SS: BEING A COUPLE PART-12 (Last Part ) UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue soon dear...very engaging story๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by khushbuahmed12 - 11 years ago
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Awww..dat was wonderful..do continue soon!!!Really really love it!!!
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PART-2
Aastha:no...no...if you tell me to jump from a building also i will jump...but I wont marry him...
AK:Aastha we will talk to you about this as soon as you come here tomorrow...I will send car to the airport...I wont be able to come to pick you up...
Aastha:baba...baba listen to me...
AK keeps his phone...Jyoti comes to Aastha...
Jyoti:wat hpnd dr...?
Aastha tells her everything...
Jyoti:wow...from now on you will be my choti vahini...
Aastha:jo...stop it...

MUMBAI
Shlok:what did I do to you...? y are you punishing me like this...u know na what she did last month in Kavya's birthday...she mixed salt in my juice...i was neither able to drink nor spit it as baba n uncle were standing next to me sharing five minutes with her will be like hell...life longgg,...no...nahi...
Vinayak:and what about that..u did on that day...You were irritating her from the morning...so she did all these to you...ok reach here tomorrow as soon as possible...
Aastha n Shlok spend their night sleepless thinking about their marriage...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•


Next day...at the airport...
Jyoti:I have some work...Bye...
Aastha:wait I'll drop you...
Jyoti:no bye...
Aastha gets into her car and tells the driver that she will drive by herself...
Aastha's phone rings...
KK:are you still at the airport...fine...pick up Shlok also...his flight got delayed he must be cuming out of the airport...
Aastha:Kya...no way...I cant I wont... (AK cuts the phone...)
Aastha waits for Shlok near the arrival...
Shlok comes out...and sees Aastha...
Shlok's self thought (aagayi pareshaani no.1)๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Aastha's self thought(OMG lo meri pareshaani flight pakadke aagayi)๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Shlok:wat are you doing here?
Aastha:Baba told me to pick you up you
Shlok:where is jyoti?
Aastha:she had somework so she left
Shlok:chaloo...
Shlok:driver ka haan hai?
Aastha:I'm gng to drive the car...
Shlok:Omg then we will reach home next year only...no Give the keys I will drive the car.,...we will reach home in few minutes...
Aastha:ya ya in few minutes we will reach but not home but will reach Antarctica...
Shlok:you dont know about my driving skills...in driving school I used to come first..
Aastha gave a stare and said:in ur driving school competition was also held???๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Shlok:wo wo Actually,...
Aastha:leave it...this is my car so i will only drive it...be quiet n come with me...
Aastha stopped near a shop...
Shlok:now what happened...
Aastha:i need to buy something for ajju...
Aastha leaves Shlok sees the car key and smiles cunningly.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...Aastha returns...and sees the car key missing...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Aastha:where is the car key...?
Shlok:what you took it with you na...?
Aastha:no i dont remember taking it with me...
Aastha turns and gives him an angry stare...
Shlok.:whattt i didnt do anything...you know na even i have to reach home soon...
Aastha:i will search in the shop...you search here...
Aastha returns empty handed
Shlok:got the key...?(Aastha nodded no)let me try something...
Shlok acted as though he was trying to set the car...
Aastha:from when on he became a mechanic...?
Shlok:come here hold this like this I'll try to start...
Shlok goes to the car and puts the key...He ons and offs the car...Aastha thinks that really there is a problem in the car...
Shlok:Aastha push the car from behind...
Aastha:what...me...
Shlok:ya...its you...its ur car na you should only do all these...
Aastha sighed but Shlok dragged her behind...
Shlok:come on Aastha you push from behind I'll push from front๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Shlok:hip hip hurray Aastha...come on turn left...no no no right๐Ÿ˜‰
Shlok was teasing Aastha continously...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
Aastha felt irritated and lifted her head to scream at him...
there she saw Shlok playing with his mobile...and ordering her...
Aastha: Shlokkk...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Aastha with much irritation came near him...Shlok started to round the car...
Shlok: Aastha...no ...wait...listen to me...
Aastha managed to get a stone nearby...
Shlok: OMG no...( Shlok imagined Aastha like Goddess Kali with trishul...)Aastha sorry...very very sorry...
Shlok held his ears with his hands...๐Ÿ˜•
Aastha dropped the stone...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Aastha: dont you ever dare to do this to me again..chalooo
Shlok: Thank God...the road is empty...nobody didnt see me...or else wat would have happened to my image...
Shlok combed his hair neatly with his hands...and wiped the sweat from his face...


(Shlok and Aastha reached Aastha's home...)
Aastha run into the house to see Ajju...
Shlok wanted to meet his baba...
Aastha entered Ajju's room...Ajju was sighing something to Kalindi...
Kalindi took a red saree from an old trunk...
Kalindi: Aayi..this is your marriage saree na...
Ajju: I... I .wanted Aastha to wear this during her marriage...
(tears rolled down Aastha's cheeks๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...she left the place immediately...)

Shlok went to Avdhoot's room...

Niranjan: Aayi always took care of me as his own son after mom's death...i dont know how to repay her gratitude ...Thank God I now got a chance by making Aastha my bahu...
(Niranjan and Avdhoot hugged each other...)๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿฅฑ
Seeing their emotional conversation Shlok left the place...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
He went to the garden...
Their he saw Aastha weeping...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Shlok: Aasthaaa...
Aastha: I wanted to tell you something...
Shlok: even I wanted to tell you something...
Aastha: Whattt...?
Shlok: wo wo Actually I dont want to hurt Baba...and the same time I'm not happy with this marriage...sooo.
Aastha: So...?
Shlok: I know that even you are not happy with it...so for Ajju n Baba's sake we will get married...after few months we shall divorce...
Aastha: even I thought of same thing...but what will you tell them...after few months...
Shlok: we will say that...u and I different from each other so we cant live together...by this we wont hurt our parents..and as time passes by everybody will move on...
Aastha: will this work... ? we have to act in such a way... that everybody believes us...
Shlok: dont worry the day after our marriage I'll leave to Mumbai...n you will be here...we will try to sort out things later...


Friday...
(Aastha and Shlok get married...)๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Aastha n Shlok bend to Ajju to get her Aashirwaad...
Aastha (self thought...): I'm sorry Ajju...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Shlok (self thought ...): I'm sorry Baba...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Life never moves on with what we plan...Even in this story...Aastha n Shlok try to stay away from each other...but Life brings them together...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜†

to be continued...

I hope you liked it...do comment...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Liked d update!!!curious to know how will dey come together!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm loving this very much my like button not working
Edited by mayabharathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Lovely update๐Ÿ˜ณ likng the funny interactns btwn ashlok๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
oh ho so both got married
nd destiny will play its game
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome...Waiting for the next update...
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Great storyline๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Just read the two updates, im loving it๐Ÿ˜ƒdo update soon๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART--3

Kirloskar Niwas...

Aastha hugs Kalindi and cries: Aai...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญtake care...take care of baba, ajju ...Especially dont miss me...In case if you miss me...just call me...I will be here in few minutes...
Kalindi nods...
Aastha hugs Avdhoot and says: Since I'm not here...dont take of advantage...dont keep on taunting Aai...Ok...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Aastha hugs ajju.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Ajju: take care...thank you very much for fullfilling my wish...
Aastha gets into the car...She waves her hand...and started crying...๐Ÿ˜ญ
Varad( who was driving the car...): wow.Aasthu ur more beautiful even when you are crying...
Aastha smiles...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
They reach Anjali Niwas...
Anjali does the aarthi for them...
Jyoti: Welcome Aasthu...Sorry vahini...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aastha enters...
Aastha(self thought): I have come to this house many times...but today...I have a different feeling...Today I'm here as somebody's wife, somebody's bahu, somebody's devrani n somebody's vahini...

In the evening...Neighbours come to congratulate them...
Ragini ( daughter of Anjali's friend...(she hates Aastha๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก)) comes and sees Shlok sitting in the corner of the hall...doing some work in his mobile...
Ragini: Congratulations...Shlok...
Shlok: thank you...(he continued with his work...)
Ragini: It seems like you are not happy with this marriage...
Shlok stares at her...๐Ÿ˜•
Ragini: I know that you are hiding something...I even know that you dont like Aastha...who will like talkative, mischevious like her...
Shlok gets angry...๐Ÿ˜ก
Shlok: Stop it...you dont have any rights to talk about her...that too to me...just because I'm teasing her it doesnt mean that I hate her...Though she is talkative she wont talk ill about others like you.(Ragini gives him a cold stare๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ) and with her mischevious actions she wont hurt anybody...
Shlok leaves the place...
Ragini: Aastha ...I dont know what spell you do on people...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก...

In the night...
Aastha enters Shlok's room and sees it decorated...
Aastha: I'm cheating everybody...I shouldn't do this...(She hears somebody entering the room...She sees Shlok entering the room...He locks the dorr takes a pillow from the bed...)
Shlok: I'll sleep on the sofa...you sleep on the bed...Gud night...
Aastha: Gud night...( Aastha sleeps on the bed...)

In the morning...
Sojal: Where is Aastha...?
Jyoti: Come we shall go and see her...
They knock the door...
Aastha opens the door...
Aastha: I'm very sorry ...I know I'm very late but what to do...I dont know to wear a saree...so it took me long time...
Anjali enters: If you are uncomfortable with saree..you can wear salwaar even...
Aastha: No...No...Aunty...sorry...sasubhai...
Anjali: call me Aai even...
Aastha: I mean...Aai...I'll try to wear saree today alone...
Anjali: Ok.come down...soon...
Aastha cooks food for everyone...
Jyoti: Everybody please come...kana tyaar hai...
Varad: It smells good...
Shlok: I think ...aai has made some special dishes for me...
Jyoti: Aai...nahi...Aasthu prepared everything...
( Hearing the name Shlok got panicked...๐Ÿ˜•I'll eat in the hotel even...)
Vinayak held his collar from the back and dragged him to the dining table
They all sit...
Shlok: Kaka...leave me...
Varad: Why are you scared...? Dont worry it will be better than what Sojal makes...
Sojal: What did you sayyy...?๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Varad: No no...you heard it wrong...I said that your the best cook in the world...
NA,Vinayak,Shlok giggled seeing this...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Aastha serves the dishes for all...
Shlok: We are taking the biggest risk in our lives...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ...
Jyoti: Dont worry Dada...it will be better than your amoeba roll ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†which you made in school...
Everybody stared with a question in their eyes...
Varad sighed no...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Sojal: Amoeba roll...what is it...?๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿฅฑ
Shlok: Jo...no...
Jyoti: I'm sorry for hiding this from you...It happened long long ago..so long ago...It was the Annual day of our school...Aastha and I participated in the cookery competition...Both of my sweet brothers joined the compettion to irritate me...and you know what they made...?
(Saying this she started to laugh...๐Ÿ˜ƒ)
Aastha: I'll tell you...with much effort...they both made chappatis...which were amoeba in shape...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Jyoti: And you must say kaka...it was such a perfect amoeba shape...that if real amoebas see it...they might have committed suicide...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Shlok bent his head down...: I'm finished today...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Aastha: and for the stuffing inside the roll...they got golgappeys from other participants...and filled with tomato sauce,soya sauce, green chilli sauce and red chilli sauce...they placed a chappati and placed four golgappeys on it...and covered it with another chappati...๐Ÿ˜†
Jyoti: Finally judges came..and enquired about their dish...Varad Dada named it has Special saucy chappati roll...Aur Shlok Dada gave him knife. and requested him to cut the chappatis with knife and eat...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Aastha: Judge with much curiosity...got the knife...I dont know who made those strong golgappes...when the judge pressurised it...one golgappe flew in the air...and the mixture of sauces..fell into his eyes...๐Ÿ˜•
Niranjan:What...? Anjali , Sojal n Vinayak...were not able to control their laugh as Aastha n Jyoti were enacting the same way...Shlok n Varad did...๐Ÿ˜†
Jyoti:The judge screamed like anything and rushed to wash his face...n I must say...it was better for him ...because if he might are that amoeba roll...now he must in coma...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.
(Everybody started laughing holding their stomach...)๐Ÿ˜†
Shlok: Now you are happy...why did you do like this...?๐Ÿ˜ก
Jyoti: What to do Dada...at that time you two bribed us by buying ice cream n chocolates for us...but now you cant...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
Varad: Enough...it was our first time...so we did like that...
Vinayak: Ok.Ok...cool...
Everybody ate the food and praised Aastha for the dishes...

In the hall...
Everybody were seated together...and talking...Shlok's phone rings...
Shlok: What...really...Thank Thank you so much...๐Ÿ˜ŠI'll be there by the evening...
NA:What happened..? why are you so excited...?
Shlok: Baba... wo...Dadar project hume milgayi...I'm leaving now...
AA: Shlok...wait...yesterday only you got married...and today you are leaving...
NA: Anjali this is project is very important for us...Shlok pack ur things...

After some time...
Shlok gets ready to leave...He gets Aashirwaad from his parent...
NA: Shlok...we have a surprise for you...Aastha..Aastha beti come here...
Aastha comes...
NA hands her a cover and asks her to open it...Aastha gets shocked seeing this...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
AA: We know that you wanted to pursue your studies...so only Niranjanji got you transferred from Pune to Mumbai Institute...So you will be leaving now with Shlok...
Shlok doesnt no how to react...
Aastha: But aai I need to pack my bags...and all other formalities have to be done na...
Sojal: Dont worry...see here I have packed your bag...
Varad: And all the formalities are already over Aasthu...

Shlok and Aastha stared at each other...unable to react to the situation...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Vinayak: Now you both can live together in Mumbai...and will get to more about each other still more deeper...
Shlok n Aastha's self thought: ( What will I do now...?)

Finally Shlok n Aastha got into the car...to go to Mumbai...

Shlok (self thought): I never thought that I'll land in this situation...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Aastha (self thought):With whom i wanted to stay away...with the same person I'm going to live in same city n same house...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

To be continued...
Thank you for your support...
Please do comment.eagerly waiting for it...
Will see you in the next part...In MUMBAI City...

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