Ashlok FF: Smitten by the Neighbour... Note on Pg 100

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mehare

@mehare

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Brilliant update tanvi loved it so much specially little sam cute boy & bridge between astha & shlok for bring them together waiting for next part pls update soon 🤗 ⭐️

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 32

Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Awesome upd. Tanvi loved it so much.

The individual lonely lives of ashlok u have portrayed so well.

can't wait for next.

Tfd pm.

T.c.

xoxo.

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Tan Tan i must say: I simply adore sanrat! That kid is so adorably sweet and innocent and loves his Miss Aastha very much!

5heir bonding is too sweet and so heart warming I wished she would have children of her own

Loved how SHLOK CALLS HER FROSTY THTA IS SO FUNNY AND SWEET

Enjoying their Nokh Jokh

Continue soon

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mayabharathi

@mayabharathi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

it is such a beautiful update thanks for it

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Jane

@bm11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Tanvi, i loved the chapter.
Love the pace of the story. So many details that create a bigger picture.
Emotionally very mature and solid. The more I read the more I enjoy.
I feel for the first time Mr. Arrogance noticed Miss Astha as woman.
Frosty... a very good name for her😉

Thank you for the pm😃

Edited by bm11 - 10 years ago

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Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: miac
Aww tanvi such a wonderful update. ..should say this one is become my most favourite story especially sweet sam and his antics.Then there is frosty astha and grinning shlok both stole heart. .

awww Raji, you just made me a happier person 😃 Thank you so much... Sam is adorable indeed 😳 Oh yes, Fire and Ice are going to be a deadly combination 😃 But eventually Frosty is going to melt for all good reasons 😳 Glad you liked it Raji 🤗

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Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.
Awesomeee updatee tanvi

Siham 🤗 Thank you so much dear 😃

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Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: sireesha76
lovely update
astha's nick name is so cute...frosty

Thank you so much Sireesha 😳 Glad you liked it 😊

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Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: hp_2006

I am totally in love with your Aastha and Shlok chemistry.. 😆 Eager to know how Shlok is going to be Miss. Frosty's Mister.

Thank you so much Naina 🤗 Shlok being Frosty's Mister will take time, sister 😆 Sam has won her heart... and she has won Sam's heart without even making any effort 😳 Mister Daddy will have to listen to his sonny boy and give in when he makes a pouty face 😳

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Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: jhumjhum
Tanvi fantabulous update 🤗 I'm living this Sam more n more he is real sweetheart that's good that Shlok tell him the truth of Swati n Sam response is so mature like it. Really Astha need someone to share her pain n Linley her life n only Shlok n Sam can complete her life. I just love Sam reply n action towards those irritating lady 😆 great job baby. Waiting for next update n see how this beautiful journey continued 😃.

Jhummy 🤗 Sam is such an adorable sweetheart, isn't he? You can't help but fall in love with a child like him 😳 Shlok decided to let Sam know the truth, for if Sam heard it from someone else, he would feel betrayed...

Aastha is yet to realize how lonely she is Jhummy... She has still not come to terms with Rishi's death... Even after a year, she waits to talk to him, feeling his presence, imagining his touch... It will take time for her to come to terms with reality ...

Sam has already begun to fill the void in her life... he made her smile, and that is a good sign 😳

Sam has already began to dislike Pam and Kriti 😆 No second thoughts or chances there 😆 If at all anything, he is going to be more blunt with them 😆

Thank you sooo much Jhummy - my gummy bear 🤗 Glad you liked it 😳