ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 24

Originally posted by: rbb1

Omg I can't believe you stopped there, hope you post the next part soon. Astha and he or daughters are so sweet it's nice she has them as her family, I love the relationship between Shlok and Anjali I wonder if this be like that in the show one day

Originally posted by: athmi

awesome update. 👍🏼

waiting for the mystery to unveil.

tfd pm. 😊

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

Great updatee

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Thanks ray! Working on the next chapter. But with having to br the ref, mediator and negotiator to my kids most of the time not getting time to just sit calmly and type my thoughts. Kids having their summer vacations.

No MU between this mother son duo. No bad guys in this fiction. Only their fears will play spoilt sport.

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Lovely update dear...

The way u have expressed their feeling was just amazing... so cute...

Hope the mystery of astha's kids will be out soon...

will astha express her feeling to shlok or will she hide it forever...

waiting to read ur next update...

Originally posted by: rbb1

aww I'm glad your trying to write the update now sweety, I like that fact you have no negative characters in your story and the relationship Anjali and Shlok share is heart touching unlike the one in the show which is heart wrenching

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

That makes two of us. I hate Shlok being a big bully to his mom. My Shlok is a real mamas boy.

Originally posted by: rbb1

I know I stopped watching the show just because how horrible Shlok is to his mum and now Joyti is the same, only watched yesterday's episode because Neelum asked me