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Posted: 13 years ago
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ahhh man don't leave us hanging!?!?!?!

AWESOME :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
thanks for the warning... it did end abruptly! 😆

please continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2: "Khushi?!"

"Khushi?!"

Hastily throwing his mattress away, Arnav rushes towards the glass door. On swinging it open, what he sees pricks him like a thousand needles.

Sitting by the corner of the pool with her hands over knees, he sees Khushi, completely drenched, shivering. She sat there, unaware of his presence or anything else for that matter. She seemed to be lost in thought as she appeared to be staring at something distant...

"KHUSHI!" He yells. He rushes towards her, as a result of which he gets drenched as well.

"Are you crazy?! Why are you still outside?" he shouts.. Noticing that she wasn't responding or even acknowledging him.. He grabs hold of her arm and shakes her yelling

"Khushi! Dammit look at me, I'm speaking to you!"

Still numb, Khushi just continues to stare off into the distance..

Frustrated by her ignorance, he does the only thing that comes to his mind.

He carries her.

Gently he lifts her up and he places her cold arm over his shoulder. Ever so carefully, he holds her and carries her into the room not breaking eye contact with her the entire time. He gently lowers her down onto the bed. Noticing that she was still shivering, he fetches some towels, and a warm blanket. Carefully, he wraps the blanket around her to give her some warmth. "Are you okay?" He asks her, his voice full of concern. She manages to nod slowly.

He rushes to his wardrobe to find some warm clothes for her to wear during the night but finds nothing in her side of the wardrobe. He decides to give her his warm UCLA grey hoodie. Giving it to her, he temporarily goes away from the room , so that she can change. When he returns, he finds her in his clothes, looking as adorable as one can get.

He helps her into the bed."But.." She begins to protest "Shh, I don't want to hear anything. You aren't sleeping outside, that's final." He carefully tucks her in asking her again if she was alright. She was so tired and sleepy , to Khushi it felt to good to be warm and in a comfy bed again.She nodded off to sleep in an instant.

He took a minute to look at her while she was sleeping. She looked like an angel. He wished she was his, completely. He wished that she'd forever be HIS angel, his wife. But he knew, that their marriage was not one that was to last forever. To think that he'd be away from her after six months, pained him. Yet, somewhere he wanted to be away from her for the only reason that he would forget her. He was getting used to her presence, she had brought color into his life..To lose her would be so hard. He wanted to hate her, how much he wanted to hate her. But he couldn't. Mesmerized, he gently bent down towards her and gave her a soft kiss on her forehead.

How much he loved her, he couldn''t explain.

Whenever, they touched, he felt a hot , almost electric reaction towards her. It was a sensation, so brilliant, so magnificent that one had to experience it to describe it.

He sat beside her , watching her sleep making sure she was okay.. Soon, he fell asleep beside her, his hand holding hers.

The next morning Khushi woke up to a terrible headache. Bright sunlight filtered through the windows and filled the room. She slowly opened her eyes, squinting through the light.

She winced. Her head was throbbing now, and she couldn't get herself up.. Suddenly she realized that she wasn't in the poolside.. She was in his room..


Thanks guys for the comments! They encourage me to write more 😊 Do hit like if you do! Appreciate it! 🤗

Edited by ipkkndfan3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Wow! That was nice! Continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it,felt bad for both arnav and kushi,😭😭😭do write kushi's point of view 😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heeey.

Really like the way this OS is goin do carry on wanna see what happened to Khushi seems like she's sick

Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What Happened With Khushi ?! Why Was She Totally Lost; I'm Sure Something Bad Happened To Her :( 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do continue it dear... love to read more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continuee , Continnueee ! :)
this was Fab.. can't wait to know what happens next, updateee ! Poor Khush.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was great... Arnav no matter how hard he tries he can't fight his feelings for Khushi ...in the end he always ends up caring for her...😍

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