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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS -Falling for you!

I lay on my bed, couldn't stop thinking of you. I couldn't sleep all night, to see tears in your eyes...is like thousand knives into my heart...I wont be able to take this anymore...I can never see you depressed...oh how I wish I could tell you what I feel for you...but do you feel the same way...I ask myself...

And there you were in front of me again...teasing me...back to your usual charades. Seeing her this way , a smile tugged on the corner of my lips...Like a little child you ran away from me...as usual...but all I wanted to do is pull you towards me and ask you... Do you feel the same way I do?

There she was browsing through the paper for a a silly silver coin...breaking something precious to me...but when I look into your eyes I realize there is nothing precious than your smile...

A silly silver coin...It was silly for me but meant the world to you...All I wanted to do is see a smile on your face...so if it meant, doing silly things myself I would do it in a heartbeat...

When your face lights up, it takes my breath away and the thought of you being there makes my day...You have changed my life in a way I could never imagined '...like the way I felt when you came running to me into my arms...I just cant stop falling for you...I am addicted to you...like a moth to a flame...

" I never imagined that this feeling would find me someday, never imagine that it would be you who would make me feel that way, you have caught me off guard Khushi Kumari Gupta and took me by surprise, but I know I am falling for you, when I look into your captivating eyes.."

Oh how I wish I could tell you what I falling for you, but do you feel the same way, I ask myself...?





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Posted: 13 years ago
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very well expressed dear...good job, how about you writing a ff on this? your intoxicated confessions was very nice and sounded very real too...give us one more like that one :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just fabulous!!
you did a splendid job on this !!
really enjoyed reading this!!
thank you so much for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED this! Thanks for the PM! It expresses his feelings SO beautifully!
I am falling for these two MORE and MORE everyday!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabulous OS sweetheart👏👏.. completely heart-touching😳.. it was beautiful😃.. ofcourse it had to be.. was describing the feelings of my ASR after all😉 haha😆.. "Do you feel the same way I do?" 😍 😍😍😍WOW.. i loved this line a lot😃.. thanks for the pm sweetie😊.. n keep it up..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshi1

very well expressed dear...good job, how about you writing a ff on this? your intoxicated confessions was very nice and sounded very real too...give us one more like that one :)


Thanks my friend...I am seriously thinking of writing a FF once again...still think of a catchy tittle...I may start it tomorrow...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _mahi_

fabulous OS sweetheart👏👏.. completely heart-touching😳.. it was beautiful😃.. ofcourse it had to be.. was describing the feelings of my ASR after all😉 haha😆.. "Do you feel the same way I do?" 😍 😍😍😍WOW.. i loved this line a lot😃.. thanks for the pm sweetie😊.. n keep it up..🤗



AWWE THANKS MAHI🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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"like a moth 2 flame"...luvd it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Gautami

"like a moth 2 flame"...luvd it!!


Yes, he is the moth and she is the flame😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey
Loved it... beautifully expressed... Thanks so much for the pm...
loved ur ff. pls start a new one soon...
always look forward to ur writings...
Good work...
👏

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