Be Intehaan:The Tale of Limitless love Ashlok SS Last part - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
omg 😲...abhay's car hits astha...plz ...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Be Intehaan:The Tale of Limitless love Part 9
Shlok ran towards Aastha who was lying in blood pool.
He placed her head on his lap and wept:Aastha!
Aastha couldn't speak:Shlo...
S:I will not let anything happen to you.
Aastha fell unconscious.He cried.
Shlok looked at the car which hit her.He was shocked to see Abhay looking at him with an evil smile.
Shlok burned with anger,but he had to bury his anger as his priority was to save Aastha.
Abhay's car left.
Swati and Niranjan came to see what was happening between Shlok and Aastha.They were shocked to see the sight.
NA:Shlok,what happened?
Shlok cried.
S:Baba,i want to take Aastha to the hospital.
NA:Sure beta.
Niranjan,Shlok and Swati took Aastha to the hospital.
All were tense about Aastha's operation.
Swati wept:Shlok,nothing would happen to Aastha.I am praying.Because I know that your happiness is Aastha.
Shlok wept.
Swa:How did this accident take place?
S:It was a murder attempt on Aastha by her husband Abhay.
Swati was shocked:What?
Shlok told her everything.
Swa:Such a cunning cruel person.
Swati rang up the Police.

Avdhoot and Kalindi came running.
The doctor came:Operation is quite successful and she s out of danger now.
All were relieved.
Shlok became very emotional.Shlok saw Avdhoot and Kalindi after 4 years.
They looked at each other emotional.
Kalindi:How are you Shlok beta?
S:Now I am fine.
Avdhoot:We did a big mistake by getting our daughter married to that scoundrel.When Swati rang up and told us everything we couldn't believe it.It's our fault.
S:No.You all are not at fault.You all chose Abhay for Aastha's best.But things turned out to be different.
Kal:But it's our mistake that we were so careless that we didn't see your love for Aastha 4 years back.
Shlok realized that his love is disclosed before Aastha's parents.He didn't know how to face them.
Avd:Shlok,thanks a lot for saving our daughter.We owe to you.


When Aastha opened her eyes she saw Shlok sitting near her.
A:Shlok!
He held her hand:Aastha!
They shared an emotional eye lock.

Suno na kahe kya suno na
Dil mera suno na, suno zara
Teri baahon mein mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri baahon mein hogi subah

Swati came.She smiled though tears.She wiped her tears.
Swa:Now no one will come between you guys.
S:Abhay?
Swa:No need to worry about him.I had rung up police to inform them that Abhay tried to murder Aastha.
Aastha was shocked:What?
Swa:Yes Aastha.Abhay only hit you with the car.
Aastha wept.
Swa:Police found him.But Abhay tried to run away from them.So he got shot by the police.He got his punishment.So a peaceful life is awaiting for you both.
Shlok-Aastha looked at each other emotionally.
Shlok held her hand close to his heart with an emotional smile.Aastha smiled emotionally.

Be-intehaan
Yoon pyaar kar be-intehaa
Dekha karoon saari umar
Tere nishaan be-intehan
Koi kasar naa rahe, meri khabar na rahe
Chhoo le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan(Race 2).

Shlok-Aastha got married after 1 month.

Both of them felt they were in heaven.



At the wedding,somebody called Swati:Hi Swati!
Swati looked at that person.
She couldn't believe her eyes.

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow... U thought its going to get ovr
nyc update... Waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's not the end
That's good
By the way I have watched the tamil film ''aanandha thamdawam'' which was taken based on the novel''pirivom santhipom''that you have mentioned above
The climax was heroine's (aastha) death. I was really afraid thinking that this story would turn out to be the same climax
Thank god you ended it with a happy ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc update... gud tat evryting s back 2 normal nw...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update Jasmine...I knew u wudn't let anything happen to astha 😉 after all ashlok are supposed to end up together, right? 😛 And what a surprise it was when u got them married!! That's why I thought may be u were gonna end this fiction here and this might be ur last update 😆😆 But I am gald to know it isn't so 😃 I liked the little twist u brought in the end 😆
Will be waiting for ur next update!! 😳
Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!!!😛
ashlok married..😳
who called swati... new entry or i guess its sid the one with whom swati had gone for prom night party...

continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
its not ended.one more part is left

Originally posted by: Meilliures

It's not the end

That's good
By the way I have watched the tamil film ''aanandha thamdawam'' which was taken based on the novel''pirivom santhipom''that you have mentioned above
The climax was heroine's (aastha) death. I was really afraid thinking that this story would turn out to be the same climax
Thank god you ended it with a happy ending

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update thanks 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!! Lovely!! Aashlok married to each other 😃
You are quite fast 😉
Waiting for the last part 😊

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