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AngelTeen

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Very well written. The pain, the helplessness, the confusion shined through. Great job.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: devsum
My heart ached, tears fell down I could literally taste her pain. Awesome.

Oh wow really? It's a huge compliment when your writing can move someone to tears, means i must have done something right! 😆 Thank you! 😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: greenarrow
Awesome OS.. had tears in my eyes..

Thanks for appreciating! 😊

I'm glad i was able to convey their pain.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Very well written. The pain, the helplessness, the confusion shined through. Great job.

Thanks for appreciating! 😊

All the things you mentioned were exactly what i was trying to convey in the OS.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: rukuswasthika
beautifully written.continue soon dear

Thanks for appreciating! 😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: KriaReyansh
beautifully written!

Thank you for appreciating! 😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Thank You Note

Just a quick thank you note to everyone who read, liked and commented on my OS! It's my first OS on ArHi and i'm glad you felt i was able to convey their feelings well! 😃

It's always good to get feedback on the stuff you write, so a special thanks for those who took the time out to do so. 😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: icegurl789
nycc!

Thanks for reading and appreciating! 😊

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