#2 Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 19 on 96)

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Lovely update Sam...

Slowly astha and shlok friendship is rebuilding...sounds interesting...

Waiting for ur next update...

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Awesome upd.

Loved it so much.

Tfd pm.

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logambika

@.logs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

awesome yaar... especially sid-jothi scene...

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seeheeryou

@seeheeryou

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Nice update yaar..
Italian desert, ice cream totally lost hahaha
sid-jyothi's and kavya's parts were cute..
Friendship is building up between AaShlok! Waiting to see further progress in their relationship..

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Sam_15

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Nice update

Thanks for the pm

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Natasha

@.Natasha.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

The update was awesome Sam!!! Tiramisu... yum yum...

Now, who is this Aditya??? Is he like the new villain?

Ok Shlok, it was a pleasure finally meeting Astha's husband.

Because the above sentence made me feel that. Or was it just a sentence???

When Shlok thought that "Why was it so hard to believe that he could do something nice... for her?" Kinda cracked me up.When was he actually nice to her? OK maybe sometimes he tried to be...

Shlok was not jealous seeing Aastha n Aditya like I wanted...

Sid n Jyoti were good... totally cute... I loved Kavya in this...

I think NA, Anjali, Varad, Sojal, Sid Jyoti n Kavya should go out once in a while...

Aastha should stop constantly mocking Shlok...

Shlok helping Aastha was a gesture of him, n the last sentence was G-R-E-A-T...

Somewhere deep down both knew that now they have begun to walk on the road to friendship...the road which was destroyed earlier, was rebuilding again.

In total... I just loved it Sam

Edited by NatashaRia - 11 years ago

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Love the update sam. Shlok giving astha shock after shock. Is she gonna be able to survive all these. And Shlok and Tiramisu couldn't get better than that. I love tiramisu. And love Shlok. So it's a win win situ for me. Shlok in the mood to be bit kamina as well even better. He's extended the olive branch. What is she gonna do with it. Thank you for the very long update.

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Zehra Fatima Chohan

@Zehra.

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

I'll be the last one to say but Congratulationsss for the new thread 🤗

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Zehra Fatima Chohan

@Zehra.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

CHAPTER 10 !!!
First of all sorryy for being late as usual !!! And now coming to the update 😉
I can summarize this update as New Beginnings !!! Where Shlok has decided to take a step forward, Astha has decided to step out and secure her future ...
The philosophical touch to the first para is just outstanding ... It describes their relationship perfectlyy !!!
It was so sad that he always used to hurt her !! Sometimes intentionally and sometimes unintentionally ...
Finally Mr. Shlok realises that he has crossed his limits .. Arghh why is he such a crackpot ??? 😆
I jussttt loved the terrace scene ... Beautifully written!! Its true that sometimes what words cannot do, silence does 😳 it made Shlok realise that things can be made better and for that he has to take the first step !!
Astha falling into Shlok's arms The cvs actually need to take a round of the FF's here when it comes to Ashlok romance !!! Even if the scene has to be for a few minutes 😆
Shlok eavesdropping 😛 but no use 😉
Okay for once i thought that Shlok would reply to Astha's words being MR. SHLOK AGNIHOTRI but he didn't!! What a change 😉
Loved the way he was now looking at things !!
I missed their usual nok-jhok but lovedd this update ❤️

Precap: i'm falling in love wid this Shlok !!! Can totally imagine Shlok saying the dialogues 😆

Update soon Sam and once again sorry !!
This time sorry for writing such a long and boring comment ... Ebp 😃 I try to make it short but kyaa karoon ?? Can't stop myself 😆

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