Be Intehaan:The Tale of Limitless love Ashlok SS Last part - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Jasmine...great work dear 👏
Just read all the updates and I must say it is very interesting the way u r progressing the story.
Shlok and Astha had a really cute love story...the way they made got to know each other, became friends and then turned into lovers was really sweet. But it was sad to know Astha got married to someone else in spite of being in love with Shlok 😔 and poor shlok was heart broken 😭 Clearly he still harbours feelings for her even after so many years. Hope they can be together soon once again 😳
That Abhay is disgusting.. 😡 really hate him!! How cruel he was with poor Astha 😭 Hope Shlok can save her somehow 😳 And teach Abhay a lesson 😡
Its nice to see Swati's character as positive. Something different!! 👍🏼
Will wait for next update! Plz can u pm me every time u update? Thanks 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read last 2 updates..
sorry fr astha..she dint trust shlok n abhay beat her up that🤬 sure shlok wl cm back to check on astha😳 cnt soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Be Intehaan:The Tale of Limitless love Part 8
Aastha became weaker and weaker due to lack of food and stay in the suffocated room.
She fell asleep.
The next evening only Abhay brought her food.
Abhay shouted:Aastha,open your eyes.
Slowly in fear Aastha opened her eyes.
He removed the cloth from her mouth.She was very weak.
A:Abhay!


Abh:Don't utter a word.I am releasing you now only because if you don't eat food now you will die.
A:If I die or not what difference does it make for you?You hate me.Right?
Abh:Ya,I hate you.But if you die I will be blamed and I don't want to be in jail.Onl because of that I am giving you food.Understand?
Aastha felt very upset.
He untied her.
Abh:Eat food.
A:I don't want food.
Abhay shouted at her:Eat...

Hearing him shout she got scared and started eating shedding tears.
Abh:Go to your room and change your attire.It's stinking.
Painfully she walked to her room and changed her saree.
She felt guilty for breaking her friendship with Shlok.
A:How much pain did I give Shlok who tried only to help me!
Tears rolled down her cheeks.
Suddenly she thought:I need to apologize to Shlok.Otherwise I will die out of guilt.
She saw Abhay going inside the room getting an official call.Taking advantage of the circumstance she ran out.
When Abhay came out he was shocked to find no trace of Aastha.
Abh:Oh!Aastha escaped.What will happen now?
He was very angry:She must be going to visit that bloody Shlok.

Aastha struggled hard to run.She caught an auto and went to Shlok's house.
She told the watch man:I want to meet Shlok Agnihotri.
Watch man:He is not here.Tonight is his wedding.he has left to the wedding place.
A:Oh!I forgot that tonight is Shlok's wedding.
She rushed to Shlok's wedding place.
Shlok was sitting on the mandap.His eyes were wet due to the bitter experience he had with Aastha.Swati was brought to the mandap in the bridal attire.She was blushing while Shlok was lost in painful thoughts.
Suddenly Aastha reached there.
A:Shlok!
All were shocked.Shlok raised his eye brows and looked at Aastha.
She looked weak.Her cheeks were pink.Her hands were pink.Beaten marks were there on her body.Shlok's eyes fell on them.
Shlok was shocked:Aastha!
Aastha wept:Shlok...I want to talk to you.
Niranjan:What nonsense!Shlok's wedding is going to take place.
A:I know.I just need 5 minutes.It's very important.That's why.
Swati was very angry:Aastha,what is going to happen here also is very important.Our wedding.Is your conversation with Shlok more important than our wedding?
Aastha did not know what to say.
Swa:You had dumped Shlok.Right?Now you are married too.Then why are you after Shlok now?
Aastha was very upset.Tears rolled down her cheeks.
A:Sorry.I will go now.
She looked at Shlok painfully:Wish you a happy married life Shlok.
She ran out crying.
Shlok was helpless.His eyes were wet.
Panditji:It's time for the ceremonies to start.
Swati smiled.
Shlok's mind was full of the pink marks he saw on Aastha's body.
S:Nooo...
All were shocked.
Niranjan:Shlok!
Swati:Shlok,what happened?
S:Swati,I need to go to Aastha now.
All were shocked.
NA:Shlok,do you know what you are saying?Are you out of senses?

S:I feel Aastha needs me now.She is in trouble.That's why she came in search of me.I need to be with her now.
Swati shed tears.
Swa:You proved that Aastha is more important than our wedding.
S:I am sorry Swati.
Swa:Even after years her pain is your pain.You care for her the most.Your love for Aastha is limitless Shlok.But what has fate played for you?I don't understand.

S:I have no answer Swati.All I know is I have to go to Aastha now.Sorry.
NA:Shlok!
Shlok ran out.
Aastha was walking slowly like a lost woman on the road.
Shlok saw her from a long distance and ran fast towards her.
S:Aastha!

She looked at him in disbelief.

She became emotional:Shlok!
Shlok held her hand:Aastha...what happened?
A:Nothing Shlok.I came here to apologize to you.I misunderstood you.I am sorry Shlok..Only if you forgive me I will get peace of mind.Shlok...won't you forgive me?Or do you hate me?I deserve your hatred.Because that much pain I gave you.
Shlok cupped her face in his hands and looked at her with his teary eyes.
S:How can I hate you?Will I ever be able to hate you?How could you think like that?Again you are misunderstanding me.
Aastha's eyes were full of tears:Shlok!

S:I can only love you.
Aastha couldn't believe it.
He wiped her tears.
They had an emotional passionate eye lock.
S:Tell me Aastha,what happened?
A:Nothing Shlok.
S:Aastha,don't lie.Don't think I didn't notice the marks on your body.
That time only she noticed the marks on her body.
Shlok looked at Aastha's marks.
S:Howdid your body get hurt?
Tell Aastha...did Abhay...?
Aastha burst into tears.
A:He is bad Shlok.When I came to know of his dirty truth he...he was very cruel to me.

Aastha explained everything to him.
Shlok was shocked.He fumed with anger.
S:How dare he hurt you?I will not leave him.

He embraced her.
S:No Aastha.He will not touch you.I will not let him do anything.
She felt safe in his arms.She cried.

Suddenly she remembered Swati in the bridal attire.
So suddenly she moved away from him.
A:Shlok,thanks for forgiving me.Now I am going.Go back.Swati is waiting for you there.
S:No Aastha.I will not leave you in this condition and go back.
A:Come to senses Shlok.Tonight is your wedding.

S:I don't care.
A:How can you talk like this Shlok?There in bridal attire Swati is waiting for you.But you are saying that you don't bother about your wedding.How can you think like this Shlok?

S:Because for me you matter the most.Because I love you.
Aastha couldn't believe her ears.Even after dumping him twice he still loves her.
Aastha controlled her tears.
A:But we are not destined to be together.Our ways differ.So you go back to Swati and I am going.

S:No Aastha.You can't go away from me.
Aastha wept.
A:No I need to go away from you.I don't deserve you.I need to get punished for ditching you for that heartless man.

S:No Aastha.
A:Please leave me Shlok.I have to go.
S:Where are you going?You are not safe.
A:Don't worry about me Shlok.I am going to my parents.I will be protected by them.
S:But Aastha...

Aastha held his hand:I gave you a lot of pain by leaving you.You know how much pain you had when I left you.Knowing that pain you should not give that pain to Swati by leaving her alone.

Shlok shed tears.
S:Aastha...
Aastha left his hand and walked.Shlok looked at her going painfully.Abhay in a car was watching them together angrily.
He drove the car rashly towards Aastha.Aastha was hit terribly by Abhay's car.
Shlok screamed:Aasthaaa!



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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
abhya hit astha with the car
continue soon
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres..
Awesome update!! 👍🏼
Was glad to know that Astha was able to escape from Abhay and reach to Shlok on time...but it is so shocking and sad to know she met with an accident 😲😭
That rat Abhay is so... 😡😡😡 Hope Shlok teaches him a lesson and punish him for his deeds 😡
Continue soon...I am eager to know how Shlok will save Astha now and will he find out that Abhay tried to kill her? 🤔 😊

P.s. Sorry for the late response!! 😳
Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome.. LOve it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..
Abhay is gonna be soo dead...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
loved it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update. Astha safe and wedding halted. What's next. Love the effect of the pictures. Very well edited. Thanks for the pm.
Edited by Anukalu - 11 years ago

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