconventional, right??? They are not offending any Holy characters here. Let me explain.


We all at some point have thrown a party, right??? When we organize a party then what is the first thing we generally do??? We chose the "Theme" of the party, right??? then we make a budget and invitees, etc. to start. But, when we choose a "theme" then how we move forward to that??? Can anyone tell me??? We have a goal to achieve, right??? We design the party according to that theme, be it masquerade theme, retro theme, cocktail theme etc etc. Each and every things are based on that theme, isn't it??? Be it the decoration, or the food, or the invitation cards or the ambiance, everything. Do we deviate from that theme??? No right???


The same way when the Creative Team does design a track, they have chosen various themes and various ideas; the Macro layout is already sketched but they need to connect it with the micro tracks. How??? This is not an easy task.

Today's episode is done so brilliantly that when I will peel the layers of their "Brain Storming" then you will understand how it works. You need a theme which is an idea and then all the scenes are needed to fit according to the ideas. These are called "Sub sets" as in Statistics. We need various subsets to fit in the entire "SET". It is not an easy task, like organizing an event. You have to put the pieces in such a way that it is placed in the exact position. When they did the metaphoric wedding, they did it with that theme right??? Did they deviate at all??? No. they didn't.That time also I said it's Metaphoric wedding and it was. Indeed till the Grihapravesh happened from the Temple. When I said, they are using Class v/s Heart track, many were skeptical about it. But didn't they prove that??? They did right??? The class v/s heart is done now and the CVs are not even touching it. Isn't it??? Right now all the tracks I have laid out as you all know but they still need the micro tracks (sub sets) to complete each macro track (Set). Believe me or not each track has their own theme and they are walking towards that. They are using the fables all the tracks and confirming them with numbers. Remember each number is distinct with each character here and this is where the beauty lies. You always need to make a pattern for everything. The "Repentance", "Opponent", "Separation", "Redemption", "Will" and "New beginning" is been portrayed with numbers from the beginning of this track. Just notice that. It started with 12, 36, then 40, then 1, 10, 3, 56, and couple of more today. Isn't it??? But if you notice closely then you will see the difference in the numbers on how they have associated with each character or groups of characters and backed them by scenes and dialogues. This is called "Brilliance". The CVs are NOT using numerology here. It's not me BUT the CVs who are using Scriptures and Numbers. They are using the "Scriptural meaning of the numbers". 4 Lions believe in "Aesthetic" way of storytelling and I have always said that. I am guaranteed today when I will describe Khushi's "Dream sequence", you will understand what is meant by "Aesthetic" way of storytelling.


Hmmm. From where shall I start here??? Fine let me start with Khushi and Shyam scene. Didn't I tell you that it's the hide and seek and fox and the goat story going one. Soon it will also be wolf and the lamb story. But this is the macro track. We need the mini tracks to make it work. The papers will come to Khushi anyway but there is a major hint they threw which I confirmed already about the "Climax MU" that Shyam will create in Arnav's mind at the kidnapping place. I will touch on that later. Now, to the mini track for the hide and seek. How many of you remember the "Baazigar" movie??? I guess all of you??? Now how many of you remember "Johnny Lever" there??? Does it ring a bell??? Remember every side character in any show is roped in to help the leads of the show in their mission. What did "Masala Maama" say here??? He is a forgetful character. Right??? Here we go a mini track for Khushi to gain "WISDOM" about Shyam's game plan.


Why "Masala" And Naani said "Tarka maar ke"??? Hmm interesting isn't it??? What is masala??? It means "Drama" and tarka maar ke is "Twist" like we call seasoning. So, the drama will be unfolding but with a "Twist". Well of course it won't be any profit of Shyam. Isn't it??? But what is the "Twist"??? Now let me take you to the Pool side where Khushi and Shyam were accusing each one on the lost file. Shyam said - "Apni gair zimmedari ke liye aap humhein doshi mat thehraiyye Khushiji". Now this is the HINT for the climax MU. Who all remembered the "Image of the File" that Khushi took when she was hiding the file in the flower tub??? Remember??? I knew it will come one day and how Shyam will try to blacken Khushi with this one image. This image is useful as well as harmful for Khushi; because this image will help Khushi now to get to the details of the file if she doesn't acquire the original copies and on the other hand Shyam will use this as an "important" tool to ill repute Khushi in front of Arnav. The confirmation came from the message which was exchanged between Khushi and Arnav's mobiles. Shyam is the person who knows about this "Image" and he will definitely use this when he will lose the papers. Also here I suspect the when the "Terrace Confrontation" will happen it will be Arnav, himself who will clear the MU and disprove his "Mrs. ASR" dialogue - "Main aachi tarah samajh sakta hoon kitna mushkil hota hain Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada ban ke jo paisa, aaram aur shaan mil raha hain usse jaane dena ... Koi "PAGAL" hi hoga jo isse chod dega".


Because if Shyam doesn't try to ill repute Khushi first then when ASR will witness the terrace confrontation of Khushi and Shyam, how will Arnav eat his words??? It's not about Khushi leaving but it's about understanding how Khushi was used by both of these men. How even after ASR accusing her as a gold digger this simple and honest girl still wanted to prove her right??? This dialogue is for ASR to understand his "Real" Khushi and what she is made of. This dialogue is for ASR to realize that even for a moment he believed Shyam when he accused of Khushi being with him all along. Shyam will do that he has to like Riya said yesterday, "Sky is the darkest just before dawn". Like I said, "the candle always glows brighter before it ends". Same way if the MU will be intense just before it gets cleared completely and Shyam will gloat just before he blurts out for he will dig his own hole.


Before I talk about Khushi scene, let me talk a bit about the confirmations on some tracks I described yesterday. They confirmed about "Aakash being the protector" of the WILL and also the "Mary and Elizabeth" track. When Bubli came back to sleep then Aakash started to tell her the bedtime story. What was the Story about??? "Princess and Silver Coin". Isn't it??? Remember my analysis where I described about Steel v/s Glass??? It was the "Reality Bites" on May 1st. I described about Anjali too and related why she is associated with "Silver" because the biggest characteristics of Silver is - "It is the beacon of light in the darkness". Yes, this was for Anjali that she will her ray of hope in this baby where her world will be shattered with the trust of her husband Shyam.


But, but, but, here is one of the biggest hint for AR 36 K. Well, I have already deciphered it for you yesterday but today see another hint. If I wouldn't have done yesterday then definitely would have done today. What did Aakash say??? "Princess had a silver coin". Now this is the beauty of the scriptwriters. They had given the hint but still kept it under wrapped. Have you heard of the saying??? "The baby born with a silver spoon in her/ his mouth"??? yes, yes, yes. This is the hint for the actual Will and see who said it??? It's Aakash. So, the actual WILL indeed is in the name of "nanhi Khushi". Didn't I say that Aakash will be the protector here??? I said it may be that he will have the POA; I don't know what exactly he will be the powers with but definitely it will be with Aakash because Shyam will never ever realize that Aakash will be the protector of the Will. I am not from Law, so don't know whether it is required that when one makes a Will they need any one as a guaranter or not. Anyone from law field can throw light on this.

The Princess is also Khushi, which I will touch later.


There is another proof again that it is about the baby and except Anjali and Shyam everyone in the family will know Shyam's treachery. Even Aakash. I needed this confirmation and they have provided today. Just see the scene where Khushi comes down stairs when she panicked about Arnav. Then by the stairs we have seen all except Mama, no I am not talking about masala mama, but actual Mama. (I think because the Actor who plays Mama was not there for shoot, so he was absent).

Read me very carefully as I'll explain this scene. Above I explained about the "Number" etymology right??? Here when Naani enquired about the flight timing, Aakash said - 7 and a half hrs. right??? Just notice in that scene we didn't have Anjali and Shyam.


Let's come to the lounge area. Here also when Naani asked how many hours is the flight journey, it was Aakash who said - 8 hrs. Not, Shyam, not Khushi, but Aakash. When Nani asked what is the time, it was Shyam who answered - 3 (teen ). Not Aakash, not Khushi. Here is the explanation.

The CVs are running parallel stories here. Let us see the significance here:-

For Aakash and rest of the clan, except Anjali and Shyam, it is both 7.5 and 8. All of these have heard 7 and 8. Why??? Always remember to ask this question??? Seriously Why??? What is the significance??? I'll tell you.

The number 7/8 together form a remarkable connection. It denotes - "Child" and "Super Abundance".

Now, you got it??? Another hint why Aakash will be the protector of the Will and also the baby along with everyone else and Shyam will be kept aloof of it. Proven right??? This is called script writing. Who will be present in the scene and who will deliver which dialogue??? It is very important when you designing a scene because the audience doesn't have any clue and doesn't need one. But, this scene and every scene day showed their "Focus" on the track. Why 7.5 hrs and not 7??? Because Shyam's true facet will be disclosed after 6 months of the pregnancy and at the time of Social Stigma. As long as they are clear, we should be clear that the serial will deliver what promised. The Creative team should be focused on where they are heading towards and here they are that's all I can say.


Let's see the second connection. Shyam was associated with 2 numbers, right??? 8 and 3. Yes, that 8 which Aakash uttered was in the lounge and for Shyam, Khushi and Arnav. Now, remember the "Mary and Elizabeth" Story that I described yesterday. I said, Anjali will learn about Shyam through Bauji. And here you go with the confirmation today.

Number 8:- It is the number of Redemption, salvation, resurrection, and new birth/regeneration.


When Anjali will learn about Shyam, he will be sent to pass the testing phase as per number 40, right??? So, here it is. He also said 3 right??? So, when the last 3 months Anjali will be taken care by Khushi till her delivery, Shyam will have to go through repentance and redemption. Whether he will succeed or not, that time will tell. I don't think he will, but the hint was for the track to happen, which the creative team has confirmed.


On another note, 3 also mean in the scripture that - Saul was blinded for 3 days as per Act 9:9. This can mean Shyam will be aloof of the fact that Khushi has the file for 3 days when he will lose them.

Let's come to Khushi. I will explain the dream sequence and then conclude with the numbers 11, 3, 4 and 8 with it so you all can understand. Read me carefully here.


When Khushi saw the clock first, it was 11 pm. Then she tried to sleep with the subconscious thoughts of the lost file and Arnav. In the deep sleep she dreamed to be in a labyrinth; being scared by the nightmare she woke suddenly and realized that it was a dream. Khushi then checked the clock and realized it was 3 am. How many hours she was in deep sleep??? 4 hrs. Isn't it???

Here lies the beauty of the creative team. When Khushi was in the dream, she only picked up the things associated with her and Arnav - Pearls, Key and Payal. Did she pick any Bangles??? No, because she doesn't know yet that those were his Mom's. rest all she is aware of they are associated with them. Ok fine. But the bangles that Arnav gifted her, why not those??? Were those bangles not memories of their togetherness??? Why??? Why??? Why???


Let me ask you a question here??? Did she pick up all the things from a box in consciousness??? No. all these happened in her dream. If she would have found the treasure box from the cupboard, then it would mean Arnav's affection for her. It would mean reality. But, it was not shown that way and neither Khushi even had thought any of it before sleeping. Isn't it??? When she prepared to sleep it was 11 pm.


Number 11:- This number denotes - imperfection, unfulfillment and disorganization, incomplete.


She was worried for the incomplete task that she had on hand; she was worried for she failed tonight; she was worried for she lost the papers based on which she could prove her right in the eyes of the only man that matters to her. In those thoughts, she realized all the good moments, all the memories that was with Arnav; with those thoughts she fell asleep. In the dream, she found the Pearls, Key and Payal. What are they actually??? Just their togetherness??? Then why she didn't get the bangles on the floor??? I'll tell you why???

Pearls:- have you heard of the phrase - "Pearls of Wisdom"???

Key:- it denotes "Door", "Path"

Payal:- it signifies "Love", "Newly Bride".

Silver:- Metal and not Gold, because gold is considered as God's metal.


In one sentence, all the above described as - "Khushi will get the wisdom to find the path to her love". Yes, Khushi will use her pearls of wisdom to find the key to reach to her Husband". Payal is always considered as the gift to the newly bride; here Payal is their love. Isn't it aesthetic??? There are some more. She slept for 4 hrs and woke up at 3 am.

Number 4:- This represents God's creative works, especially works associated with the earth.

Number 3:- This number is one of the perfect numbers. This number denotes "Completeness".


Hence, Khushi slept with the thoughts of incomplete work but God's gave her the wisdom and showed her the way to complete it. Isn't this beautiful??? This is why I said, See the connection here. Then came number 8 in the lounge area; as I mentioned above, number 8 is "Ressurection / rebirth" and also "Repentance / Redemption". Does it ring a bell??? Yes, yes,. The Creative team has combined Sleeping Beauty and Repentance track of Arnav and this will end with the Wedding track. Arnav will wipe away the Social Stigma also to give her the "Purity". Remember my "Rangoli" Analysis??? That is why we saw the Payal and not the bangles. For Punjabis it's Chuda I guess, so logically for Khushi it's the Anklet. How did Aakash started the story??? Once there was a Princess and she had a silver coin... Who is the princess and who had the silver coins given by Arnav??? Both is Khushi, remember??? She had the FB of Pearl and Key (Mannat) and not Payal, because Pearl is where she met her love and her mannat of a fairy tale wedding. Remember number 10 I already described yesterday on their "New Beginning" ???

Here cometh the Fairy Tale wedding of a "Princess" with her "Prince".

This is why "Sheesh Mahal" was shown and "Lukhnow" was mentioned". Now, this is called "SCRIPT WRITING". Enjoy !!!






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Life is a journey of experiences is it not right. From the birth until your death, you learn something. Today I learned something vital.

When Barun left the show, I felt there is nothing to write at all. Today in the morning, I saw redux and the ladies as usual fill in the comments. Something in me stuck but I pursued with the task waiting for the man to arrive in Noreen Show.

After listening to his interview, I concluded, "Men may come and Men may go, but I go on for ever". I loved the character called "ASR" and irrespective of who plays the character, therefore my analysis should be focused there, not the person playing the role.

Thank you forum members for giving me this lesson - I bow to all of you.

Today's episode :

Well seems the Raizada Mansion is the temporary asylum for Mami's extended family members. Their multi-dimensional, distinct qualities and unique names make their presence and absence felt immediately according to change in seasons. Just as we are missing NK in RM and hoping when Bubby will be missing from RM, we are yet to form an impression about Masala brother. Nevertheless, it came to our knowledge that he is suffering from short-term memory problem. No problem we can rent from Aamir Khan the things he used in Gajini. As he is presently doing Satyama Jayade and aired by same channel, there is likely chances that he will waive the rental fees also. Cut in Production cost Cvs. - Kiya Idea hai Sabji

Mini fight between Agatha Christi and Sherlock Holmes

Our lady who always is a one-man army started searching for clues how did the will paper got lost so quickly. Within nano seconds, her brain flashed the name of Mr. Shyam Manohar Jha.

Little did she knew that our Snake started collecting the clues immediately - Baker's Street became Raizada Mansion and Snake starting wearing the cap of Mr. Sherlock Holmes, Of course he got the precious will - why not he got the required help from Dr. Watson (who else than Lakshmi Ji).

So our Lady Agatha Christi and Sherlock Holmes had a spat, each were blaming other, trying to outsmart other. Well, Sherlock Holmes ji, today you have won the battle but the war is yet to be won. Please wait for our lady to spread her wing before we wave the flag of the finish line.

Khushi deep down knew that the will papers are very much in the safe possession of Shyam but as usual, she is unable to prove that. A great manipulator and man of words he made her believe temporarily that due to her recklessness she lost the papers and responsible for that. He wanted to prove his innocence that he came to the airport to help her. Khushi as usual was ambivalent between her heart and mind.

In pursuit of the voice

It was the first day for Khushi without Laad Governor physical presence but every inanimate things in their room amplified that he is omnipresence amidst her. With distress unable to prove her innocence, she went for her sleep.

As slowly sleep embraced her into its wings - she woke to the sound of Arnav. It was a dream that gave her clues to decipher - clues from the inception of their rendezvous by a string of pearls - clues for the key that he lost in the dargah that was in her possession and third anklets. While she was lost in her thoughts intermittently, there was a "SOS" of Arnav Singh Raizada's voice, calling her name.

The voice she is accustomed to, the voice that she is longing, the voice that is causing her despair, is resonating her. Trying to find a way out this labyrinth, she climbs down to call him about his safety. She stumbles and the whole RM wakes up to the noise. Today in her stumble there is no ASR to hold her, to remark her carelessness today she is alone

While the whole family is consoling the petrified Khushi - the blinking SMS text reassures that he arrived safely. It is lovely episode; I did not catch up with other characters - just Khushi and Khushi alone.

What captured me more:

Sanaya and Khushi Kumari Gupta - The dainty lady's shoulder are carrying more burden to Sanaya as an individual and as a character called KKG. She did justice to both. Hats off to you lady.

Edited by vimmiya - 13 years ago
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Shabdon ke herpher mein itna hai maahir, sach sun dil ho gaya hai bojhil!
Doosare pe iljaam lagaya...nahi koi nayi baat...
Shukr mana aaj kismat thi tere saath!
Vaqt nahi rehta humesha sunahara...Yeh hai jindagi ka sabak pehla!

Ummeed ka daman lagaye gale, soche pareshaani ye sulajhe kaise?
Bharam toot jaata jo sach sun lete, ho jaata etebaar mujh par jaane se pehle...

Gale mein to bas hai ek pehchaan, rag rag mein basaa woh insaan...
Jaane kab khatm hoga yeh imtihaan????
Pal pal hain yaadein satati, us chuan ka ehsaas dilati...

Pyaar jab kiya jaaye khud ko bhool kar...
Zehan mein aagaahee aa jati hai khud-b-khud chal kar!
Moti ban gayein hain khud ek nishaan...pehli mulaqaat ki hain pehchaan.
Kunjee thi woh kis mannat ki? Jaise bata rahi ho kahani pyaar ke safar ki...
Meri payal bhi lagaye tumhi ko pukaar...bas ab aajao ek baar!!!!
Bad-Khwaabee se neend hai tooti, ab bas chaahoon tumhari salamati...

[Herpher = Manipulate, Maahir = Expert, Bojhil = Burden, Iljaam = Blame,
Shukr = Thanks, Kismat = Fate, Vaqt = Time, Humesha = Always,
Sunahara = Golden, Sabak = Lesson, Pehla = First, Ummeed = Hope, Daman = Hem, Sulajhe = Solve, Bharam = Doubt, Etebaar = Trust, Pehchaan = Symbol,
Rag Rag = In every vein, Insaan = Human, Imtihaan = Trial/Exam, Chuan = Touch, Ehsaas = Feel, Khud = Self, Bhool = Forget, Zehan = Mind, Aagaahee = Premonition,
Khud-b-Khud = On its own, Moti = Pearls, Nishaan = Sign, Mulaqaat = Meeting,
Kunjee = Key, Safar = Journey, Payal = Anklet, Pukaar = Call,
Bad-Khwaabee = Nightmare, Neend = Sleep, Salamati = Safety]
Payasa ThanksšŸ¤— you guys write in prose as that comes naturally and this comes easily to me...nothing great about it... šŸ˜†
Anna, Sunshine, Zuzana, Slmu ThanksšŸ¤— & thanks to all others who 'Like' the post
Pam I thought I'll mention in yesterday's thread but couldn't...I liked your analysis on mistakes and about characters yesterday!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ignorance is Bliss, sometimes... if we didn't know about the real reason behind Arnav's absence we wouldn't have been yanking our hairs out and letting out fire from our ears. See it from a lay person's view who doesn't have access to IF or doesn't read news articles and media buzz - if you were a lay person, you would be hooked on to the show wondering what in the world has happened to Arnav! Who is behind it? What will Shyam do next? Is Arnav safe or not?

If you didn't know that Barun has gone for four weeks, that he has signed a movie, and will not be coming anytime soon, your only tension would be over what has happened to Arnav, and how Khushi will deal with his absence. You would think that the track is designed perfectly well to show Khushi recognizing her feelings for Arnav.

We have access to so many sources of information that sometimes it spoils the experience of watching the show. It mars our perception and we tend to watch the show from a different, screwed up view just because we know the reality behind the scenes and episodes being shown.

Yes, the PH should have planned their tracks, episodes way ahead when they knew about Barun signing the movie, yes they have made mistakes, but who doesn't? Yes, they do have to learn from their mistakes and hopefully they will, but all this brouhaha over Barun is just over-dramatic and is taking away the enjoyment over watching the episodes with a non-prejudiced view.

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Cause I miss you, body and soul so strong
that it takes my breath away
And I breathe you into my heart
and pray for the strength to stand today
Cause I love you, whether its wrong or right
And though I can't be with you tonight
And know my heart is by your side


~ David Bedingfield (If you're not the One)


You've always been important to me. Didn't you ever know? Well, how would you know, when I myself have never realized, nor accepted it? I still am in the process of getting to know my feelings for you. They are stronger now, stronger than before, now that you're gone. And it's not just because you've gone, but because you've left with hurt in your heart, conflict in your soul, and turmoil in your mind.

I've been the cause of your torment, and all I wanted to do was to ease that for you - so that you could go with a reduced burden. I wish though that you shared your grief with us, I know how important your mother is for you, but sometimes you need to let out your pain with others so that you don't suffer as much as you do now.

All that you needed to do was to listen, and believe my words. If you had done that then I would never have entered into a deal with Shyamji. Look where it's gotten to now - the signed papers are missing, I don't trust Shyamji at all - he is cunning and is a liar, I will not commit the mistake of believing him so easily. My straightforward talk with him didn't yield much results, he claims he has no idea where the papers are. How will I prove my innocence to you?


I need to find those papers, you need to know the truth, that it was never Shyamji, never, it was... Well, it was just that my character isn't the way you think it to be, and I thought you knew, I thought you understood. I thought I knew you too, seems like I misjudged everything about you and me. I can't understand, but I miss your presence in our room. The memory of the night we shared the recliner comes back to me... so much at peace together when we're asleep. We support each other in our unconsciousness. How strange!

I remember my mangalsutra getting stuck in your shirt button... why do I feel fear now? Is it fear, or something else? I hold on to my mangalsutra, clutching it, praying, hoping that everything is fine, that you're okay. i want to talk to you, want to hear your voice. I want to tell you that I wish you were here, with me, by my side. But you're far away, away from me, away from my truth, away from my heart.


I lie alone on the bed, and I go back to the days when you slept by my side. I held on to you once, and you clasped my hand...
you were there by my side, I've got used to it, a comfortable place. But now your side is empty, there's no one to hold on to, no one to hold me. Your absence drops loneliness in my heart, it disturbs my sleep and troubles me.
I lose myself to sleep over thoughts about you... but not for long...

I hear you calling out to me, desperately you call and I immediately rush out of bed to come to you. Pearls...pearls strewn on the ground! Our story had started with these... hate it was then, deep hate between us at that time... You call out to me again, and I run into a dark arena. I look all around for you, but I just can't see you! I find your mannat ki chabi lying on the ground... the same mannat ki chabi that you threw on the ground at the Dargah and I had picked it up to return to you... your key was placed in my hands that day, a key to you, to your heart, but have I really used it? I don't know... I'm scared, frightened, afraid and need your assurance... You call my name repeatedly now, first softly, then loudly, then gentle, building into a crescendo and then soothing again... I find my payal... you had it with you on Diwali night - you never told me how you got it... there was something between us at that time, a strong feeling that neither could control, and our actions that night let loose circumstances that changed our dynamics. A powerful emotion that I haven't been able to name yet, or maybe I'm just afraid to give it a name. I asked you that night Arnavji, but you broke my heart that night... why did it hurt so much, why did I break into inconsolable tears that night, why did I feel that I lost a part of me then? I don't know, I don't know... I hold on to the items of fate that bind us (the pearls, the mannat ki chabi and my mother's payal) - I grasp them as I continue to look for you, to see you, to find you.

Your voice seems close, then far... it rushes up and then ebbs away... where are you Arnavji? I can't find you in this darkness, come out here to me, you can't just leave without me clearing your conscience... I keep searching for you, looking for you, there are veils that surround me and I can't reach out to you how much I try to... you call out my name fervently and desperately, it's too much to bear and I wake up screaming your name.
I can't sleep, no, I need to talk to you, to see if you're okay, without knowing how you are, where you are I won't be in peace.

I decide not to wake the others unnecessarily and I try your number, but I can't get through to you!
I keep trying over and over again, willing the phone to connect to yours, and I accidentally bump against a vase. Oh, me and my clumsiness! But i can't help it when I'm so worried and upset over you. Everyone comes and sits by my side as I try to calm down. There's something wrong, is it just your absence that is driving me crazy, or something else? Why is it that I feel so uneasy? Why am I so racked with despair? Why am I filled with dread over you?

Just then you message me - 'Reached London. Battery Low. Will call soon.'

At first I am glad to see your message, that you've reached, that you've informed me... but, then I continue to look at the screen, something isn't right. My eyes search your message as if trying to find the piece that doesn't fit the scenario. 'You' messaged 'me'? How is that possible? Why would you do such a thing? It's true that I may not understand you very well, but I do know you. You wouldn't have messaged me. You would have informed Anjali Di. Why me? Where are you Arnavji? What is going on?


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Okay, I'm not sure about the last part, but the look on Sanaya's face did seem like she was doubting the message. It was a thoughtful, slightly puzzled look. Khushi, please don't make me eat my words! Please wonder why Arnav would have messaged 'you'!


Love,

Nia 😊



Edited by Nia.D - 13 years ago
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#6
TRP ke liye sala kuch bhi kare ga!!!

Gul: So who gets the maximum TRPs weekly..

Team: saas bahu shows...

Gul: Damn we tried that ..but no one liked Pyal mami drama...who else??

Team: ummm cancer tracks...

Gul: *thinks*...scrap it we can't have a cancer track we already have too many ppl sick in our show ...most suffer from constipation in our show already...who else is there in the list..

Team: well there is that crime thriller...on another channel

Gul: Acha...interesting and even I read on redux somewhere that one of the founders of redux (read tanthya šŸ˜‰)...who gave us a good piece of her mind yesterday loves thrillers...done..lets do it..

Team: Done...Arnav ko ghayab kerte hian...let them go crazy thinking...shyam ne kidnap kiya, chacha from lucknow ne kiya...Aman ne kiya...Arnav ne khud ne kiya...kiya pata mama ji hi aakhir main villain nikal aayen... let them mess up their own minds...

Gul: yeah thats the idea...kam se kam hamara dimagh to nahin khayen ge and goes well with Barun's leaves...baqi thora Twilight ki New moon style chaladen ge us ke flashbacks and kabhi uski awaaz talking to khushi...sab khush...we get the trps because of their curiosity...and barun gets his leaves...zabardast...!!
And at the end of this track...Khushi can go save him bella style..we can have some stripping from Arnav voila all bleeding hearts sewn together!!
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Ok now coming to the episode:

The episode starts with Khushi and smooth tongued slippery snake having a spat about who has the papers...snake lies beautifully to khushi and then turns towards
us to give us a smirk 🤢...khushi is uncertain and is not willing to believe him but keeps mum for the time being...probably chanting in her head

liar liar pants on fire
hanging on a telephone wire (i wish šŸ˜†)

Cut the scene to mami reading a thriller and the entry of her beloved cousin...what a huge family mami has kahin na kahin so koi tapak jaata hai...
( Akash's ancestors didn't believe in birth control i guess)...anyways cut the shot to moon...the perpetual chaudween ka chaand that shines 30 nights a month
to depict night in IPK and cut to another chaudween ka chand rolling towards RM entrance...no no Arnav did not bring chand tare for khushi...tare to khsushi
ke paas pehle hi hain...chand ki kami thi woh manorama mami ke cousin braaather ne puri kerdi..coincidentally the mama is also named after the beloved moon i.e Chandu aka Masala mama!! ā­ļø
(Am i wrong or is he one of the guys from biggest loser India..I am quite sure he is one of the contestants)

The short term memory loss patient who will see all the wrongs done by shyam but will forget them on the moments he is supposed to tell them aloud?? Gajni part 2 who was brought a week earlier due to the rising hysteria of Barun Fans...šŸ˜•

Ok on a side note: Mamu is here to provide masala to the show??...or

Has the PH brought him to make a mamu of us??...or to balance the equation

TRP = 1 BS + 1 SI

directly proportional relation more BS more SI better the TRP

Now situation problem halaat ke hathon majboor so subtract 0.75BS ...

TRP = 0.25BS + 1SI

so we will have a falling TRP... but wait lets introduce mama

TRP = 0.25BS + 1SI + Mama ...equation i

Now you will say ke mama ke aane se kiya hoga so people see the following

Mama= BS*5 (weight wise)

So replacing Mama with above in equation i

TRP = 0.25 BS + 1SI + (BS*5) or
TRP = 5.25 BS + 1 SI

to TRP barhe gi thus proved...šŸ˜†

Ya phir mama has been brought to bring back the rootha munna aka Arnav...I am sorry but jab se i heard the name chundu mama
this has been playing in my head...

chandaa maama door ke
puye pakaayen boor ke
aap khaayen thaali mein
munne ko den pyaali mein

pyaali gayi toot
munnaa gayaa rooth
laayenge nayi pyaaliyaan
bajaa bajaa ke taaliyaan

munne ko manaayenge
ham doodh malaai khaayenge

udankhatole baith ke munnaa chandaa ke ghar jaayegaa
taaron ke sang aankh michauli khel ke dil bahlaayegaa
khel kood se jab mere munne kaa dil bhar jaayegaa
thumak thumak meraa munnaa waapas ghar ko aayegaa

On a very serious note...I am hoping that the Cvs are not punishing us...when we complained about Khushi OTT antics...we got gifted with bubbli...🤢
ab we couldn't digest her and screamed so we have been given masala mamu God forbid to put masala on our wounds...šŸ˜•

Oh and yes what is this with Akash getting hyper on every family members arrival...did you guys notice his speed of running towards mamu...šŸ˜†

Anyways cut to Payal and bubbli...who is still acting like a big girl trapped in a little body...I am so sure she goes to a boarding school where they give s** education in year 3...so you guessed it right that she got the hint that Payash wanted to koochikoo but she being the smart one planted herself on the bed like a cheeko ka per...kerlo beta kitna koochikoo ker sakte ho across the cheekoo bridge woh bhi if payal gets to sleep on the bed...there wasn't much space left...šŸ˜•

Cut to Khushi...poor girl missing her Arnie boy and sleeps while mulling over her flashbacks...gets pulled out of her sleep with him calling her..she gets up to follow on his call and steps on the beads which belonged to her...the romantic tug I felt in my heart was just opening its eyes when BAM I get transported to Zee Horror Show...* rubs my eyes* * peeks through* ...phew its only khushi who looks angelic in white and no churail to eat her or us...Khushi and I both come out of our nightmare...she decides to call Arnav and panics on no response...rushes down drops a vase...in a second...cue Nani ...khushi bitya...and I get transported back to Zee horror show...is nani magical or was she hanging by the light switch (I am assuming nani switched on the lights as she was the first voice I heard) then enters mami...what the...she scares me further...she had apparently squashed two red beaked green parrots on her eyelids...a few minutes later I see payal and I come back to IPK land and guess what i notice Payal's high rise platforms..abhi reeling from the shock that i wear sponge ki chappal and she wears this enters Anji baby with a clip on head...bibi raat ke 3 baje baal khol ker nahin soti kiya...clip poke nahin kerta sar main ??? And its not that she is not aware of the time...because shyamu wears a wrist watch while sleeping (mana ke its new and of 40K but shyamu is not 3 yrs of age to wear his new things to bedšŸ˜•)...knowing well that he would be asked the time and there is no wall clock in the living room...hope his wrist watch gets too tight one day while sleeping and stops the blood circulation...😈 šŸ˜†

Ends with a perplexed khushi getting Arnav's message...

Pre-cap...the new guy...he will be talked about tomorrow...

P.S: I am not a very happy bunny today so might reflect in my post...sorry for that šŸ˜› and yes no story today...if you want one read new moon from twilight series (as i still feel arnav is self exiled but for different reasons than edward though)...and its long not shortšŸ˜›šŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Absence diminishes mediocre passions & increasess great ones,
as the wind extinguishes candles & fans fires
Today Once agn we see the medicore plot & not so very planned approach of Khushi failing, I mean she did act smart by hiding the documents & yet Shyam proved to be outshining her But then agn she debates the foolishness of trusting him, looks like she has learnt the importance documents for Arnav & the negativity of Shyam, her monolougue gv you an insight to her conflict,
A new entry, me no so impressed but will not pass a verdict until a few more episodes,
For me today the brilliant SI took away the episode, Its been only a few hrs since Arnav left yet the abyss which has been formed by departure of Arnav leaves a deep impact on Khushi, the dream potryal was wonderful here combing the elements which became the foundation of their bonding, The echoing of Arnav's voice can create such anguish for Khushi, one is left wondering.
The time & lateness of the hour doesnt stop her from seeking comfort in his wellbeing, she is trying all possible resources to calm herself, yet when everyone hears bereft & finds her nervous, joins her in the familial setting, once agn mami tries to degrade her, yet as always Khushi isnt bothered, Here SI eyes & expression were appluadablešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
She recieves a message on cell & evryone heaves a sigh but do I ? No ,my overexicted brain questions, why isnt anyone at RM find this strange, as till this morning she wsnt even aware that he is leaving for London, or when she returned bk from Airport, she had a outpouring of heart with his sister, yet everyone is pleasantly relaxed, For me there is one more question huants why isnt she finding it akward, the person who wasnt talking to her at airport, snubbing her has been avoiding her the whole morning, how he suddenly repling to her, anyways a new day may bring a new insight
for me the Highlight of the day was
ā­ļøā­ļøKhushi kumari gupta singh raizadaā­ļøā­ļø
This is my dedication to khushi

One kind kiss before we part, Drop a tear and bid adieu; Though we sever, my fond heart till we meet shall pant for you

PS: When she moved to the recliner, in last redux someone wanted her to lie on it & miss him, I was hoping the same but Alas😭
Edited: Tants Loved the title, yes indeed its a maze of emotions & love for KKG which has only one to it the is Aranv Sing RaizadašŸ‘šŸ¼
Edited by Jhalak29 - 13 years ago
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what an apt title for todays episode...

khushi has caught herself in chakravyuha (labyrinth)..finding hard to come out... for no doors seems to be open...

update later...


Edited by payasa - 13 years ago
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#9

Nobody is indispensable...

Gul you should have realized this when you started this show. Planned the tracks in such a way that not all the burden will be on leads. Especially when you have this awesome chemistry and the respoonse from the audience if a day goes by without the leads. You were given ample oppurtunites to learn from you mistake and you choose to ignore that.
Now when you motto is The Show Must Go On.. how long are the audience going to buy that.. A week without the chemistry between leads was just enough for us to pull our hair out start cribbing and now we are talking about 4 weeks.
I have to give it to the CVs and director for the wonderful episode today. I honestly didn't miss Arnav much as I missed him yesterday.. I was so focused on Sanaya/Khushi.
But Gul sometimes not many chances will be given to you and its always wise to learn from mistakes. Especially when you had everything in hand and could have done something magical.
Side Note:Abhaas was looking so fresh today.. Something about IPK and white...
Edited by mommamia - 13 years ago
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Yup gr8 analysis by everyonešŸ‘šŸ¼ I am actually liking this track. They are showing the growth in Khushi's character and moving overall story forward. I also love how they are showing Khushi's slow realization that now Arnav has become her world - inner outer both.

This is what was required and glad that they are on track, hope now we see only progress and progress for atleast some time to come.😊
Edited by b.sarika2 - 13 years ago

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