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hershii

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thank you so much all of you! this really means a lot! I am touched with the response! And not only on here, the PMs i got! omg you guys are amazing! And i am so sorry for making you all so emotional, it was not suppose to be this depressing. When i first wrote it i was going for funny, but then it went in a whole different direction. But wow i really can't thank you enough, I am overwhelmed with the response!

However, I am really sorry to disappoint. There won't be a part 2 of this. I can't continue it cause then it would kill the intensity of it haha! I wanted to leave a realistic ending to this, cause i mean i don't think they would get together just like that you know. So by continuing with this, i think it would ruin the OS. So really sorry, i can't continue this...and really i don't even know what i would write LOL!

But i do promise to write more OS's and bore you all =D And those of you who thought you got a PM for forever mine...LOL sorry! But i am gonna try to update that this weekend too =D so look out for another PM!

Thank you so much once again! You all rock! I will reply to everyone individually! =)

xox

hershi

ps: Those of you who PM'd be asking about the song it is by Nickelback its called Far Away. =) Its a beautiful song! One of my favs from back in the day =D The lyrics are amazing...and i thought it fit perfectly to ArHi =D

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hershii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17
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Aww Hershi. you should hav told me to keep a box of tissues near me! damn next time will keep tht in mind

It wuz amazing Hershi! I loved it so much! the ending wuz so intenseee!! You were right, it would hav ruined it if i had seen that.

N it didn't sound weird silly! you are just being silly as always ahah.

i luv tht song by Nickelback! it is awesome!!

loved it and see I edited comment be4 you even yelled at me!!
BIGGG!

sorrryy!! lol i didn't think it would turn out to be so emotional! Next time i shall keep it in mind hehehe!

thank you so much hun! im so glad u liked it!!! I KNOWW..i really wanted u to read that part.."a lone tear falls from her eyes as his breath hitched" to see if it was good...hehehe but then i was like hmm no it would ruin it for her lol!!!

haahah phew...im so glad everyone liked it...im so touched <333

OMG I KNOW! i love that song..its one of my favs...the lyrics are beautiful and so touching <333

and good girl! i was about to come behind u to comment on it..hahaha ...thanks again <333

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hershii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: lyraa
loved it specially the ending.. so beautifully expressed that m left speechless.. just amazing..

thank you so much! im so glad u liked it <3 I didn't think it would turn out so emotional...but im happy everyone enjoyed it! =D thank you thank you thank youuu <333

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun
omg this was too good...you described their emotions so beautifully...and the ending was heartbreaking yet so beautiful that it gave me tears...really loved it

awww...im so sorry for making you cry =/ i didn't mean for it to turn so emotional...but once i started writing it i couldn't stop lol! Thank you so much...im so glad u liked it...it really means a lot!!!

Originally posted by: the_rain

I was all happy getting your PM as I thought you've updated Forever Mine..😆

But this OS was simply superb. You did a great job here, particularly loved the ending...👏

hahahahah sorrryyy!!! i will update that soon =D maybe by tonight...or tomorrow!!! so look out for a PM haha!!

Thank you so much hun! im so glad u liked it! It means a lot coming from you...since ur such an awesome writer!!! The ending...was not suppose to be like that...i was going for a funny/happy ending but then i was like no...let me try something different haha!!! Thank you so muchhh <3333

Originally posted by: aparna5293
Amazing harshi. U describe their emotions very well.

thank you so much! im so glad u liked it =)

Originally posted by: taniks
Awww thatv was devastatingly beautiful , I loved it .

thank you so much dear <3

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

dude.
that end was depressing. like killo. killa. killer.
wow.

that was. intense, yet so damn SAD!

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hershii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ipkkndank
Loved it
really really nice OS
and very specially i liked the last part it really touching

superb
update your FF too dear waiting to read the next part of it :-)

thank you so much! im so glad u liked it =) yea the last part did turn out to be very emotional! Thank u once again! Yes haha forever mine will be updated sooon =D thank u for reading <333

Originally posted by: sarach
woww.loved it..it was fab.too good

thank you so much <33

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan
OMG! How beautiful!

hehehe...thank you <3

Originally posted by: harsh42
Hershii!!! 😃
That was too good of an OS. . . . .
And an extremely emotional one!!
My eyes filled up at the end. . . . . . . . 😭

Thanks for the PM darling 😊

Thank u hun! im so glad u liked it <333 Ahhh so sorry for making u emotional...i didn't think it would turn out to be so sad and intense. Gosh u guys are amazing <333 thank u so much!!!

Originally posted by: sushipie01
This is absolutely AMAZING Hershi!! :)

thanks shreya hun <3 im so glad u liked it!

Originally posted by: lara3110
AWESOME

thank you!! =)

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lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Yoour OS was beautiful.👍🏼

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Krishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

100th liker! Woot. Woot. lol

Great OS! So sad though. That was awesome! Thanks for the PM!

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hershii

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: littlemoi
that was just beautiful!! i simply loved it!! you have described and penned down their emotions and feelings soo very well!! the ending was soo heartbreaking... i had tears in my eyes!! thank you so much for the pm!! had a great time reading!! loved the os!!

omg thank u so much!! i really tried to get their feelings right...im glad it worked! Aww i am so sorry for making u cry i was going for a happy ending but then went for this...thought it would be more realistic...thank u so much for liking it and appreciating my work it really means a lot <3

Originally posted by: dyhardfan
Omg dis is so sad... U made me cry. Plz write more... It helps keep my mind busy... Cant stop tinkn abt da maha epi... Hope we get somethng good. Thnx dear

sorrryyy...didn't mean to make u cry =( thank u so much for reading! i will definitely write more but not on here...i will write other stuff =) thank u so much <3 i know im excited about the ME too! wonder whats in store for us! thanks again <3

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
Hershi my love!!! that was beautifull in a very sad way! Arnav is such a Gadha! baqi har mamlay may he's a go getter aur yahan he wants the girl to take the first step so he can throw it in her face only to regret it later!!! but beautifully written yaar! keep it up!

mufffinnn darling <33333 thank u so muchhh!!! I agree...he is a total idiot! Love does the scariest things to people hahaha! And not to forget, her ego is in the way too..so can't blame just him...hahaha! thank u so much for appreciating darling <3