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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: Dogan1
Sweetie!!!what do I say yaar...
Super...
Loved the name frosty...and loved slokh line when astha said cigarette is harmful...hehehe mr arrogant...

Waiting for the next

Thank you so much Divya 🤗 Glad you liked the update 😳

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi
Aww...tanu super cute update...
Shlok-sam bonding... So heart warming ❤️

Am able to enjoy this story to the fullest... Bcos each character has its own flavour and different from others... Right from Anjali...who's always ready to do match making to her son..lol...NA..with his strong principles... Astha...frosty but possess a golden heart...rishi...sweet ..easy go lucky man...last but not least shlok...my my...simply adorable...even kalindi gauri, Pam, kirti are likable in their own way...
I love this story for the beautiful characterisation...so interesting to read..

And I can't wait to read how this frosty astha gonna melt for this adorable shlok...

Priya 🤗 You say the sweetest things ever 🤗

Anjali is desperate to see her son settled 😆 If you've liked the bond that Sam and Shlok share, i'm almost sure you'd love the bond that Shlok and Anjali share as well... 😳 NA is mere stubborn and Shlok has inherited the stubbornness from his father 😛 Aastha does have a heart full of love, but that love is locked up and the key has gone with Rishi... Hopefully, Sam is able to thaw her frozen heart and get all the motherly love from her... And Daddy will soon follow little Sam's route to Aastha 😳 Pam and Kriti are likable? well maybe in their own silly ways 😆 Kalinid will also play a role in bringing Frosty and Mr. Arrogant closer 😳

Tthank you so much Priya 🤗 So glad to read your views 😊

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: Smirna.vava
sam is very cute.nic update

Thank you so much Smirna... glad you liked it 😳

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Hi Tanvi...

Sorry for the late response...

will go thru each chapter and will comment soon...

Hi Sathya 🤗 No worries sweetie, take your time 😳

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Prologue:

Poor Astha with her night mare...

what went worry in her past...

eagerly waiting to know what happen...

why little girl has to suffer...

Thanks for the wonderful treat...

Thank you so much Sathya 🤗

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#566

Ok, I did not comment for both the updates...Sorry

The last chap was ofc awesome, i mean, Aastha n Shlok got to know each other in respect of Sam, that was nice... I loved the way Shlok was worried for Samrat, he is Daddy perfect... And Aastha is more like a mother to Sam... The way Sam ran to her...

This chap was funny if u ask me...

Pam n Kriti got right on their faces from Sam Though I wipe my cheeks everytime someone kisses me, is that humiliating? Maybe I shud refrain myself frm doing that... Frosty?😆

the last smoking part was good too😆 Sam jumping on his bed and making an excuse of lulu, I still do that, except for mine is a baby crocodile... I loved both the updates😃

Sry fr being late, Take care🤗

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priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: Tanvi.Alison

Priya 🤗 You say the sweetest things ever 🤗
Anjali is desperate to see her son settled 😆 If you've liked the bond that Sam and Shlok share, i'm almost sure you'd love the bond that Shlok and Anjali share as well... 😳 NA is mere stubborn and Shlok has inherited the stubbornness from his father 😛 Aastha does have a heart full of love, but that love is locked up and the key has gone with Rishi... Hopefully, Sam is able to thaw her frozen heart and get all the motherly love from her... And Daddy will soon follow little Sam's route to Aastha 😳 Pam and Kriti are likable? well maybe in their own silly ways 😆 Kalinid will also play a role in bringing Frosty and Mr. Arrogant closer 😳

Tthank you so much Priya 🤗 So glad to read your views 😊

Tanu..I love when story revolves with d differences btw d characters..ppl having different mindset.yes..I loved anjali-shlok bond...and definitely pam n kirthi are interesting! In real life we do have such people around...right?

Ikr..it's not easy to write every character's details...in an interesting way...and you're doing an awesome job🤗

My friend...u r an amazing writer :)

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Chapter 1:

Touching Update Tanvi...

u have described astha's emotions so well...

Poor girl has to go thru a lot...

Rishi loves her a lot...

Kalindi is caring Mother in law...no...caring mother...

nice start...

waiting to see how shlok entry change asthu's life...

Thanks for the wonderful treat...

Rishi was the love of her life - the only man she loved all her life, in her own little ways 😊

Kalindi also treats her like her own daughter 😳 Shlok's entry definitely brings about a positive change in Aastha's life 😳 thank you so much Sathya 🤗

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Will comment on the rest of the chapter ASAP...

Thanks for the beautiful writing dear...

Sure dear 😳 Thank you for taking out time to read the story 😊

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: mehare
Brilliant update tanvi loved it so much specially little sam cute boy & bridge between astha & shlok for bring them together waiting for next part pls update soon 🤗 ⭐️

Thank you so much Mehare 😊 Sam will defintely play the catalyst in bringing these two people together 😊 Thanks again, will try to update sooner, cannot make a promise about the same 😳

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