Love story with a strange twist:FF updated 4/9 - Page 3

You have portrayed Shravan softening up towards Khushi very beautifully! Love story kicking off with a divorce! People say marriage creates love between a couple but here it's the divorce which is acting as the catalyst for love. Interesting twist!

The way you're progressing Shravan-Khushi's relationship is very nice. That was beautifully concieved and put. Muskaan and her hubby have not been able to recgnize the relationship SK share, while MaanEet have! I completely trust MaanEet to take care of matters if they get worse, yet I only think Shravan is falling deeper and deeper for his beautiful wife and soon he himself will tear up the divorce papers! Thanks for the awesome read! :)

Love story with a strange twist Part 45

Khushi is in the garden.She waters the plants.While walking,her leg slips and she is about to fall down.Suddenly Shravan holds her hand tightly preventing her from falling down.They both are lost in each other's eyes.
hravan becomes conscious of what he is doing.Slowly he removes his hand from her hand.

He talks softly:Be more careful while walking Khushi.
She is surprised by his soft manner of speech.
She thinks:How can Shravanji be so soft to me?
She nods her head with tension:Yes.

He walks away.
She looks at him walking.
She thinks about Geet's words:Shravan will accept you.But you need to wait for some more time.
Slowly she smiles.
Shravan turns back and looks at her.She is surprised.
He goes away.
She thinks:Is Geet's aunty's words becoming true?You are changing Shravanji..
She smiles.She smiles thinking of her rain moment with Shravan.
Slowly her smile disappears.
She thinks:What if what i'm thinking about his change is not true?

Khushi is crossing the road.Unexpectedly a bus hits her.
Khushi gets admitted to the hospital.
All the Khurana members are there.They all are crying.
Shravan is not crying.He is numb.
Pari goes near him with tears:Your wife is in the ventilator.Doctor has given no hope.Still you have no change?Your face has no expression.You are losing your wife.Sanju is losing her mother.Still you have no problem.What kind of a man you are?Are you a human being?
Shravan controls himself.He suppresses his emotions.
Milind holds Pari's hand.
Mi:Pari...control yourself.Leave him alone.He is tense that he can't even express how sad he is.
P:He is not sad Milind.He is happy to get rid of Khushi bhabhi.Because he does'nt love her.He hates her.
Unexpectedly he reacts:No.I don't hate her.
Pari can't believe what she has heard.She can't believe the way he has reacted.
Shravan weeps:What will i do Pari?First God snatched Sachi from me.I thought my life is over.Khushi gave me a new life.But i did'nt understand that.When i got used to her,God snatched her from me.
Geet:No...God has'nt snatched Khushi from you.God can't do any mistake.He won't do that.
Her eyes are wet.
Shravan weeps.Muskaan hugs Geet.
Mus:Geet...what a fate!Why all my daughters in law are facing death?
Geet tries to cover her fear and pain by giving strength to Muskaan:What nonsense are you saying?Nothing has happened to Khushi.She is still alive.
Dev is really upset.
Maan goes near Shravan:I know that you are scared of losing Khushi.Pray well Shravan.God will hear your prayer.
Shravan cries.
Shravan goes near the God Shiva's idol and weeps.
Sh:Khushi is such a sweet girl.She has only tried to make us happy.Still why did you be so cruel to her?Please save her.I beg you.
He turns back.He sees Pari looking at him seriously.
P:Surgery is over.
Shravan has no strength to hear the rest.

It was a very touching update! Shravan has lost enough in life. Khushi has to survive.

What a twist! Khushi hospital pohonch gayi and Shravan ko hua ehsaas Khushi ki importance ki, liked it veryv much. Hopefully Shravan prays well and God indeed listens to his pleads. nice chapter!

Great update!!!

Love story with a strange twist:Part 46

Thanks a lot 4 ur support.Bcz of ur support i completed this FF successfully.1st version had 19 parts.2nd version started with part 13th & ended with part 46.so all 2gether 52 parts or sth.Plz read d climax & write ur fav scene & fav charac & write y u liked them

Pari:Doctor said...
Shravan's heart beats.
P:Doctor said...it's a miracle.
Shravan is tense.
Slowly Pari smiles:Khushi bhabhi is safe.God has heard our prayers.
Shravan is really relieved.He is really happy.
Sh:Really?
She nods her head.
Sh:I can't wait to see Khushi.
P:But we have to wait for some more time for that.
Shravan becomes dull.
He goes to the doctor.
Sh:Doctor..please let me see Khushi.
Dr:Sorry...the patient has'nt opened her eyes.She is having a good sleep.No one can disturb her.
Sh:i just want to see her for my peace of mind...I won't disturb her.
Dr:I know a husband's feelings.A husband can't be peaceful when the wife is in the hospital.Just because you are her husband i will allow you to enter her room.
Sh:Thank you Sir.

After some time Shravan enters the room where Khushi is sleeping.He sits near her and looks at her face carefully.
She is sleeping peacefully.
.He stands up to go back.
Unexpectedly she holds his shirt.
He is surprised.He looks at her catching the shirt he is wearing.

He looks at her face softly.


Then he holds her hand.


He keeps her hand downand goes out.

After sometime after Khushi regains her consciousness he visits her again with Sanjana.Sanjana touches her hand.Khushi becomes emotional.
Shravan holds her arms softly.
She is surprised.
Sh:Khushi..you don't know how happy i am.I got scared of losing you.That time only i realized how important you are in my life.
Slowly other family members also entered the room.
Pari:After we lost Sachi,i have not seen Shravan bhai happy like this.He is so happy to see you safe.
Khushi smiles.
Maan:This is not enough.You have to be clear about your feelings.
Sh:Means?I can't understand anything.
M:Means...very simple..you have to tell whether you love her.
Shravan is embarassed.
Everyone except Khushi smiles.
Khushi is confused.
Maan smiles.
M:Shravan..i know your feelings.But others should also understand that especially Khushi.So you should express your love for Khushi.
Khushi can't believe it.
Karthi:Maan..what's the need for that?Shravan and Khushi are husband and wife.So we all know that they love each other.What's the need of this open confession?
Maan stares at Shravan.He can't look at Maan's eyes.
M:You won't understand that mom.
Even Dev and Muskaan don't understand that as they don't know that till now they were leading a loveless married life.
M:Come on Shravan..say 'i love you' to Khushi.
Geet:Maan...What are you saying?Are you crazy?
Muskaan:Geet...what's wrong in that?Husband and wife should always say 'i love you' to each other.
Muskaan looks at Dev with a naughty smile.
Mus:Is'nt that right Dev?
Dev is shy.
G:Such things have to be private.
M:But Geet..
G:Stop this nonsense.You are crazy and Kiddish sometimes.
M:Geet..i want to hear Shravan confessing his love to Khushi.
G:Why do you want to interfere in their love life?Such things can be told only when they are alone.How can they open their heart in front of us?
She looks at everyone:I think we all should leave this room now leaving Shravan and Khushi alone.
Dev:That's right.
Mus:Oh Geet!
Muskaan takes Sanjana from Shravan.
Mus:It's time for her to have food.Let Khushi take rest.I will feed him.
They all go out.
Shravan and Khushi look at each other.They both are shy also.
Suddenly Khushi coughs.Shravan gets scared.He holds her hand:Khushi!
K:I'm ok Shravanji.It's rainy season.Right?Very cold.So i just coughed.
He is relieved.
Sh:I got scared.You know Khushi.I can't lose you.When you were in the ventilator we all were so scared.Then i realized that...
K:What did you realize Shravanji?
Khushi is longing to hear magical words from him.
Sh:I realized that i have fallen in love again...with you...
She feels that his love has touched her eyes..so her eyes are sparkling.
She smiles.

Shravan comes out.Maan is standing outside the room.
Sh:Maan uncle!You are still here?
M:Ya...how can i go back peacefully?Tell me..did you confess?
Sh:Yes.
Maan is excited:Really?Wow!Congrats.
Sh:But she did'nt say anything.She loves me or not.No idea.
M:Don't worry.I'm a throwing a party after Khushi gets diascharged.You have to call her for a dance.If she is willing to dance with you..that means she also loves you.
Shravan is tense.

Party...

Shravan sings 'Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai, jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum, chaandni bhar gaye

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai, jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum, chaandni bhar gaye
Kare chaand taaron ko, mashoor itna kyun
Kambakht inn se bhi khoobsurat hai tu

I love you, tu ru ru .. yeah yeah .. - 3 times'{Bodyguard}.
He extends his arms towards Khushi singing.
With a smile she holds his hand and they both dance.Maan winks his eyes at Shravan.Shravan smiles.
Maan-Geet,Dev-Muskaan,Karthi-Srivastav,Milind-Pari also dance.



The end