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sonia

@lachii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Shlok is a straight shooter. So he'll be direct with his approach, if she'd let him to be? Astha? Makes two of us. Thank you Sonia for taking time to read and comment.

the concept and the treatment is promising so i look forward to your updates...pleasure is all mine...on the other hand, thank you for treating us with sucha nice and hatke story

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sonia

@lachii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

so you are in no hurry to reveal the mystry about aastha's kids...okay okay...😃take your time...we can wait...

as for the title...i think this title suits the story well...at least the much we know...

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: lachii

the concept and the treatment is promising so i look forward to your updates...pleasure is all mine...on the other hand, thank you for treating us with sucha nice and hatke story

Thank you so much Sonia. Hatke...I like the sound of that. Will try my best to keep you enthralled. Your comments means much to me.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: lachii
so you are in no hurry to reveal the mystry about aastha's kids...okay okay...😃take your time...we can wait...
as for the title...i think this title suits the story well...at least the much we know...

Will reveal it before he goes back to Bombay. He'll need to get the answers to questions. Glad you like the new title. I like it too...

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Jane

@bm11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Anu, read all ch in one go.

I love the flow of the story very much.

A loving family welcoming in future a lonely soul.

I like the good-natured young man.

I wonder is he ready to adopt two kids...a test for any man😕

but chemistry can conquer even this, right?😉

Thank you for this story👏

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seeyali

@seeyali

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Awesome update. Can't wait for next update.

Continue soon plz.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: meerab...
That was sooo beautiful anu👏...
Really liked shlok and anjali's relationship and their conversation😛...
The way he spontaneously said ''her eyes''when anjali asked him that what he is thinking😊...that was sooo sweet...
And then astha and her daughters...damn cute thing in the whole update...
And the way you portrayed astha's feeling in the end...it was simply outstanding⭐️...
With each update i am falling in love with astha and shlok...cann't wait for their lovestory to start😃...
Update soon😉...

Thank you so much meerab. I'm deeply touched by your wonderful words. Most of all thank you for taking the time to read and not to mention comment. I'm honoured. Love story will unfold... With Shlok taking the lead of course. Will update tomorrow.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: bm11
Anu, read all ch in one go.
I love the flow of the story very much.
A loving family welcoming in future a lonely soul.
I like the good-natured young man.
I wonder is he ready to adopt two kids...a test for any man😕
but chemistry can conquer even this, right?😉

Thank you for this story👏

Thank you jane, @bold...how do you come up with lines like that.

I'm trying to up the ante with my Shlok. By the time this story is over he'll be having a set of wiings.

He'll be tested in every possible way.

Your astha almost died when she lost her baby, my astha was found when her babies were born.

She doesn't like chemistry, she's more into history and social science.

But Shlok will try and change her preferences.

Thanks jane. For the wonderful encouraging words. Means much to me.

Glad you like the story. Do keep reading and let me know your valuable thoughts.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: seeyali
Awesome update. Can't wait for next update.
Continue soon plz.

Thank you Seeyali! Really glad your enjoying the story. Will post the next chapter tomorrow.

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Omg I can't believe you stopped there, hope you post the next part soon. Astha and he or daughters are so sweet it's nice she has them as her family, I love the relationship between Shlok and Anjali I wonder if this be like that in the show one day

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