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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

This is really good, do continue and pm me when u update next day thanks keep up the work :)

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..
JUST saw this in my PM dabba! :D Please tell me you are continuing this? Like... more parts to come and all! Because I am so in love with this FF! Just one question though.. maybe two actually :P They are engaged? and umm.. why did Arnav get angry in the end? :S

So, I completely love this FF! :D So visual! You have to continue this super soon! Like, really SOON! :D

Lots of Love
Jyotika
🤗

Hey Jojo,

Answers first: No I wasn't talking about their engagement. They still havent confessed their feelings. Secondly, I think Arnav got a little angry because he felt Khushi doesn't really trust him and it's somehow become his nature as well.

I really have no clue how to continue this. I wrote the entire thing in one go. I could really use some ideas.! I'm so glad that you took time to find out the details and comment. I love your comment.!😃 A big 🤗 for you.

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Riya Desai

@Vru_16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

this is sooo good! so intense, so many emotions, ahhh! i love itt👏

i love the way u described anjali in the end, it was soo keen!

i love ur word choice & the story was so interesting! 👍🏼

one thing im unclear about. ur ending it ? if so, START ANOTHER FF! cause i lovee ur writing!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Hey Priyanka!!🤗
I absolutely love what you've written. You've started this FF off brilliantly. Way to go girl!!!
I loved Arnav and Khushi's hug. It was so deep and meaningful, even though nothing was said!!!
Great work sugar.
Please add me to your PM list and update soon hun!!!
😊

Thank you so much.. I have seen your comments on others works as well and I love the fact that you take time and comment with a lot of enthusiasm.! I guess I need to make a PM list.

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Prix3
this is sooo good! so intense, so many emotions, ahhh! i love itt👏
i love the way u described anjali in the end, it was soo keen!
i love ur word choice & the story was so interesting! 👍🏼
one thing im unclear about. ur ending it ? if so, START ANOTHER FF! cause i lovee ur writing!

Thanks girl.! Your stories and comments always make me smile.😉 I kept an open ending cause pretty unclear about what to do next. I could really use some help.

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Riya Desai

@Vru_16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: pgm7

Thanks girl.! Your stories and comments always make me smile.😉 I kept an open ending cause pretty unclear about what to do next. I could really use some help.

hehe honest to god - urs always do too! 😳 hmm im gonna reread it & see if i can get u any ideas! but u have to promise me u wont use it if u dont like it!!

i'll PM u if i get any ideas!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Prix3

hehe honest to god - urs always do too! 😳 hmm im gonna reread it & see if i can get u any ideas! but u have to promise me u wont use it if u dont like it!!
i'll PM u if i get any ideas!

Awww Pri..that is like the sweetest thing someone is gonna do for me on this forum.! I officially love you. Okay I promise. Please update your second FF soon..I want to know what made Arnav say those words to her.

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Marci

@Marci

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

It really seemed as if u wrote a part of the actual story in this..Arnav's anger but his passionate love being show...Khushi loving him dearly yet unable to express it fully:)

It was beautifully written...please do continue:)