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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love story with a strange twist:Part 42

Karthi smiles:Shravan..you have to be happy...
Shravan:What are you saying dadima?
K:Sachi is making you a father.
All are surprised and they smile.
Shravan can't believe it.
Sh:Dadima..are you sure?
K:The symptoms prove that.
He smiles.
Muskaan sprinkles water over Sachi's face.Slowly she opens her eyes.
K:Sachi..you are going to be a mother.
Sachi is surprised.She smiles.She looks at Shravan.
He is smiling at her.
He whispers to her ears:The symbol of love is going to arrive soon.
She blushes.
Geet:I think Sachi has to be shown to a doctor before confirming it.
Maan:That's true.

Shravan ans Sachi go to the hospital.After the check up the doctor Neeta says:
Your doubt is true.Sachi is pregnant.
They are happy.
N:I want to talk personally to Shravan.
Shravan and Sachi look at each other.
Sachi goes out of the room.
Sh:Dr..why do you want to talk to me alone?
N:I want to tell you about Sachi's health.She is very weak.
Shravan becomes upset:Doctor..
N:Pregnancy is risky.
Sh:What do you mean doctor?
N:It's better to abort the baby.
He is shocked:What are you saying doctor?You are asking me to kill our baby?How dare you..?
N:Please relax...
Sh:After talking rubbish you are asking me to relax?
N:If she gives birth to the baby it can even take away her life.She might die.
Shravan is shocked:No!
N:You decide..you want the baby..or your wife?
Shravan is really shattered.He wipes her wet eyes before going out of the room as he does'nt want Sachi to see his tears.
Sachi's eyes are filled with tears.
Sh:Sachi...why are your eyes full of tears?You are crying out of happiness?
Sachi bursts into tears.
Sa:Shravan..i overheard everything.
He is shocked:Sachi!
Sachi is weeping.
Sh:Don't worry.I won't allow you to take a risk.We will abort the baby.
Sachi is shocked:Shravan!How could you decide to kill our baby?You only told me that it's the symbol of our love?So killing the baby means killing our love.Right?
Sh:Sachi...please try to understand.
Sa:No..i don't want to hear anything.I won't kill my baby.
Sh:BUt your life is in danger.
Sa:Nothing will happen to my life if i give birth to the baby.Please Shravan..don't kill my baby.I beg you..
Shravan can't go against her wish.He wipes her tears.
Sh:I won't force you..you know that i won't go against your wish.
She smiles.Their hearts are paining.

Shravan-Sachi are in the car.
Sachi falls asleep on his shoulder.
He looks at her with pain.

Sh:What a fate is this God?Why are you testing us?I'm confused.

Sh:I have to talk to others about it.


Shravan tells it to Dev-Muskaan and Maan-Geet.They are depressed.
Muskaan cries.Geet sheds tears.
Maan and Dev are really upset.
M:I think we have to be practical.Sachi should have an abortion.
Sh:But she is not willing for that.
D:Can't you force her to do that?I mean..you have to make her understand the after effects of the delivery.
Sh:I told her.But there is no use.Everything was in vain.
G:Sachi can't be made understand it.Because no woman can understand it.Because no lady can kill her baby.Only a woman can understand Sachi's feelings.
Maan and Dev look deeply into Geet's face.
M:But Geet..this is Sachi's life.
Mus:What Geet said is true.No woman can think of killing her baby.She will even sacrifice her life for her baby.I knew that i will have a tough time delivering Shravan.But i did'nt think about that.I gave birth to Shravan courageously.
G:Baby is Sachi's strength.
Sh:Sachi is not bothered about her life.
G:Sachi considers her baby as her stength.So even her own life is secondary for her.
Mus:We can't force Sachi to have an abortion.It's a sin.
G:But we can pray for Sachi's safe delivery.
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Geet is very upset.

Puja at home.
Shravan tells Sachi.
Sh:Sachi..this puja is for your safe delivery.I feel that God will save us from all dangers.You took the right decision by going ahead with your pregnancy.
She smiles.

After 2 years...
A birthday party at the Khurana mansion.A Mickey mouse Cake is ready.
Shravan comes.
Someone says:Birthday girl's father has come.But where is the birthday girl?Where is Sanjana Singh Khurana?
Sh:Where is Sanju..?
Pari:Birthday girl is with her mother.She is dressing her.Both the mother and the daughter will come now.
Khushi comes with the one year old baby girl named Sanjana.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Aww poor sanchi, pehle revenge ka dhoka aur ab baby complications 😭 Sanchi has passed away right?! Sanjana, hmm walking in with Khushi, so Khushi's the new mother? I guess this is paving way for the Shravan Khushi track. I'm soo glad Shravan holds no grudges with his daughter for the death of his wife as this is the case in most movies/serials i've seen 😲 Nice update, thanks for the PM. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Very sad! Sanchi died leaving Sanjana motherless, and Shravan all alone. But Khushi is here as their angel to brighten up their lives! Good update! Continue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14

Love story with a strange twist:Part 43{2nd version}

Pari:Here comes Khushi bhabhi and Sanju...Mom and baby have come.Let's start the celebration.
Shravan takes Sanjana from Khushi.
He blows the candle for Sanjana.Everyone sings the birthday song.
He holds Sanjana's hand to cut the cake.
Muskaan:Shravan..Khushi..you both hold Sanjana together and cut the cake.
Shravan is irritated.
Khushi holds Sanjana hand.Her hand touches Shravan's hand.He stares at her.
Khushi and Shravan feed her cake.
Everyone smiles.
The photographer takes their snaps.
He:Can the father,mother and the birthday girl stand together for a snap?
Muskaan:Nice idea.
Sh:Take our phto fast.We are standing together.
He:Khushiji..please stand closer to Shravanji.That would be better.
Shravan stares at Khushi.She comes and stands close to Shravan.He is irritated.
Sanjana extends her arms towards Khushi.
Geet:I think Sanju wants to go with Khushi.
Shravan is irritated.He gives her to Khushi.
He goes near Pari.
Sh:Pari..why did you introduce Khushi as my wife and Sanju's mom?
P:Because Khushi is your wife and she is Sanju's daughter.
He loses his control:No..I don't consider Khushi as my wife.
P:But you can't deny the truth that Khushi is your wife.You married Khushi bhabhi.
Sh:When Sachi left us after her delivery,everyone forced me to marry her.
P:So finally you admitted that you married Khushi bhabhi.
Sh:Yes.But she can't be Sanju's mother.Sachi is Sanju's mother.
P:Sachi gave birth to Sanju.But Khushi bhabhi is the one who is bringing up Sanju.She is the one who is giving her a mother's love.
Shravan closes his eyes for a moment to suppress his anger.
Then he rushes to Khushi.
Sh:Khushi..can you come out?I want to talk to you.
Mus:Is everything alright Shravan?
Sh:Yes mom.
Muskaan smiles.Muskaan takes Sanjana in her arms.
Khushi and Shravan go to another room.
Sh:Do you know that we were forced to get married?

Khushi looks at his face.

Sh:Everyone forced us to get married as they wanted Sanju to have a mother.That's the only reason i married you.But don't try to be my wife.I can never accept you as my wife.You can never be my wife.
Khushi feels that her heart is pricked.

Sh:The only reason i'm tolerating you is for my Sanju.She loves you very much and you are also taking care of her.But one thing...don't try to take over Sachi's position.
Shravan goes away.Tears roll down her cheeks.
Maan and Geet were watching it with pain.
Seeing them with a shock she wipes her tears.

They go near her.
M:Was Shravan always rude to you?
Khushi bends her eyelashes.
G:I can't believe that Shravan can be so angry..After Sachi's death,he is totally changed.
K:He can't be blamed.He loves Sachi very much.It's not easy to forget the person we love.I'm not sad about Shravanji's behaviour.
G:Then why were you crying?
K:I did'nt cry.
Khushi can't control anymore.Tears flow from her eyes.

M:Khushi..you don't have to hide anything from us.
K:I don't know why..i feel sad when Shravanji svolds me.I feel upset when he ignores me.I don't know why.
G:That's because you love Shravan.
Khushi can't believe it:Geet aunty?

G:I'm a woman.I can read your feelings.You are confused Khushi.You don't know what you feel for Shravan.But unknowingly you have started loving Shravan.
Khushi does'nt know how to react.
Maan smiles:If you are still confused close your eyes.
She closes her eyes.She sees Shravan's face.
She opens her eyes immediately.
M:Did you see Shravan?
Khushi keeps silent.
Maan and Geet smile.
G:Don't worry..Shravan will accept you.But you need to wait for some more time.
Maan and Geet go away.
Khushi is numb.

Maan and Geet go near Shravan.
M:Shravan!Did you shout at Khushi?
Shravan does'nt open his mouth.He is shocked to know that they came to know about that.
M:We overheard everything.Are you not ashamed to talk to a lady like this?She takes care of your baby like her own daughter.Still you...very bad.
G:Even though you shouted at her she did'nt say anything back.
Shravan feels upset.
Sh:Maan uncle...i just could'nt control myself.I don't know why..i'm not able to soft with Khushi.
Shravan regrets hurting Khushi.
G:You should apologize to Khushi.
Sh:Badi maa...
G:Won't you do that?
Sh:I will do whatever you say.You asked me to marry Khushi.I did that.You are asking me to apologize to Khushi.I will do that also.
G:Shravan..don't apologize to her just because i asked you to do so.Don't you feel that you have done something wrong?If you are a human being..you will feel guilty for hurting your wife.
He thinks about scholding Khushi.He feels upset.
Sh:Yes.I was blind.So i could'nt control myself.I can't justify myself.I will apologize to her.
Maan and Geet smile.
He goes near Khushi.She is nervous.
Sh:Don't get scared.I did'nt come here to shout at you.

Sh:I came here to say sorry to you.I'm sorry..
Khushi can't believe her ears.First time he is talking to her softly.She looks at him unbelievingly.

Maan and Geet watch it with a smile.

The photographer comes near them:Can i take a snap?
G:The stars of the party are Shravan,Khushi and Sanjana.Did you take their photos?
He:Yes,i took everyone's photos.Now you both are left.
M:Ok..then..take our photo also.
Maan and Geet smile and pose for the photograph.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Felt sorry for Khushi. Shravan has still not accepted her as his wife. He is still lost in the thoughts of his Sanchi. However waiting for the love story of Shravan and Khushi to kick start. Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Shravan has become such a cynic after Sanchi's death, glad Maan and Geet made him realise how rude he was to Khushi. Shravan-Khushi's love story is starting. 😛 Nice update! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Hey Darling!!
Sorry for not posting before...😔
Both the updates were fantastic!! I was devastated when Sachi was gone. Poor Shravan.
Shravan said he was forced to marry Khushi, but what compelled Khushi to marry a widower father?
It's really sad that Shravan and Khushi's relationship is so weak. Hope to read some cute Shravan and Khushi moments soon!!
Thanks a tonne for the PMs and update soon.
I look forward to reading the next part!!!
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is really good. look forward to reading more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Wow u watch a lot of TV shows 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20

Love story with a strange twist:Part 44

Khushi sings a lullaby for Sanjana.Shravan watches it.
Suddenly his conversation with Pari comes to his mind:
{Shravan:Pari..why did you introduce Khushi as my wife and Sanju's mom?
Pari:Because Khushi is your wife and she is Sanju's daughter.
He loses his control:No..I don't consider Khushi as my wife.
P:But you can't deny the truth that Khushi is your wife.You married Khushi bhabhi.
Sachi gave birth to Sanju.But Khushi bhabhi is the one who is bringing up Sanju.She is the one who is giving her a mother's love.}
Sanjana is falling into sleep.But when Khushi moves a bit away from her,she holds her hand tigthly.
Shravan thinks:What Pari said is true.Khushi only gives a mother's love to Sanjana.Sanjana is so attached to her that she can't live without Khushi.Khushi is taking care of my daughter.She considers her as her own daughter.Still why do i hurt her?I am supposed to be thankful to her.But what did i do to her?If Maan uncle and Geet badi maa had'nt opened my eyes i would have kept torturing her.
Sanjana has fallen asleep.Accidently Khushi sees Shravan.Shravan becomes conscious.He goes away.
She thinks:I know that you hate me.I won't destroy your piece of mind anymore.
Her tears flow down.

After 2 days Khushi goes to the office to meet Shravan.He does'nt want to look at her face.
Sh:What's the matter Khushi?Why did you come to the office?You could have talked to me at home.
K:I wanted it to be confidential at the moment.Does'nt want it to be an issue.That's why i came to the office.If i talk to you at home it might burst out.

Sh:What are you saying?I can't understand anything.
K:These are divorce papers.I have signed it.

He is shocked.He looks at her.
She gives the paper to him.
K:Please don't tell this to our family members now.They will be upset.Shravanji...atleast now please believe me..i have never tried to take Sachi's position.But unknowingly i became Sanju's mother.I have a request.Please let me continue as her mother.
Tears roll down her cheeks.
He becomes upset seeing her tears.
She gives lunch to him.
K:You forgot to take the lunch box.
She leaves the room wiping the tears.
Shravan's mobile rings.It is Muskaan's call.
Mus:Shravan...Khushi is bringing lunch to you.
Sh:Yes..i know.She brought me lunch.
Mus:I'm happy that my daughter in law is taking care of my son.Even i did'nt notice that you did'nt take the lunch to the office.But Khushi noticed it.You are lucky to have a wife like her.
Her words touch his heart.
Mus:Ok..bye..Take care.
Sh:Bye mom.
Shravan thinks:Why do i feel upset?I'm supposed to be happy to get rid of Khushi.

Evening...
Again Muskaan rings him.
Mus:Shravan...Khushi did'nt reach home yet.
Shravan is shocked.
The phone gets disconnected due to heavy rain.
Shravan thinks:Khushi must have left the house since she signed the divorce papers.But where did she go?She has no place to go.
He feels upset.

Shravan is driving home.He stops the car.
Sh:I feel so weak that i don't feel like driving.Why?I have not felt this before.
He comes out of the car and views the rain.Shravan thinks standing close to the car:
I have always hated Khushi for no reason.I'm supposed to be happy about the divorce.Still why i'm upset?Where did Khushi go?
Surprisingly he sees Khushi standing in the rain.
He runs towards her.
She can't believe her eyes.
Sh:Why are you standing here?That also when it is raining heavily?

She has no answer.
Sh:I know why.You don't know where to go.Right?
She does'nt say anything.She keeps looking at his face.

Sh:I will tell you where to go.You come with me.All are waiting for you.They are upset about you not returning home.
She looks at him carefully as she can't believe that Shravan is calling her back.
Sh:Can't you hear what i said?Come with me.
Unknowingly they share an eyelock.

Shravan keeps his arm on her shoulder:Come with me Khushi.

She can't believe that he touched her.He touched her softly for the first time.She looks at his arm on her shoulder.


He becomes conscious.He removes his arm from her shoulder.
Sh:Come..we will go together.
They walk together.He looks at her in between.
They get inside the car.
They don't talk anything.
They reach home.Everyone comes to the verandah.
Geet:Khushi...where were you?
Muskaan:Are you fine Khushi?
Khushi does'nt know what to say.
Sh:Actually we were with each other.
Mus:What?
Sh:When you called me she was with me.But the phone got disconnected.So i could'nt tell you that she was with me.
Karthi:Why are you both drenched?You will catch cold.
Sh:We both love rain.So we spent time in the rain.
All are relieved.
Dev and Muskaan smile.
Muskaan whispers to Dev:See...our son is having rain romance.He is so romantic.Dev..why are you not taking me out when it is raining?
Dev and Muskaan giggle.

Maan and Geet in their room.
G:Maan...I'm sure that Shravan and Khushi were not enjoying in the rain.We know how their relationship is.Right?Some problem is there.
M:Ya.But there is some change in Shravan's attitude towards Khushi.I noticed it.
G:Ya..i also think so.But still i'm worried about them.I can't understand where their life is going to.
M:Geet..don't think about unnecessary things.Everything will be alright.I'm sure.

Geet does'nt say anything.
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago

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