ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 86

Very beautifully written and so touching. Loved your happy ending very much.

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Thank you so much Sri for the wonderful words.

If something is meant to be no one but god himself change that. They wanted to be, god willed it to be so. There's no,stopping them now. Thank you once again for always taking the time to comment and read. Nice to have gotten to,know you as well. Thank you.

Chapter 30:

Loved the way u have explained shlok feeling...

Chapter 31:

Woww...jus wow Anu! It was an awesome fiction, very emotional along the way and I loved the last chapter especially. You have written even your romance in a very mature manner. Do I see a hint of yourself and Navi here and there? 😛. You're a good writer but then we knew it all along 😊. Considering your sense of wit and humor you should really attempt something light, breezy, and romantic the next time 😃. To be frank I am not a great fan of overtly emotional fics but yours was good! And your poems...the whole world knows u can pen great poems..they are just a great addition to your fic 😊. All in all this was a very different fic with some unexplored areas with AShlok like an abusive past and so on. Very well written without any fuss; there's a lot of clarity in your story. It's like you had the whole thing in your head charted our before you wrote, which is good 😛. And these days it doesn't happen to me like that 😆😆. A great read..welcome to the writers club and hope to read more from you 😃.

Originally posted by: .Natasha.

It was such a lovely Chapter... U ended it soo well, soo apt...

I kinda guessed it was Anjali n NA who did it, bt thank u fr nt making them negative...

As I've mentioned before in one of my comments, their concern abt their son's life is truly justifiable...

Amazing Chapter Anu, do start another FF...

For such a great writer like you, I'm sure u'll gt a lot of following, plus, do u have plans on writing books, thn pls inform me, fr hell I wouldn't miss it...

Yet again, I loved this chapter and the ff...

See u in ur nxt ff😉😃

Love,

Natasha😃

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

hey Anu,

my IC..you are as name says .. always the IC..

too good the end... it was.. I was jumping up and down...

I liked the nirma part and kids part for the key..

THE POETRY...AWE SOME AND VERY MEANING FUL..

finally the family together...

ALL IS WELL.. TOO GOOD..

just a doubt.. Im feeling the story or the FF was closed abrudptly ..why so darling???

I hate ends and tears...angry with u.. like angry bird.. but hungry for u...like the eagle with the eyes on its prey for a new writing.. or new FF...

pl talk...

Originally posted by: srilotus

Awesome fiction...great write up Anu👏

i concluded that love and devotion goes together...love here is Shlok and devotion is Astha..

Shlok's trust was the winner and Astha was also happy to see it.

Originally posted by: miac

Anu such a lovely story. .oh my u r indeed a damn good writer. .

I have to confess I skipped cha28 not because its not good but I can't bear their pain and today after reading last chap I read it...

😊

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Hi Natasha, sorry for the delay in replying to your wonderful comment, and thanks for the words of encouragement and the interest. It really meant so much to me. I'm sure you being a writer yourself knows it only too well. I said from the beginning no villain in this. Just their insecurities that almost got the best of them.

Oh! Me writing a book. That'll be the day. Anyways I'm truly touched by your generosity. Thank you for being such a wonderful reader.

On writing another, well I'm stretched for time. Will give it a thought. I enjoyed this so much. I wouldn love to start another, let's see.

Thank you my sweet girl for being the wonderful person you are.