SS: BEING A COUPLE PART-12 (Last Part ) UPDATED - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok so karan wants to take revenge
nd shlok is planning for a film with astha
do update soon
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PART -6

Karan: So Aastha...today I'll give you treat ...I'll take you to the best restuarant in Mumbai...😊😊
Aastha smiles and her phone rings...It's Shlok...
Aastha:Excuse me... Hello...Shlok...
Shlok: Guess what...? I have booked tickets for SRK film...
Aastha gets excited...😛
Aastha: Really...
Shlok: Come soon...Bye...
Aastha: Karan...wo Actually...Not today..We will go another day...Plz...
Karan: Ok...fyn...(Must wait for another day...)
(Aastha goes home...)
Aastha n Shlok get ready and leave for movie...

In the theatre...
Shlok is lost in Aastha...He admires her whenever she laughs,cries watching the movie...😳.
Whereas Aastha was enjoying the movie to the core without even noticing that Shlok is looking at her...😳
After watching movie...
Aastha: No one can substitute SRK...(She admires him...) How he delivers the dialogue...how romantic...how handsome...🥱🥱🥱
Everybody were looking at Aastha as she was expressing ...She realises what she is doing...n feels embrassed😳😳😳 n drags him to the parking ...

After sometime...in the Shopping mall...
Karan: What to do with this Aastha...? ( I have to teach her a lesson such that she must not be able to show her face again...)(he started thinking...)
Anshu: That is Aastha-na...? n who is the guy with her...
(Karan turns to see...but he could see only Aastha...so he follows her...)
(they were not able to see the person...within some time they missed her...)
Karan: Who must be that guy...?
Anshu: Must be her friend...let's go...

A week passed by...
Karan acted as a good guy n become Aastha's good friend...
Shlok has developed his feelings still more deeper for Aastha...
Aastha changed her attitude towards Shlok...
She started sharing all the happenings to Shlok...
Shlok who considered her as talkative n chirpy...used to sit for hours listening to her...n also continued in his badminton's coaching...

Karan: Aastha ,, you know tomorrow is the badminton match...(he said it with much pain in his heart...)
Aastha consoled him...: Dont worry, everything will be alright...Come let us go to the class...

Next day...
Welcome to the Badminton match...
Today we are going to have the finals...and the winner will be selected as State player...
So our finalists pair are Siddhart and Mahi...and...and...Karan n Aastha...
Karan n Shlok is shocked to hear this...
Karan: What's happening here...?
Aastha: Karan...(Karan turns n sees Aastha dressed in sports dress...she shows him the bat...) Come let us play...
Karan: But...Aastha...you...
Aastha: You are my best friend...how can I see you in pain...? We will talk all these after winning the match...
Karan gets ready...
Shlok: So this is the reason she learnt badminton from me...This Aastha ...

The match begins...
Karan is shocked by Aastha's play...
Sid: Mahi...we should not lose in this match...that Kar...Karan who used to come behind me...now is playing opposite me...
Mahi: Ok...
Sid:Try to hit his right elbow...he wont be able to play...
Aastha notices that the ball is going to hit Karan...She strikes back with force...n falls...
Aastha: aa...aha...
Karan, Shlok n Gauri :Aasthaaa...
The match is stopped ...
Gauri: Are you Ok...?
Aastha: I got a sprain...
(She was not able to get up...)
Mahi: Oh my...my...poor kid...you are just a beginner...you are playing against us...
Mahi irritates them n leaves...
Aastha: I'll play this match...
Shlok: But Aastha...you are hurt...you wont be able to play...
Aastha: No...Sir...I will play...I have been thought to fight till the end...(She gets up with much strain...)
Aastha sees karan: Dont worry I wont let my friend down...

The match resumes...
Karan hits all the ball so that Aastha needn't strain more...😊😊
Gauri: Omg...both have same score...n only less time is there...
Anshu: God.please help us...
Last ball comes with much force...due to too much strain.Karan was not able to lift his right hand properly...Aastha notices this...this time she hits
the ball much to Mahi's shock...n Mahi misses the ball...
Shlok: Oh...yes...Aastha won...😊😊😊.

The whole ground rejoiced...😃
Shlok presented the trophy to Karan n Aastha...
Aastha: This is yours...(Karan looks on...) I learnt n played badminton only for you...
Karan's eyes is filled with tears...😭😭

Gauri: Come on...Aastha...Let us go to hospital...
Everybody leave for hospital...
Shlok: I'll take care of Aastha ...you people go...
Anshu: But Sir...I'll inform to Aastha's parents...
Karan sees Aastha through the glass window...n leaves...
Dr: Dont worry Mr.Agnihotri...she is better now...Dont make her strain more...She is more tired...She needs some rest...
Shlok comes to Aastha...
Aastha: I'm alright ...its ordinary sprain...
Shlok: Shall we leave now...
Shlok was about to pick her...But Aastha refuses...She tries to stand on her own...She is about to slip n Shlok holds her...
Shlok puts his hand on her waist n puts Aastha's hand on his shoulder...😳
Shlok: Now walk...
Aastha smiles at Shlok...They reach the car...Aastha notices the trophy in frontseat...
She reads the letter inside the trophy..."This is not mine...but yours...Thank You very much...".😭😛😉

In Karan's room...
Karan: Aastha...why did you do this...? I cheated you...but you fulfilled my wish...I'm sorry...You are my really true friend...i'm
sorry...I'll change from now onwards...I'll try to become a good man n good friend of yours...I'm sorry Aastha...😭

In Agnihotri mansion...
Shlok: Madam ...will you get down...or should I call somebody to welcome you...
Aastha gets down n smiles seeing the trophy...
Aastha: Shlok...Shlok I won...I won in my first game...I won ...I won...(Shlok smiled at her childish act...)😃😃😃
Aastha started to dance rounding Shlok...
Shlok: Wat happened...? lakta hai pagal hogi...!!😉😉
Aastha felt uneasy n she lost her herself n was about to hit the ground...Shlok held her in right moment...
Shlok: Aastha...Aastha...wake up...Aasthu...what happened...?🥱

Hope you liked it...
Do comment friends...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Nice update..whn wl astha start havng feelngs fr shlok😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Great update
Finally they won d match
N karan changed
Do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Loved d update..r u planning 4 a triangle love?!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Nice update yaar... karan is changing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
part 6

awesome update
so karan is planning revenge
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Very sorry guys...was in the hospital with my sister...
Thank God she is better now...n reached home...
Will update the next part very soon...
Really sorry ...again...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Harshraaj

Very sorry guys...was in the hospital with my sister...

Thank God she is better now...n reached home...
Will update the next part very soon...
Really sorry ...again...

k dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
you again heree😆

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