SS: BEING A COUPLE PART-12 (Last Part ) UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the update. So the fun begins. Hope u'll update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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agla pdaav mumbai.. lovely.. dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update👏 continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lvng ths lively agnihotri family😃cnt wait fr next😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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just read part 2 and 3 and its a nice story...mumbai is going to be interesting...i like that they both like each other and the families get along...looking forward to more updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update yaar... especially that amoeba roll was awesome...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok so both of dem are going to stay together in mumbai
ab mazaa ayega
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for your comments...
Keep encouraging me through your comments...
PART-4

Aastha and Shlok enter their Mumbai house...

Aastha: it has been a long time...since I've been here...
Shlok brings their bags...
They go to upstairs...
Shlok: The right side room will be yours...and the left side room will be mine...if any of or family members come we will stay in the same room...
Aastha: Done...ok...I''ll perpare the dinner...
Shlok: No need...you must be tired...I have already ordered food...
They have their dinner ...
Shlok:Wake up and get ready early...for few days I'll drop you...

In the morning...
Aastha and Shlok get ready and leave for the college...
Shlok stops the car at the end of the street...
Shlok: I dont want others to know...who you are ?...Get down from the car and walk...wait for me in the evening here...
Aastha: What the...!! 😕😕Ok...fyn...

Shlok leaves...Aastha started walking...
The person going before her dropped her pusre...Aastha helped her...
Gauri: Oh hi...Thank you...I'm gauri...
Aastha: I'm Aastha...
Gauri: Are you new here...?
Aastha: Yes...
Gauri:Oh..welcome...come lets go...😛😛😛

Inside the college...

Karan was playing with his bat...
Anshuman: Be careful...yaar...what if it hits somebody...
Karan: So what...nothing will happen.it's just a ball...and who dares to question me in this college...

Aastha and Gauri enter the college...
Aastha sees a rose plant in a pot...
Aastha: How beautiful these roses are...?
Suddenly a ball comes n hits the pot...the pot falls n breaks...Mud from the pot hits Aastha's eyes...
Aastha:aha...
Karan: cant you see...?😡😡He picked the ball n was about to leave...
Aastha: What a person you are...? It was your mistake...And you dont care of even asking sorry also...😡
Gauri: Aastha...come we will go...you dont know who he is...?
Aastha:No Gauri...Whomever it may be...? What he did is wrong...?
Karan: How dare you...? I..I should ask sorry.that too to a silly girl like you...Do you know whom I'm...?😡😡
Aastha: Hai ...you...You dont know who I'm...I'm Aastha kir...(Aastha stopped for a minute...)...I'm Aastha...better be careful...
(Saying this Aastha left the place...)
Karan: How dare she...? how dare she insult me like this...?😡😡
Only one month...Wait n watch Ms.Aastha...you will be out of this college within one month...

Shlok's cabin...
Suresh: Sir, you have got a letter...
Shlok: What is it...? (He opens it...) Oh wow...one of our students have got selected in that DSF intership...they need to attend training from

next week...in Mumbai...Who is that lucky one...? OMG it's Aastha...Great...finally drama queeb has done somthing useful ih her

life...Put this in notice board...
Suresh:Ok..sir...

Anshuman runs n comes to Karan...
Anshuman: Hey Karan...you have missed that internship...
Karan: But how could it be...? I was perfect for that...I scored good in aptitude test, I'm good at academic and sports...Wait then who got that opportunity...
Anshuman: Aastha...Aastha Kirloskar from Pune institute...the one who we saw in the morning...
Karan: What...? I wont leave her...😡😡😡
Anshuman: It's time let us leave for the class...

In the class...
Karan enters the class n is shocked to see Aastha in the same class...

Aastha n karan share a cold stare...
Professor enters...
Prof: Good morning students...Let us start with our today's class...Ok...can anybody solve this problem...?
Karan lifts his hands and solves the problem in few seconds...
Prof: Very Good...
Aastha also lifts her hands...: Sir this problem can be solved in much easier way also...
Aastha comes down and solves the problem in much more simpler way...
Prof: Excellent...😊😊
Karan gets angry seeing this...😡😡
Karan: This is it Aastha... you are going to pay for it very soon...

In the evening...
Shlok: How was your day...?
Aastha: Good...yours...?
Shlok: Very bad...as I saw your face early morning...
Aastha stares at him...
Shlok: I know I'm handsome...but dont look at me like that...I feel very shy...
Aastha throws the pillows from the sofa...
They have a cute pillow fight...😳

Two days later...In the shopping mall...
Gauri: Thank you so much Aastha...for gifting me that salwar...
Aastha: We are friends...Dont say these...
They were about to cross the road and sees two persons crossing the road without noticing a truch approaching them...
Aastha runs and pushes them aside...
All three fall down...
Gauri: Aastha ...are you okay...?...Karan...
Aastha: What ...Karan...?
Aastha gets up and looks the two persons...
Gauri: It's Karan and his brother...
Aastha: Come we must take them to the hospital...

In the hospital:
Vikram: Thank you very much for saving my brother and me...
Aastha: That's Ok...Take care...
Vikram: As soon as Karan gets his unconsciuos we will get discharged..you people go home.it's already very late...

In the house:
Shlok: Where did this girl go...? She lost her way...or someone might kidnapped her...
No No if she is kidnapped...the kidnappers will release her within few minutes..because of her talkative nature...where is she...?😆
Door bell rings...

Shlok: You...where were you...what ...what is this injury on your head...?😲😲😲
Aastha: wo.wo actually...
Shlok: Wait...come in first...
He gives her water...She narrates the entire story...
Shlok: Thank God...Okay.come take rest...wait what about the tablets,...
Aastha: Shlok no...you know na I hate tablets...
Aastha started running...Shlok followed her with tablet and water...😆😆
Aastha run into her room...She stood on the bed n was screaming...
Shlok caught her and both fell on the bed...They started Laughing.😛😛😛..Shlok found the opportunity n fed the tablets to her forcefully...
Aastha:Yaak...no...Shlok I hate you...😡😡..
Shlok: Thank you...Gud night...😉

After sometime...
Mehta mansion...
Vikram: It was Aastha who saved you...
Karan: What...? she dont even know how to save...see because of her...my right elbow has got fractured...i wont be able to play the badminton
tournament now...It's all because of you...Aastha I wont spare you...

Agnihotri mansion...
Shlok sees Aastha Sleeping...
Shlok: Till Aastha is here...she is my responsibilty...I have to take care of her...

Karan has decided to take revenge from Aastha...whereas
Shlok has decided to be a wall saving Aastha from all problems...

Will see you in next part...where Aastha and Karan become friends...and Shlok will start realising that he is in love with Aastha...

I hope you all like the entry of new character Karan...
Plz do Comment ...



Edited by Harshraaj - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
seems like karan will pretend to be nice to aastha and then take revenge, oh well at least that will bring shlock closer to her...please add me to your pm list
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a lovely update. To the point. No messing around. So Shlok to be the jealous hubby, good. Do update soon.

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