OS: Heartbreaks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

excellent.. the flow was too good. hope Arnav reacts the same in the show too..

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shena07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

omg superb..i want it to be like this

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

👍🏼🥳wow...

that was just wow...

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

I wanted this to happen sach main!!!

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serendipity235

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Why, oh why arent you the scrpt writer of this show!
This is EXACTLY what everyone wants to see happen.

Apart from that, brilliant writing - lovely flow, flawless language which made it such a pleasure to read.

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sparkle2985

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

hey ur back waiting for the update of ur ff also gal ... nice os cont it...

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-Tanu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

That's beautiful, Janet. You have no idea how much I miss your writing these days 😭

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arshia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

@Janet...BRilliant!!! Tit for Tat.*** Rubs my hand in glee***...how does it feel Dude?? And yes!! good u din't give a glimpse of her...ab Tadap...TAdap...(Abhi...***Palat..PAlat...ke liye toh time hai***...hehehhe!!)

Good one JAnie...good one!!👍🏼🤗

I hope Chicky is feeling better now...a 🤗 to u too Chicky.

Ash.

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shybabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Hey janet...its been a while since I saw a post from you...

Its awesome...as always👏

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-Janet-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Hahahaha, yeah yaay :P

Yaar by bad I meant that it wasn't like a pick me up. It was angsty and depressing and really had no happy ending. Those are kinda depressing na. Glad you liked it.

Is that what you want in the show? Chicky and I had 2 ideas - this was one, the angst. The other and our bigger favorite is her IGNORING him completely. Not looking, not talking, etc.

Let's see how it plays out. Hahaha, you're welcome on Chicky's behalf :-)

Originally posted by: aquablue17
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Kay first before I comment on the writing itself, I am first!!! yaya!!🥳🥳🥳

Okay now bk to writing. Janet What the!?!? Why did you keep saying that was bad?!! I bet that it EXACTLY how it is going to happen in the show! That is how I imagined it whenever I thought bout Arnav finding out!

It was brilliant as always hun! Pshh Don't ever think your writing is bad! It is always top notch😆
And the topic itself was depressing but mostly since no one wants our Arhi parting. 😆

Lovely job and thanks Chicky for me for making you write this😃

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-Janet-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

You're welcome, but shhh about the PM. It was a one off just for you since you had PM'ed me earlier ;-) I usually don't PM for OSes!

Originally posted by: n091505
Hey Janet!!! As always you've done an awesome job👍🏼... Thanks a ton for the PM. I'm getting greedy now🐷... want more of these OS (an FF would be fab.!!!!!)

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