Ashlok FF: Smitten by the Neighbour... Note on Pg 100

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_
Awesome upd. Tanvi loved it so much.
The individual lonely lives of ashlok u have portrayed so well.
can't wait for next.
Tfd pm.
T.c.
xoxo.

Awwh thank you so much dearest 😳 Waiting to read your update 😃

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
Tan Tan i must say: I simply adore sanrat! That kid is so adorably sweet and innocent and loves his Miss Aastha very much!
5heir bonding is too sweet and so heart warming I wished she would have children of her own
Loved how SHLOK CALLS HER FROSTY THTA IS SO FUNNY AND SWEET
Enjoying their Nokh Jokh
Continue soon

Samrat is adorable indeed Amel 😳 And yes, he loves his Miss Aastha a lot,a nd that love will only grown deeper and stronger with time 😳 Kalindi too wished to see Aastha have her own children, but Rishi and Aastha insisted on waiting for the right time... Sadly, time wasn't in their favour and it slipped away from them, parting them forever 😔 But as they say, life is unpredictable and has it's own design 😳 Life has so much of happiness in store for Aastha. And all she needs to do is realize and stretch her hands to reach out to it 😳

Shlok and Aastha have a cold war declared, for reasons unknown... However Ssam should be able to convince them for a truce 😳

Thank you so much Amel 😊 I'm so glad you liked it 😊

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: mayabharathi
it is such a beautiful update thanks for it

Thank you for taking out the time to read the story, Maya 😳 Glad you liked it 😊

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: bm11
Tanvi, i loved the chapter.
Love the pace of the story. So many details that create a bigger picture.
Emotionally very mature and solid. The more I read the more I enjoy.
I feel for the first time Mr. Arrogance noticed Miss Astha as woman.
Frosty... a very good name for her😉

Thank you for the pm😃

Jane 🤗 Seeing you here makes me feel so happy 😃 Appreciation from a fantastic writer like you is really such an encouragement 😊 So, thank you for that 😳

@Bold: I'm so glad you caught that... It was seconds later he realized that she is his son's teacher 😆

Thanks a lot Jane... M so glad you liked the story 😳 will read your update and comment soon, once i'm done replying here 😳

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: charanyaaj
Beautiful update tanvi

Thank you so much Saru

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: .Natasha.
Ok, I did not comment for both the updates...Sorry
The last chap was ofc awesome, i mean, Aastha n Shlok got to know each other in respect of Sam, that was nice... I loved the way Shlok was worried for Samrat, he is Daddy perfect... And Aastha is more like a mother to Sam... The way Sam ran to her...
This chap was funny if u ask me...
Pam n Kriti got right on their faces from Sam Though I wipe my cheeks everytime someone kisses me, is that humiliating? Maybe I shud refrain myself frm doing that... Frosty?😆
the last smoking part was good too😆 Sam jumping on his bed and making an excuse of lulu, I still do that, except for mine is a baby crocodile... I loved both the updates😃
Sry fr being late, Take care🤗

Aww sweetie, it's okie.. i understand that studies have to be your priority and i know you have been busy with assignments. Please don't say sorry 😳

Shlok almost aged a few years worrying for the little boy, while he was watching chota bheem on astha's couch gorging on a plate of vada-pav and chocolate milk shake 😆 and yes, Sam does love seeking Miss Aastha's attention and she too loves showering him with love, which he eats like a lost puppy 😳

I'm not sure if it is humiliating either, but when my niece did that to my cousin, she did feel bad about it 😆 Oh and Sam is going to be more blunt with the two nos women, if you ask me 😆 He dislikes them already and will give it to them in his own innocent ways 😆

Yeah Frosty 😆 Shlok hears too much of Sam's talks and is influenced a lot 😆 therefore, Frosty 😆

Ah the smoking part 😆 Aastha could not stop the teacher within her and "corrected" Sshlok, and Shlok being the stubborn fellow that he is, courtesy his paternal genes, had t say something in return 😛

Ypu have a stuffed baby croc? how cute 😳

Thank you so much Candy 🤗You to take care of your health ... Good luck with your studies 😳 Big hugs 🤗

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi

Tanu..I love when story revolves with d differences btw d characters..ppl having different mindset.yes..I loved anjali-shlok bond...and definitely pam n kirthi are interesting! In real life we do have such people around...right?
Ikr..it's not easy to write every character's details...in an interesting way...and you're doing an awesome job🤗
My friend...u r an amazing writer :)

And my heart just did another round of a happy dance looking at your comment...

Thank you so much Priya... you say the most wonderful things 🤗

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#578

Super Hit Story👏

tanvi ,u are an amazing writer

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: srilotus
Super Hit Story👏
tanvi ,u are an amazing writer

Thank you Sri.. It's the readers who make the story a hit or miss... so i would give the credit to the enthusiasm of all the readers 😳 Its a delight to write when such encouragement and love is showered 😳

Thanks again Sri... Glad you like it 😳

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: Tanvi.Alison

Aww sweetie, it's okie.. i understand that studies have to be your priority and i know you have been busy with assignments. Please don't say sorry 😳
Shlok almost aged a few years worrying for the little boy, while he was watching chota bheem on astha's couch gorging on a plate of vada-pav and chocolate milk shake 😆 and yes, Sam does love seeking Miss Aastha's attention and she too loves showering him with love, which he eats like a lost puppy 😳

I'm not sure if it is humiliating either, but when my niece did that to my cousin, she did feel bad about it 😆 Oh and Sam is going to be more blunt with the two nos women, if you ask me 😆 He dislikes them already and will give it to them in his own innocent ways 😆
Yeah Frosty 😆 Shlok hears too much of Sam's talks and is influenced a lot 😆 therefore, Frosty 😆
Ah the smoking part 😆 Aastha could not stop the teacher within her and "corrected" Sshlok, and Shlok being the stubborn fellow that he is, courtesy his paternal genes, had t say something in return 😛
Ypu have a stuffed baby croc? how cute 😳
Thank you so much Candy 🤗You to take care of your health ... Good luck with your studies 😳 Big hugs 🤗

Such a big reply😲😲😲 Thank u so much for understanding Tan🤗

Ok, I'll try not to wipe off kisses anymore😆 Wud love to see Sam giving back to Pam😃

Poor Shlok! I was almost in tears when Sam told that Shlok was both his mommy and daddy... cute kid...

I'm waiting for more of Aashlok now I love this Shlok❤️

Ya, stuffed croc😳

Big hugs to you too🤗