IP REDUX; Crash & Burn !! *edited*

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--Anna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: tanthya

The best way of narrating the ongoing track..the changes that ought to be brought in..How to restore Khushi

There are so many ways Sathya! If its like you both said yesterday then this track is being build up for Khushi's redemption - that will only restore her character back.

But I so wish they had not stretched this MU! It has been too long now! And more importantly I really have started missing Shyam! 😆

My analyis in response at page 18! 😉

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srijaaa127

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: tanthya

Thank You, Sri 🤗..

How is ur exam going on 😊

Sucessfully completed tanthya

Thank u soo much for ur wishes🤗

Am soo happy and my presentation was also gud

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--Anna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: prathikri
Hey Anna 🤗

hey Praths!! 😊 -- I have done tid-bit on page 18! See it! 😉

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tanthya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Ankifan
Hea all🤗

Sathu, i re read ur analysis now with a strong cup of coffee, see things dont look that bad to me now. 😆 Loved it🤗 And u show so much patience and neglect the way things are shown rather u catch hold of the minute information that the track speaks.. Brilliant.. 😃

doods, loved ur post🤗. I got totally frustrated looking at the office scene, and why is office scenes treated so so badly.. It makes me cringe..
I loved ur below line, hope Gul works on this
The entire work of all your writers went down the drain just because the "Treatment" of the track is Nonsense.

Heyyy Divs ,

That has been the bane of this track, Divs..teh presentation sucks... They are going deep not realizing that all viewers are not swimmers who will willingly follow them ,Many are shallow swimmers ..u have to spoonfeed this section

Thanks Sweetie 😃

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tanthya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: srijaaa127

Sucessfully completed tanthya
Thank u soo much for ur wishes🤗
Am soo happy and my presentation was also gud

Great !! and congratulations, Sri 🤗

Arrey, You did not need my wishes at all.. u did it on ur own merit and hardwork..😃

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tanthya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: --Anna--

There are so many ways Sathya! If its like you both said yesterday then this track is being build up for Khushi's redemption - that will only restore her character back.

But I so wish they had not stretched this MU! It has been too long now! And more importantly I really have started missing Shyam! 😆

My analyis in response at page 18! 😉

@ Bold List them, specify ...The MU got stretched bec they opened many subplots under it and MU will get cleared as the sub plots begin to close ...😊

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SunoNa123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: tanthya

Heyyy Divs ,

That has been the bane of this track, Divs..teh presentation sucks... They are going deep not realizing that all viewers are not swimmers who will willingly follow them ,Many are shallow swimmers ..u have to spoonfeed this section

Thanks Sweetie 😃

Very true Sathya, presentation sucks.

Im even upset at Nani u see

My dad is a diabetic frm long, and i hv experienced to which extent it can take on their health. Being a elder women in that home, she least cares for his health, yest i just felt for him, tell me one person who shows genuine care towards him in action and not in words??

All talks no action.

And most of us are working women, when they show office scenes such poorly and in such a irritating fashion who will even try decoding what was the message behind this?? It leaves us so frustrated that one will feel like switching off tv.

My mom usually likes kushi's OTT antics also, she keeps smiling. She couldnt tolerate Kushi yest, for the first time she walked away looking at the precap without watching the show.

Their should be a thin line is showing comedy, it shouldnt look crass.

We all have passed that 18yr og age, and we were nt like this at that age, so 18 yr is no reason to be enough to understand her.

the writer's dont even work on her inner monologues, how are we to understand what she is going through??

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Awaaz do humko

Hum kho gaye

kab neend say jagay

kab so gaye

mar jayaingy hum ager... door tum say hogaye...

SaSheen :D

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srijaaa127

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: tanthya

Great !! and congratulations, Sri 🤗

Arrey, You did not need my wishes at all.. u did it on ur own merit and hardwork..😃

Haan tanthya i did it on my hardwork for sure but u know if someone wishes me whole heartedly when i was really stuck in some serious tension , it feels soo pleasant and great for me🤗

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--Anna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: tanthya

@ Bold List them, specify ...The MU got stretched bec they opened many subplots under it and MU will get cleared as the sub plots begin to close ...😊

But where is Shyam!? Three days hogaye and villian hi gayab hai😆 Was not his track supposed to have Shyam - Arnav - Khushi and Anjali!? 😕 And here comes a Ms. B also! 😆

Hmmm - if they really wanted to show Khushi lose everything then she should have not been this chirpy. Marriage for Khushi has always been important - instead of trying to run away from it - she should have shown to grow up and realize that the world is not thaty beautiful - she should have picked up on clues rather than waste them on comedy - Shyam should have been shown to be a pain in both Arnav and Khushi's life. If intensifying MU was the main track then it should have done in a very good way - Arnav's Khushi's love equation should have been revived with both confused, pain, agony - distrust , huge confrontations.

Sathya - nothing has made me hate Arnav till now - especially with this track. Make me hate him - make me feel that yes he indeed is wrong and he needs that huge redemption that everyone craves for. Moreover i cannot see much of Khushi's pain = there should be scenes where Khushi is actually shown broken - given up - her hopes and dreams have been shattered - I need to see the pain she is going through. True she hides it all behind the smiling face - but I want to see her alone moments just like I want to see Arnav's confusion - his trying to decode every situation.

Arnav Shyam confrontation again very very important. Oh man! the list can just go on and on and on! 😆