Moth to a Flame .. Pic Story.

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Moth to a Flame - Picture story..

This is inspired from Ransacked FF .. written by our sweet Mahi the recent chapter.

I was this moth. The flames were burning inside the glass lantern. I dint know why I was attracted to the light. I dint know. I just wanted to go and see and touch and feel the fire.. it was adrenaline or the pleasure.. I dint know..i just wanted to try ..

wth.. it is burning like hell. It is flames.. the fire.. it will hurt me.. it will burn my fluttering wings.. I loved the color.. I loved the color orange, and yellow and red.. and finally the blue and purple and grey..

Why i was attracted to it ..I still dont know.. I went near that .. I know im hurting myself. I may get killed in the act..But still i want to try and test.. experiment on me..by burning myself, I will see the pain and the experience the pain ..of the physical one..

There he was.. the candle.. who loved me.. who wanted to kiss me whenever i went near him.. he wanted to capture me .. not only me ,,but many more.. i was not bothered.. I wanted to be in his arms.. in the fire.. with him.. somewhere ..sometime may be.. i may become the frost and ice and can cool his burning heart..

Hey..did u see... my wings spread in the illuminating fire and on the wall my shadow how it reflected.. from outside the window ..somebody clikced me ..into a framed pic.. my wings gave this innumberable wings capture.. i loved it.. graphics superb if felt..See instead of one wings.. i had many sets now..Yippey..Im very happy and thanks to candle, light and the flame..

i was the one to die.. but see even my friends want to die.. he attracts many..yes.. he is one hot headed guy..many will fall..for him ..

hey stupid moth.. shut ur mouth.. u know..i can only be now with u.. as u know..i have fallen in love with u baby..when and how i dont know..just that i wnated to say ..

Im melting myself for u.. to have to near me.. heart, body , mind and soul..

after u die, even i die.. so none remain in this world..

I Astha, was sitting near the window .. it was suffocating for me inside this dungeon..he was good.. he hated me.. i hated him..but i love him..he gave me pain.. also pleasure.. the animalistic one.. i want his soul.. can i have that.. where is my soul in this ..i guess i was dead a long time back ..

i saw the moon outside..Why i loved it i dint know.. I felt .. Tarzan or the gorilla from Might joe young always followed the moon and reached a centre point.. i too followed the moon ..

I was running like mad in the mist.. in the thick forest..

i was heading in my long gown..it was white not black..

it was full moon day.. the butterflies and the deer and the bear were heading near the lake.. where moon danced in the water..

i was clueless in the thick forest..where i was.. i stopped in a place .. and had a look around.. i heard the wolf yelling.. i got scared.. i lost my way .. how do i go back..

Part two : it is in the same page..down..after charu and cools comments..

Edited by dv19 - 10 years ago

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome story...
liked it...
gud one👍🏼

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part :2

I Was stranded in mid of the forest.. no where else to go.. i was thinkign something funny .. what it could have been.. tell tell..

may be i was killed by a tiger.. or a bison killing me with its horns.. a lion tearing me to pieces.. Oh no.. i dint think these..

I was thinking something different.. the below pic.. yes.. i was playing with the violin.. some music.. i dont knw abc of violin..but one thing was the string or the wire in the viloin ..u play ur chord or card .. the cards if played well.. u can beat ur fate..

i was admiring the moon stilll.

The cold breeze hit my skin..i was scared.. the stag and the dear nearby .. they came out from the buhses.. frightening the hell out of me..

I was relived. the fear again left and i felt that i was dancing and a horse came near by to give me support..

i guess ..nearby was the grave yard.. i head th wolf howlign again.. the owls hooting.. again i felt scared.. i wanted him ver badly.. as i know.. I was safe only in his arms..

One creature came out in the hoods,, with a smoke in hand.. a small light .. from the tip of cigar coming out.. i was more scared.. was he from some other world.. i knuckles became numb.

I turned and saw.. he was the one.. he was my knight .. he was my knight and my saviour.. My fear went hidden.. i wanted go and get tangled with in his hands..

I saw him out from the dark.. he saw me coming out from the moon light.. he said .. i was like angel.. but i fell him.. that he was a demon.. without wings.. wth.. if he doenst have.. then i wil have one..

I became the angel and made him part of me .. or he made me as his part.. we were our own medicines for the bleeding portions..

Finally.. i couldnt control myself.. i went and hugged him.. He too.. couldnt control.. he hugged me.. then his lips met mine.. and then.. my knee lifted up..

and below the moon light.. we had our share of fun.. i was his .. and he was mine..

that night.. i froze and shielded the memories.. locked it in my heart and seized the moment.. that was my moment..

The kiss was the proof. that he loved me . and moon was the proof for our love.

The horse ran away.. me and he danced in the moon light.

we headed back home now.. cozy in his arms.

Story of Moth to a flame.

All thought well.. or dreamt well.. ends well.

I too am dreaming now for a happy life.. With Shlok my life will be like the fairy tale which i dreamt..

Edited by dv19 - 10 years ago

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Ms Vijaya

@vj3072

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

DV + MAHI = Gifted +Brainy= Overwhelming + Beauty=magnificence 👏

(p/s...if the moth related to Indru and the candle is Astha...at the end the moth burns itself because is just SAPNA (dream)..a candle that can't be touch )

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vijaya lakshmi

@VijjuShrenu_MB

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

nice one dear😃

you and mahi will burn the whole forum with your hot stories😊.

one z evil queen with hot updates and other is a moral queen again with hot updates😆.

nice interpretation of moth and flame yar only you can do that👏.

your stories gave me much needed knowledge which i lack before😊.

seriously ur a⭐️.

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

@mahirmukhtar

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

Aww deeps let me catch my breath after your soul-searching, overwhelming and poignant dedication. I can't help myself from crying. See i want to be happy yet these are tears of happiness or sadness for a lost soul i don't know!

The moon's coldness and fire, the moth to the flame these things attracted me from the first. I am a nature lover whenever i used to go on trips with gals i used to savour the greenery and the scenes and the fresh air while all of them went shopping or to eat, i was the one usually left behind, a silent corner and only the nature with me.

That doesn't mean that i didn't enjoy with them i did but i enjoyed the nature more. You can do shopping anywhere in the world but you won't get the greenery and the fresh air everywhere certainly not in the cities.

My buddies used to say that i've been born in the wrong time i should have been a classic heroine of old movies or a myth in age old centuries. Why I am telling you this i don't know myself. Maybe i know you can understand as well as i can.

Five cheers for the dedication deeps because its a five star writing of yours. So this was the surprise that you were talking about. Well I am gonna cherish that gift of yours forever.

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
awesome story...
liked it...
gud one👍🏼

thank u

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Subhashini Chowdary

@Subhashiniiiii

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

Extordinary Deepu 👏

I like the two Parts so much but i like the part 1 most😊

Love the blabbering of Moth ..why she attrected to Moth

Moth said shut up 😆 Oh dear u have so much comic sense in U

Part 2 Love the all pics of Moon and following Romance

They going to Happily Live After 😲

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vj3072
DV + MAHI = Gifted +Brainy= Overwhelming + Beauty=magnificence 👏

(p/s...if the moth related to Indru and the candle is Astha...at the end the moth burns itself because is just SAPNA (dream)..a candle that can't be touch )

viji ...thats way too .big a compliment..

I write so much but still a cluless when comes to reality life..I'm still learning dear..

And I loved ur symbolism..

The part of astha as flames gives light but eod disapperas and vanishes like dust.

Like a. Dream..

Tks

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#10

@ princess , mahi n subi.

Will reply to ur cmnts ltr ..

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