OS Jaan ka Dushman *UPDATED PART 9 PG19*

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

I hope Astha can escape

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First_Light

@First_Light

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

O wow! What a cliffhanger! The suspense is killing me...pls update soon!

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Hash

@Celestia3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

swathi...😡...she is going to kill astha...where is aastha's messiha?

plz continue soon

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...Ayesha...

@xayeshax

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Woww Aditi is soo cruel Hope Shlok reaches Astha on time and saves her😛 Loved the update👏👏 Do update soon😊

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: xayeshax
Woww Aditi is soo cruelHope Shlok reaches Astha on time and saves her😛Loved the update👏👏Do update soon😊

u here too😃

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...Ayesha...

@xayeshax

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Aishaa3
u here too😃

hahah yesss, seems like u followed me here! check jeeni's thread😆

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Harjinder

@mizzdesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Working on the next update as it will be the conclusion of this story but I am having a hard time giving the story the proper ending it deserves because every time I sit to write I always get interrupted, I promise to have the update up as soon as I can,I am really sorry for the delay😳

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: mizzdesi
<font color="#FF00FF"><font size="3">Working on the next update as it will be the conclusion of this story but I am having a hard time giving the story the proper ending it deserves because every time I sit to write I always get interrupted, I promise to have the update up as soon as I can,I am really sorry for the delay😳</font></font>

its k😃