OS: Letting Go (Note pg 5)

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hershii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Bloem123
Amazing!!

thank u =)

Originally posted by: malluangel
dude.
that end was depressing. like killo. killa. killer.
wow.

that was. intense, yet so damn SAD!

i kknowww...it got really depressing...i was like woah did i write that? after i wrote it...i read it thorugh and i had tears in my eyes...but then i was like maybe its my emotional self doing that lol...well im glad everyone enjoyed it! thank u for reading my love <33333

Originally posted by: lara3110
Yoour OS was beautiful.👍🏼

thank u so much!! <3

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
100th liker! Woot. Woot. lol

Great OS! So sad though. That was awesome! Thanks for the PM!

yayyy!!hahaha

thank u so much! im so glad u liked it =) yeah turned out sad didn't it? sorry about that lol!!

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Divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

oh!!
it was so beautiful!!
nicely written

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Very poignantly written. You write so well.

KF

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Oh God!
Hershi, now toh you definetely need to write a part two finish this off! Happy ending toh banta hai boss!

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Hi Hershi!! I'm first time reading your works!! You write amazing! Seriously yaar, you gave reason you wrote this everything but you didn't say this is gonna be a sad one..!😭

When I was reading, I was like, Ok they will end together at the end.. But when I read it actually, i felt depressed!! Saying 'I love you' separately..! Bad yaar!!😡

Now, I'm gonna read your SS. And hope it's happy happy.. (Else alos I'll read)..!😉

Continue your work dear! And Please PM me whenever you do!😊

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hershii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: uswah
Amazing OS u wrote it beautifully and tht Song is just perfect ...i can feel like it happened infront of my eyes...awsum

aww thank u so much! im so glad u liked it...yeah the song is one of my favs...i thought it fit them perfectly so used it =D thanks once again!

Originally posted by: angelic shaz
dat was amazinggg just loved arnavs emotions and khushi's 2
awesum wrk!!!

thank u so much for reading and appreciating!! i am so glad u liked it =D

Originally posted by: harsh42
You and your "REALISTIC ENDINGS"!!! 😲
Now who's mad at whom??!!!
Hhmmph. . . 😡
That's right!!
Me mad at you!! 😆

hhahahaa u can't be mad at meee...u love me =D

u knowww i can't write more...it would ruin the story the OS lol!!! but what if i make it up to u and try to write a happy OS?? =D

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hershii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Vsc94
Amazing! 👏👏

Patha nahin, what all we have to go through for Arnav to confess his love! Khushi I am not worried about...she will babble it out sometime!

So all you writers, please keep me happy...😉😉😉

thank u so much hun! i am really glad u liked it! thank u for reading and appreciating my work! yeah seriously..the way he is goin in the show right now..god knows when we will get a confession from him lmao!!

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hershii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: harshabashpam

My problem with the show's Arnav lies in the way he is treating La... I mean, if he doesn't really feel anything towards her, why doesn't he just tell her so and put an end to the damn thing?😡 😆
And i haven't watched today's ME yet...
LOL and about my username. It's malayalam.
harsham means joy, and bashpam means tear... so it basically means 'tear of joy'..

the name is actually inspired from an old malayalam movie song starting 'harshabashpam thooki...' My uncle used to sing that to me when i was little, and i used to be super annoyed😆... But now for some reason i love the song...😳

i knoww! that annoys me tooo...i really hope she doesn't turn negative after the whole revelation i love her in the show..she is so cute and i want her to be friends with khushi and support her! omgg that is so adorableee!!!! how unique and cute =)