Be Intehaan:The Tale of Limitless love Ashlok SS Last part - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely wedding. Love found a way to put these hearts together. Shlok's was always Aastha no matter the divide. Her husband received what he deserved. Shlok and Aastha was a truly sweet story of love that is limitless...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update. Thanks for pm
Finally abhay is dead 😆
Ashlok together 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
but don't tell this is the end

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Posted: 11 years ago
really loved this story too gd im happy that at the end abhay got his punishment and swati knew that ashlok are made for each other happy that they got married at the end but who called swat and y did she seem shocked is it someone who liked her in the past do update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Actually tat also come has movie name s "aandha thandavam" starring siddharth, tamannah, rukmani. Actualy in tat film the character aastha in ur story s played by tamannah. But in tat film she will die in front of him after tat he marry rukmani tat s in ur story swathi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Be Intehaan:The Tale of Limitless love Part 10
Swati was surprised:Sid!
He:Yes...me...Siddarth Malhotra.
Swa:What a pleasant surprise!
Sid:Did you ever remember me in last 4 years?
Swati smiled:Of course Sid.Some times I used to think of the fun we had in college.
Sid:Some times only you used to remember me.But I used to remember you every moment.

I thank all my readers for reading n commenting on my 1st Ashlok SS.This is the last part of my ss.So plz give a detailed comment on the last part.Plz write ur fav scene & fav character too
Swati became serious seeing him serious.
Sid smiled:The prom night dance we had was special.I can never forget it.
Swati thought:During college days I had felt that Sid had feelings for me.But still he has feelings for me?The way he talks to me is like that.

Flash back...

Siddarth searched for Swati on the farewell day.
Finally he found her with Shlok.He was heart broken and decided not to propose her.He didn't know that Swati was only comforting Shlok when he was heart broken due to Aastha's exit.


Present...

Aastha was dressed in yellow saree at night.
Slok entered the room.Her heart beat fast.He stood close to her keeping his arms on her shoulder.She felt different.

Suno na kahe kya suno na
Dil mera suno na, suno zara
Teri baahon mein mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri baahon mein hogi subah

He pulled her closer.He carried her in his arms and placed her on the bed.

They shared a passionate eye lock.

Be-intehaan
Yoon pyaar kar be-intehaa
Dekha karoon saari umar
Tere nishaan be-intehan



He rubbed her skin with his.She closed her eyes in burning passion.
They lay closer to each other feeling each others body heat.

Koi kasar naa rahe, meri khabar na rahe
Chhoo le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan



After a week...

Shlok-Aastha are in a beautiful boat decorated with flowers.

They looked at each other deeply with a romantic smile.

Jab saanson mein teri saansein ghuli toh
Phir sulagne lage
Ehsaas mere mujhse kehne lage

She splashed water on his face.

S:Aastha,what are you doing?
A:This is our honeymoon Shlok.This is the time to be romantic.

Haan baahon mein teri aa ke jahaan do
Yoon simatne lage
Sailaab jaise koi behne lage

He extended his hand to touch her.She blushed.

He held her chin.

S:Aastha,not only honeymoon,every moment with you is romantic.Because I love you.

A:I love you too Shlok.

They both became emotional.

Khoya hoon main aagosh mein
Tu bhi kahaan ab hosh mein
Makhmali raat ki ho naa subah



They had a beautiful eye lock.

Be intehaan, be-intehaan
Yoon pyar kar be-inteha


After a year...
Shlok:Aastha,get ready fast.It is Swati and Sid's wedding.We need to reach early.

A:Shlok,I am almost ready.Just one second.
She stood in front of the mirror.
He saw her struggling hard to put her blouse's hook.

He tried to put the button hook of her blouse.

She felt a strange sensation passing through her body when his finger rubbed her skin.

Gustakhiyan kuch tum karo
Kuch hum karein is tarah

Shlok's fingers shivered seeing her bare skin.

He controlled himself seeing her milky skin which was visible through the partially backless blouse.

Sharma ke do saaye hain jo
Muh pher lein hum se yahaan

Their bodies became numb due to momentary pleasure.

Haan chhoo to liya hai ye jism tune
Rooh bhi choom le
Alfaaz bheege bheege kyun hain mere
Haan yoon choor ho ke majboor ho ke
Qatra qatra kahe
Ehsaas bheege bheege kyun hain mere

They attended Swati-Sid's wedding.
Sid smiled at Swati:Thank you Swati for accepting me as your husband.
Swa:Thank you Sid for waiting for me all these years.Otherwise I would not have been able to meet my true love.

Shlok-Aastha smiled seeing Swati-Shlok together.
Ashlok:Wish you both a happy married life.
Sid-Swati:Thank you guys.
Sid:Next week we are going for our honeymoon.Why don't you guys join us.You both can have your second honeymoon too.

S:Sorry guys.We can't join you guys.We had many honeymoons and the result is growing in Aastha's womb;our baby.So she can't travel such a long distance.
Aastha blushed.
Sid-Swati were surprised.
Swa:Aastha is going to be a mother?Congrats guys.
S:Enjoy lots of honeymoons with each other.When your honeymoon period reaches it's end our baby would have already reached our world,Aastha's and my my world.
Shlok held Aastha closer.They both smiled dreaming of their bright future.

Be inteha, be inteha
Yoon pyaar kar, be inteha
Dekha karoon saari umar
Tere nishan, be-intehaan
Koi kasar na rahe, meri khabar na rahe
Chhoo le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan
(Race2).

The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

superb!!! just superb story!!!
loved it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great story. Happy ending 😃
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful ending to the story.
Swathi also gt married to sid and aastha shlok became parents.
Such an nice story i luvd it.

At the end everything ends well.
Luking fwd to ur nxt stry. I hope u wnt disappoint us.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story
superb ending
loved it
finally swathi and Sid married
ashlok becoming parents

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