#2 Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 19 on 96) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Honestly throughout the update my concentration was o the chocolate syrup and sponges...nly came to senses jaw-droppingly when Shlok licked the cream on his finger... Haha...so what did that wonder? My writing skills or the idea of this dessert? 😉😆

read that part twice in disbelief...he was truly tranced! Glad Astha ddint run away after that attack😆She was too shocked and busy blushing to make her legs work 😉
they are getting comfortable with the silence thats good..nd woow I love sid n Jo...so cute and romantic! theres an innocence in their relationship being childhood sweethearts! The whole ensemble is just soo lovable... Thanks...I loved writing about this part and hoped that others would love reading just as much. I have been wanting to write about Sid/Jo for some time but didn't know how to bring them in within the story of Ashlok. Glad u loved it.
now m letting the tiramisu give me a break😆 Ok so it was the idea of the dessert 😆

It was soo realistic when Astha didint let kavya handle the water...remember my mum scolding me so many times for that reason😆 Actually something like this had happened to me too a couple of times when I was small.
Nothing much to say As you get better than yourself with every update👏 Really? I am flattered! 😳
The cream licking part was a bouncer on me☺️ Hehe.. 😆😆
I completely forgot abt Aditya...is he here to do something more? He was being sarcastic to Shlok isnt it?😕 Well about Aditya, I haven't quite decided tbh. Got a few ideas. Depends on how the story shapes up. Let's see 😊 And no he wasn't really being sarcastic. Why did u think so? From his communication with Shlok, I tried to give this impression that he being her old class-fellow was aware of her engagement with him. And because he knows what a great girl she is, he thinks Shlok is very lucky to have her as his wife.


Thank you so much Aisha for ur wonderful comment 😃😳 I can't believe u have been continuously leaving me long comments since last few updates. I know you don't usually do that so love you for that 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Thanks Edna 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: srilotus

such nice update😊

thanks for pm

Thanks Sri 😃😳
You are welcome 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandu96

Wow it s really nice ..so jyoti and sid had gone out with kaavya. Ashlok n home alone and cant belive tht shlok is helping astha tht too in kitchen... 😉 asusual loved ur update ...

Thank you so much Nandu 🤗 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Sladjana 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARIANA_

CVs should take ideas from you 😳

Hahaha...the expert CVs should take ideas from an amateur average writer like me? 🤣 Looks like our CVs have really hit the rock bottom 😆😆😆
Btw love ur siggies..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rainbow01

Interesting. Thanks for the pm.😊

Thanks...you are welcome 😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks 😃
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Thanks Neelum 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_avi

Awesome update Sam...loved it...love is in air...sidthi love story is really cute and for once I wanted more of their romance too...
And the dessert ...hmm actually my mouth watering...
Kitchen romance was hot...the tention between them written very well...
Shlok wants their lost friendship back...friendship only?? 😉
On the whole super update...and thanks for the pm 😛

Thank you so much Priya 😳 I'm glad u enjoyed it 😃😳
I didn't intend to explore Sidthi's relationship much but I loved writing about them so much and plus the response from everyone just compels me to change my plans. I will try to bring in Sidthi into the story again while still keeping the main focus on Ashlok 😃
Haha...yes for now he only wants friendship 😆 One step at a time...after all friendship is the first stage towards love 😉😃
You are welcome dear 🤗


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