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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: ..optimist..
Hi Anu... I just now read the prologue and the first chapter! Awesome!! Loved your writing style!
Will read the other chapters soon 😊

Hi neha, no worries. When ever you get the time read it. I known how busy you must be. I'll take the compliment from you with pleasure. Really happy that you like the story. Will bewaiting to hear what you have to say? Thank you for taking the time to read.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: lively_roshani
wow intense story but why Aastha thinks that her daughter life in danger through this step

Because of what happened to her at the hands of her mothers second husband. Her step father. Remember she was molested and raped by him,

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Because of what happened to her at the hands of her mothers second husband. Her step father. Remember she was molested and raped by him,

oh yeah but Shlok is not like him

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Lovely update...

Shlok got the guts to message her...so cute...

So the mystery still continue...

waiting to know what happen in her past...

He's running out of time. He needs act now. Why wait when he's sure about his feelings. He's not gonna beat around the bush.

Yes! For a lil longer. Few more chapters. Her past other than the facts with regard to her kids has been revealed. No more secrets.

Thank you for your keen interest. Do keep reading.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: lively_roshani
oh yeah but Shlok is not like him

Yes! Of course, but she doesn't know that yet. They've just met. Thanks rosh for the comments.

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Another awesome chapter anu...👏👏👏👏
So both are feeling for each other...but astha worrified for her daughters...her bad experience of past affecting her present ...so sad...hope shlok helps her in getting over all this...😊😊😊😊
Btw shlok's message part and that ashlok hospital scene was sooo cute...😛😛😛😛😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

As usual waiting for next part...😉

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sonia

@lachii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Aww, cruel anu, I pity them both, aastha's reply was so harsh but I can totally understand her pov, poor she

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: meerab...
Another awesome chapter anu...👏
So both are feeling for each other...but astha worrified for her daughters...her bad experience of past affecting her present ...so sad...hope shlok helps her in getting over all this...😊
Btw shlok's message part and that ashlok hospital scene was sooo cute...😳

As usual waiting for next part...😉

Thank you meerab! For spending your valuable time to read my story and comment. I'm deeply touched.

Yes, her past is haunting her. Buy there are many other reasons as well. Shlok is coming at her like a freight train full throttle with out brakes. He won't be stop even if he wants to. Glad you liked the msg part. Thank you once again.do keep reading.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
awesome update...
loved it...
continue soon...

Thank you! Working on the next chapter!

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: lachii
Aww, cruel anu, I pity them both, aastha's reply was so harsh but I can totally understand her pov, poor she

You're the first to call me that. It's ok. I know it's a bad place to be in. But that's life and reality. I shall try and redeem myself in your eyes. Soon Sonia. Thank you dear friend.

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