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Riya Desai

@Vru_16

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

OMG! This whole time u kept telling ME i was a good writer & look at YOU!!😲

talk about talent for writing, this was amazing!!

it was better than i can do - description wise, I can't really comment on it story wise cause I don't know what the story is yet😆 but it seems very interesting. 👍🏼

hehe Khushi thought she was dreaming😆 anyway, u better continue!

Edited by Prix3 - 13 years ago

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Vanisha

@TheBlueAngel

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

heyyy priyanka nyc start yaar 😃..
you should absolutely continue dis..😃

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Yazzy91

@Yazzy91

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Ooo the beginning seems very interesting! Hope you continue and please pm me! 😊

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

That was very nice and cute do continue 😊

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Rosie -x-

@SweetRozie123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

First of all, congratulations on your first FF. I wish you all the best for it- & I loved your introduction... It was really good. Please update the next part soon! And do PM me the next update if your FREE :) <3

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: scarletaura
Very descriptive..pulls you into the story straight and we can clearly visualize Khushi's sleepy reactions..as they're familiar characters, its easy to get involved in the story.. so oye?! where's the rest..? 😍waiting for you to continue with the story telling!

👏Really good esply. for a first effort.. do continue writing:-)

I'm literally on 7th heaven.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yaay.!!!! Thank you sooo much.!!!☺️

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Prix3
OMG! This whole time u kept telling ME i was a good writer & look at YOU!!😲
talk about talent for writing, this was amazing!!
it was better than i can do - description wise, I can't really comment on it story wise cause I don't know what the story is yet😆 but it seems very interesting. 👍🏼
hehe Khushi thought she was dreaming😆 anyway, u better continue!

Missy you are amazing.! I love the you put up your comic scene..so vivid.!!

Thank you so much for the comments..aww...😳