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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks dear, glad u liked it. :)
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Originally posted by: ipkknd_lover

a nice start ...plz pm me the next part

thanks dear, sure will pm ya when I update next.😊''''
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Thanks for such a warm response to my OS. I am happy that you all liked it and thanks for the comments keep them coming. Sorry for the delay, I hope you like it. Please note the words/ sentence that I have underlined is suppose to be scribbled, do forgive my errors

*PART TWO*

As Khushi sat there on her bed silently debating with herself about opening the Letter Arnav had 'apparently' sent to her via Anjali. She also felt the envelope was little bit heavy compared to normal stuff she wondered what it had simultaneously debating. Her heart said yes at once then her mind said no, she didn't know what she should be doing right now. Then she thought aren't I suppose to be busy with friends and relatives as it is my wedding tomorrow. Her mind kept changing on opening the letter, Khushi took a deep breath and said Jai Devi Maiya ki and finally ripped off the envelope. Now the hardest part taking it out and actually reading what it says she thought.

Khushi talked to her self loudly as she was alone in her room and said chalo dekhte hai kya bheja hai Mr Raizada ne (Let's see what Mr Raizada have send me) Then she said nahi nahi ye toh Arnav ji ne bheji hai (no no this is from Arnav ji) just as she said that her cheeks went crimson red. In a second she hit reality on what was happening to her? Her mind kept diverting all the time from her Laksh (target) Khushi once again took a deep breath and pulled the papers out of the envelope and noticed few things fell on her feet. She exclaimed when she saw the glitters falling on her feet and some Rose petals that had already found their place on her feet. She said out loud aww how romantic and smiled to herself with a blush that just kept deepening, but in an Instant she screamed out loud "WHAT THE" "WHAT THE" "WHAT THE FREEEAKKK" Itne saare pages...(so many pages) Khushi was dumbstruck she could not stop blinking her eyes in shock thinking is this a letter or a resignation contract letter to be filled out? But I had given ASR written notice of resignation two weeks in advance on paper and two months in advance verbally. What the hell is wrong with this man she thought.

Khushi almost had her eyes pop out this time for sure when she saw the letter was handwritten and then thought Hey DM ye Arnavji ko kya hogaya hai?Hey Devi Maiya what is wrong with Arnavji now)The letter went like this:

My Dear Khushi Dear Khushi,

I honestly don't know how let you know how happy I am for your wedding.

Okay here you go your bonus check for working at ASR group of industries for over a year. I know it would be hard for you but I kindly request you to write a letter in terms of feedback and how did you like ASR group of industry. I know I should have asked you to do this before but it just slipped off my mind sweety I hope you don't mind. That is why there are so many pages to your letter but few of them have something on it which only you would be able to understand I hope. I want you to read it carefully and then respond on how your experience has been in working with me. If you're thinking is this really needed? Then of course yes miss, it is needed even Lavanya had penned down few notes for me in the end.

I would be looking forward to read your letter in New Zealand. Just want to once again wish you a very happy married life and a bright future in ADVANCE.

Yours Arnav.

*Meanwhile*

Arnav's instincts had somehow informed him that the letter had been open, he mumbled to himself hope she opened it not Payal or Di. Arnav started worrying and more of was sweating badly even though it was winter, finally holding both his hands in the form of worshipping and said Hayee Khushi ki Devi Maiya and indirectly spoke to DM just the way Khushi does. Shyam his bestie watched all Arnav's action silently until Arnav had finished all his first time prayer to DM and Shyam busted out laughing badly he fell on the floor from the bed where he was seated from. Arnav turned around and saw Shyam laughing for no reason he thought and said "What the" instantly

Shyam replied "Unbelievable"

Arnav: What? Unbelievable you know that's my word and has no Copyrights alright. By the way why are you laughing did you crack some joke that I didn't hear?

Shyam: OMG since when did you talk about Copyrights verbally? I thought it was only used for work. Ohh!! Yes, Did I just see you performing a short prayer there? Or I'm just dreaming pal?

Arnav: Whatever suits you alright I don't care what you just saw there. Believe what you want to I am not gonna explain.

Shyam: Alright alright calm down hot head.

*Arnav calmed himself down and thought about what Shyam had asked him about Verbal Copyrights? Hmmm.. Maybe its just because of that mad girl he said out loud again.

Shyam : Who is this mad, stupid girl you keep talking about to yourself?😉

Arnav: Shut up you don't need to know everything right?
Shyam: Well I know everything you don't want me to know dear. He mumbled to himself and Speed Dialed Anjali's number.

*Khushi & Arnav both having panic attacks by just thinking about the last 10mins that had changed half of their future. Arnav thought to himself while smriking and said the other half of our lives would be changing pretty soon Khushi. __________________________________________

By then Shyam without informing Arnav had walked out of the room.

Anjali : Hellooo

Shyam: Hey did you give Khushi all that parcel that our Chote had sent?

Anji: Yes, Ofcourse but I have no idea if she has opened it yet?

Shyam: Say what? You know even if I am not present there I came to know Khushi has even opened the letter at least but don't know if she has read it yet and he giggled😲

Anji: Suspiciously asked how do you know? Did Chote call her?

Shyam: Ohh my dear, just the way our hearts connected don't you think his would be connected as well. (He winked as if she could see seriously Shyam?😛

Anji: Blushed as if she saw him wink? She nodded and said okay I'll go and check what the status is and will let you know dear.

Both of them said Love you and hung up

Shyam re-entered Arnav's room and just sat there talking to him even if Arnav wasn't interested today.

*Khushi's bedroom*

Khushi was feeling uneasiness the moment she finished reading the 1st page and sighed in relief but she didn't know that feeling of some erroneous that was still hitting her heart.

She saw the 1st page carefully and noticed that it was wet.

Khushi: Arnavji roye? Nahi no she fought with the good side of her's (even the thoughts of Arnav crying was killing her for a second.) Until she denied saying he might have dropped some water then again her mind diverted saying why did he scribble few sentences in the letter? Hmm.

Khushi moved on to the 2ndpage of the letter and saw a big HEART in little pink in the middle of the paper. She was totally mesmerized at the same time wondering on what's wrong with her and her Arnavji.

Why am I getting the good satisfied feeling when I'm looking at the letter he sent me, even though the 2ndpage is blank it only has that big HEART in between and My Dear Love at the left hand side of the page? She looked back and forth on all the pages that were unread yet; all were the same she was traumatized by this kind of behaviour indirectly Arnav had represented towards her.

Khushi flicked all the pages back to page #1 in very fine letters at the footer it said

P.S : I hope you remember how to read the rest of the few pages sweety. If not forget it!

Arnav while talking to Shyam said: You know I shouldn't have done this to her!

Shyam : What?

Arnav: Maine usse itna satana nahi chahiye tha mafi pehli hi mang lena tha(I shouldn't have done this to her and troubled her like this, I should have asked for her forgiveness in advance to her leave)

Shyam: Aaarey yaar why are you taking so much tension when she reads your letter she'll forgive you yaar!

Arnav: What if she won't remember how to read it?

Shyam was puzzled with this and said not worry if you have written it in Hindi or English she would understand I hope you haven't written in some Egyptian language *Shyam laughed with this* Leaving ASR irritated.

Arnav said aarey maine paper blank rakha hai voh pagal kahi fad kar na fek de!😔 (bro, I have left the paper blank, that crazy girl shouldn't destroy it out)

*Anji & Payal knocked on Khushi's door she screamed out loud in anxiety*

Anji & Payal entered the room and saw a horrified Khushi.

Anji: Sab theek toh hai na? Kahi Chote ne kuch ulta seedha toh nhi likha?

Payal giggled

Khushi was still in shocked and said nahi jab dekho tumhe voh galat kyu lagta hai haan?( Everytime you talk about Arnav why do you like to prove him wrong)

Anji: Aarey voh humara bhai hai btw ye kya hai? Blank Papers?(He is my brother that's why, btw what is this?)

Khushi: Voh kuch nahi bas aise hi papers hai.(Oh that is nothing, just papers)

Payal: Aaarey ye faltu k papers mai kya h.. ohhoo Dil hai Dil kisi ka dil..(What is there in this useless blank papers.. ohhh Someone's heart whose heart is that😉 She said and then asked Khushi if she could destroy the papers as its plain but no writing in it.

Anji: Was mesmerized the way Khushi replied to Payal.

Khushi: Jiji aise pagalo jaise baate mat karo please. Aap bas ja kar humare liye ek candle and matchbox le kar aoo. (Sis, please don't talk like mad people , just go and get candle and matchbox please) Oh yes! That paper is my now and forever, Khushi fold her arms near her chest in anger. She just couldn't say anything else.

Anji started humming "Do Dil mil rahe hai, Magar Chup ke Chup ke" (Two hearts are meeting each other slowly) Khushi Fumming in anger and kept murmuring to herself while Arnav felt he could hear someone's sweet curse. Arnav Smriked*

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Do let me know if I should continue or not. Like/Comment. I think I would finish it off in next part!
Edited by smritz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi, just read all the parts and i absolutely adored it... you are keeping the suspense and i's loving it. you are gifted. What a great way to start my day. thx.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY I JST READ BOTH D PARTS N ITS GR8...
PLZ CONTINUE SOON...N PM ME PLZZZ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aadyakali

Hi, just read all the parts and i absolutely adored it... you are keeping the suspense and i's loving it. you are gifted. What a great way to start my day. thx.

Awww thanks for liking my work and thanks for so much appreciation and your kind words😳. I'm just pleased to get my work to you all and glad I could make someone happy😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: esha108

HEY I JST READ BOTH D PARTS N ITS GR8...

PLZ CONTINUE SOON...N PM ME PLZZZ

Sure will pm ya, thanks for liking my work 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww super cute part 2..conti soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was an amazing update!! :)
i luv yur writing!
update soon & do pm me.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Read both parts. So cute!

Update soon...

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