SS: Yeh shaadi nahi hone doonga pt.7 on pg 10 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww a really well written FF enjoyed reading it :D update soon :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
hey, nice scenes..
it would be amazing if the story went this way!
arnav tells khushi she cant get married, n lol i love the way her mind works :P and she doesn't believe the shyam thing, how naive can she be!
he tells her to come somewhere for proof, and he's sure she will come. he's right again, but khushi doesn't believe what he's saying. but when she sees the pictures, she's hurt.
arnav says all the wrong things about her, which he should'nt have! how can he think of her like that. i guess he was just thinking of his di at that time, and nothing else! she was obviouslyy pissed off, and i really hope she makes shyam regret his mistake.
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Can't wait for pt.4 where Khushi takes Tharki Shyamua to task
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4 -

Sorry it's short - just to set the scene. Next part will be much longer!!! Enjoy :)

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Arnav ran outside behind Khushi. He was completely confused.

He looked and looked, but our jalebi bai was nowhere to be seen. Finally he spotted Khushi unsuccessfully trying to flag down an auto. He ran up to her and pulled her back.

A: come on. I'll drop you. It's late, aur tumhe auto milne mein kayi saal lag jayenge.

Khushi didn't even look at him. she Just removed his hand and walked away.

Arnav (now getting a bit frustrated - and a teeny bit hurt, though he'll never admit it): Khushi. Raat hogayi hain. it's not safe. Come with me.

Khushi turned to face him, silent tears streaming down her face: Aap chale jaaiye yahan se. jo aapko kehna aur karna tha, aap ne kardiya na. toh ab please bhagwan ke liye hume akela chordijiye. Ab aur kya baaki hain?

Arnav is speechless. He has never seen that much hurt in her eyes before. He can't understand the situation at all. But in the bottom of his gut, he has that feeling ' the same feeling he felt after making her get drenched in the rain, after leaving her in the guesthouse, after throwing her out of the house, and then out of his car. He knows. He doesn't know how, or why, but he knows what he has just done isn't right.

Arnav looks away, lost in thoughts. Itna dard...? What if'? Kahin, isko sach mein pata nahi tha? Par aise kaise ho sakta hain. She's come to our house so much. she had to have seen Jiju. But, those eyes weren't lying either. God, how do I find out the truth? For the first time in my life, kuch samaj nahi aa raha hain.

Arnav pushes away his thoughts and looks up, but by then Khushi is nowhere to be seen!

Arnav: Shit. It's so late also. And she left all alone. And in that state of mind. I should make sure she gets home okay, atleast.

And with that Arnav runs to his car, not sure why he's feeling so protective all of a sudden of a girl he had just blasted at minutes earlier. But nevertheless, he began driving towards Laxmi Nagar.

----------------------- End of Part 4 ---------------------------

Hope you enjoyed. and please do comment! :)

Edited by strawberry111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
this is really good!
would love to see this happen in the show !!
you are really good!
plzz send me a pm when you upate it the next time!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Hey hun!!
Nice update.
Looking forward to reading the next part!
Do PM when you update angel!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Wow awesome . Thanks for the PM. Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
great story! i luv it! plz pm me when u update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
niceee...plzz pm me whn u updte next
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
great storyline...continue soon and plz pm when u get this thanks

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