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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ashvez
That was very touching and quite amazing.a bit heart wrenching too, as both are so helpless.And more importantly Arnav...as he doesn't want the acceptance for her relationship with Shyam.
Ou write beautifully...write more often please.

Ash.

Thank you for the compliment! 😊

Glad you thought it was heart-wrenching because i wanted to get the helplessness of both of them across to the readers.

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rima

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

u arite really well and clearly. i loved it . made me feel emotional and sad esp in the last part. conitnue. resolve the issue please

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lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Awesome OS👏 - Loved it very much.

I would love to read more. So much feelings. Great job.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rima
u arite really well and clearly. i loved it . made me feel emotional and sad esp in the last part. conitnue. resolve the issue please

Thanks Rima! 😊

As for continuing... i don't know. It was supposed to be a one-off but if i get the time, i'll defo think about it. Thanks for reading!